OS: I'm not proud of the OS title - Page 4

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

Shweta, that was gorgeous! <3 One of your best, if I do say so myself. 😃

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But as time passed, the uncomfortable street bench morphed itself into a rather comfortable couch of thought.

I noticed the light of the faint stars, the calls of the mating crickets, the whispers of the behaved wind.

All of a sudden, I was no longer a lone soul at a bus stop. Rather an observer. The surroundings being the specimen.

And thus I was not alone.

I've been thinking a lot about loneliness after the split, and maybe it was all about perspective. Loneliness would never cross the path of an observer.

Loneliness could also be considered a luxury, but in that perspective it would be referred to as solitude.

After the split, I began to see it as seclusion. A distinct separation of paths.

^Yeah, that's right. I just copied like half of the actual OS. 'Cause I can. 😎

Cause we cool like dat 😎

Anyways, I really liked this concept. Even though I usually get all depressed when the leads don't end up together, this OS made me smile. Like really, SMILE. 😳 I'm not sure why. I even read it exactly four times. 😆 It was beautiful. And I LOVE the song, so that's a big plus for me! ❤️

I'm glad :)

AWW Thanks! I'm glad it made you smile :)

And another thing, I'm so glad that you wrote another OS! 😃 I was really missing your writing. I was stalking your index and hoping you would post something new. (Not just your QH one, your MB and IPKKND ones, too! 😆) Do write more, please. I can never get enough!

Aw ahaha! LOL Thanks :) And sorry for getting back so late "I'm lazy at just about everything" (too lazy to directly quote so I'm paraphrasing it)

Wow, that got longer than I intended. Sowie? 😳

Hm.. I'll allow it this time just because I'm nice like that. LOL what do you mean sorry?

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

I loved this OS...You are the one of those writers whose words forces the readers to acknowledge the different realities and different perspectives...Everytime, after reading your work, I feel like I have learn something new...And I love the fact that even some words of yours can make me feel that, esp when many books of mine make me feel the contrary ...!!! lol

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

wow

beautifully written

your style of writing is unique and enchanting

loved it

Originally posted by: notagain

And then perception was visited by Shweta and it ended up looking like this. Breathtakingly honest. OMG NOT AGAIN! Bale bale te shaava shaava. Thanks sweetheart <3

The difference between loneliness and solitude is same as you said, difference between luxury and need. Now which is which, I think your perception will know what mine is. This part, though just a little bit in the beginning, is profound. You used 2 key concepts and made them one, Perception and being alone. They both came together with such ease. And one does not exist without other.

And then the surprise part, bff turned bf turned ex bf turned friends? 😊 So now that you wrote this one, it made me wonder, is it easier to fall in love with a good friend or become good friends after falling in love. Perspectives are so cheeky and tricky. They are the true grey, the shades of in-between. And this is why I love reading your comments, they analyze so beautifully and make me feel as though I made somewhat of a difference in someone's life. I connect. Thanks bacha <3

I love your take on perspective Shweta, down to the reference of wood floating mechanics of the titanic, the unsinkable. 😊

In the end, hope reigns, and that makes me all fuzzy and happy. 😆
<333 THAT IS IT. I LOVE YOU WOMAN.

And yeah, you need to write more often. Ahahaha.. good joke. Naw um, idk man why is everyone feeling the need to include this? I'll try.