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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone????????
I have noticed this forum is full of OS's nowadays but not a single os has been written on ranveera so i just thought to complete the gap.This is my first writing on this forum.😊

It was morning time and we see ranvi feeding grass to the lamb when veera comes down and ranvi sees her.

R: veerakdi tu aaj inni jaldi kaise uth gai

V: wo veerji bas aise hi aankh khul gai

R: koi gal nahi tu beth is kake ke saath me tere vaaste nashta bana laanda

V: aap kyu banaoge beeji ya chaiji me se koi bana layega

R: wo veera beeji aur chaiji gar par nahi hai, pados ke peend me kisi ki shaadi hai to wahi gaye hai, iss vaaste aaj tuje apne veerji ke haath ka bana nashta karna padega

V: aae gal hai to ek kaam karte hai aaj me apke vaste nashta banati hu, aur aap is kake ke saath gappe shape maro

R: veera tu kyu banayegi me bana landa

V: nahi veerji mene keh diya na aaj nashta me banungi aapke vaaste, aap bas beth ke aaj aaram karo hamesha aap kisi na kisi kaam me lage rehte ho,

Before ranvi could speak anything veera went into the kitchen, ranvi also went behind her

R: veera meri gal to sun, tuje kaha aata hai kuch banana aur tera wo kya kehte hai pasta us se pet thodi bharta hai, tune kal raat bhi theek se khana nahi khaaya tha tu ren de me tere waaste grama garam parathe bana lata hu

V: nahi veerji aaj me aapki koi gal nahi sunni naashta to me hi banungi pasta na sahi to paratha hi sahi

R: theek hai tu hi bana par menu teri madad to karne de

V: aapko meri madad karni hai na aap ek kaam karo ithe aao chalo mere saath, aura b yaha ek jagah par beth jao aur ab jab tak parathe ban nahi jaate aap yahi bethe rahoge. Ab iske aage muje aapki koi gal nahi sunni

R: oye veerakdi tu muje dant rahi hai

V: jee haa, kyu ki aap samaj hi nahi rahe, ab bilkul chup

Ranvi sat quietly and Veera went and bought the dough and started mixing water in it, ranvi was watching her little veera working in the kitchen and was very happy.

V: veerji aap to sach me chup ho gaye aapko pata hai aap na bade cute ho

R: ki kaha tune me ki hu

V: ohh hoo veerji mera matlab hai bade pyaare ho, kisi ki bhi baat aasani se maan jaate ho

R: ab tu aise daantegi to teri gal to manni padegi na

Veera started laughing out loud seeing his brothers cute expression. She completed the dough mixing and started the further process

V: veerji ek baat puchu,

R: veera tuje kab se mujse gal karne waste izazat leni padi, puch ki puchna chandi hai

V: wo veerji aapko kaise ladki pasand hai

R: ki tu ae ki puchiyasi

V: arey bada simple sa to question hai aapko kaise kudi pasand hai, aapke vyah waste

R: veera tu ki gal kar rahi hai pehle tera vyah hoga, gar par behen kuwari bethi ho to koi veer vyah kaise kar sake hai

V: veerji aap baat nu gumao mat, baatiye na aapko kaise kudi chaiye,

Ranvi gave veera a big no look

V: aise mat dekhiye aaj to me pata laga kar rahungi, humesha aap sab ke baare me sochte ho to mene socha kyu na is gar me koi aisa lau jo aapka khyal rakh sake, ab batiye apko kaise kudi chaiye warna me aaj nashta nahi karungi

R: tu na bahut jiddi ho gai hai

Veera made a cute little puppy face and once again ranvi lost in front of her veerakdi

R: mene kabhi iss baare me socha hi nahi, par ha wo jaise bhi ho meri beeji ka dhyaan rakhni chaiye unhe gar ke kaamo me haath batani chaiye, chaiji ka khyal rakhne waali ho aur meri veerakdi se bahut pyaar kare uski saheli ban kar rahe

V: dhat teri aise hai aapki pasand

R: kyu ki hogaya

V: veerji yaha bhi beeji aur chaiji aur aapka ki, koi aisi nahi jo aapke ke liye kheto me khana lekar aaye, jab aap thak kar gar aao to aapka intzaar kare aapse bahut pyaar kare,

Ranvi blushed on hearing this and veera noticed this

V: oue hoye mere veerji ko sharmana bhi aata hai

R: veera tub hi na, bas kar ab

He stood from there and went near veera

R: la ab me parathe sekna, warna teri baatein to kabhi khatam hi na ho. Nashte ki jagah ye parathe raat ke khane me milenge,

Both ranveera made the parathas and took it on the dining table

R: veerakdi tune muje to puch liya ab tu bata tuje kaisa ladka chaiye

V: muje muje to koi aisa chaiye jo...

She started to think about the qualities

R: ab bata bhi kaisa munda chaiye tuje inna kyu soch rahi hai koi hero shero chaiye ki

V: ha hero hona chaiye wo

R: kaia hero

V: bilkul mere veerji jaisa, koi waisa jise mere veerji mere liye pasand kare,

Ranvi got emotional and held veera's hand to assure her

R: me puri kosish karunga veerakdi tere liye aisa rajkumar dhundne ki jo tuje mujse bhi jyaada pyaar kare

V: hayo rabba ye me kaha phas gai

R: ki hua veera

V: veerji rabji ne aisa koi munda banaya hi nahi jo muje aapse jyaada pyaar kare iska matlab ae hua ki me zindagi par kuwari hi rahungi.

Both ranveera stared laughing and in the background ranveera song stared playing.


Please give your valuable feedbacks😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful KD šŸ‘šŸ¤—
really want more ranvi scenes šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So cute OS krupaaa...
very well done...

Ranveera Convo was so cute and Ranvi blushed hayee

Thanku for the Ranveera Os... even i hv noticed all Veeba OS,SS...
but very less are here for Ranveera and Ranvi ...

Gud work...keep it up and write more...
I liked one thing u wrote each line in d same accent like Ranveera speak in Serial... fantastic...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nicešŸ‘...loved the bond between Ranvi and Veera...
I don't watch the serial but really enjoyed your OS...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow its rely good...Ranvi Veera convo ws too cute...aww Ranvi is so cute...you are a very writer...keep it up..thanks for the PM...😊

Edited by minu_G - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well done yaar... very sweet... abb bass baldev and gunjan ka OS likhna bacha hai šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS Krupaa
So cute loved Ranvveera Convo
Ranvi is so cute
hope we see a scene like this in actual Veera too

I agree with Jas there are less Ranveera stories I will surely write one once I'm back next week
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow soo sweet yaar ..very nice ...do more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, your writing is so amazing!šŸ‘
I felt the grown-up Ranveera bond more here than I do in the the show itself (as I only started watching after the leap).

I was a super adorable story and convo they had and ranvi blushing was too cute (imaging shivin blushing from SG 😳)

seemed as if the scene could fit naturally in the show, and good job with the punjabi for ranvi espšŸ˜‰

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