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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
@ praff chalo me off tomorrow wil post all poems here lets see
but pakka this time updated AZ check it

@ janeeman 😆 enjoy enjoy
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maansee is back I know 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

@ praff chalo me off tomorrow wil post all poems here lets see

but pakka this time updated AZ check it

@ janeeman 😆 enjoy enjoy


kya enjoy darling???
mera net mujhe enjoy karne de tab na
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Maansee is back I know 😉


but comment kaha haiii?????????
Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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total 10 poems iskeliye thread jaroori hain kya????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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updating my poem here any one waiting??????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congooo Baby!!!!!!!!!!!!! ths gonna rock fr sure!!!!!!!
Lv U
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sparkle's "Sagar Ke Moti"



Banner by my praff aka reachsky_2011

Thank you soo much




Banner by my jadu aka maya rhea

Thank you soo much love you jadu










Hello maaneetians here you go

My 1st poem actually it is translation of Telugu song

Pranam lo Pranam ga

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YbumHxxp_F4

Praff asked me to translate that there my journey stared as poet

My sam( my friend who stays with me) also get amazed with this poem

Hope you all will also love it

It is much emotional poem so don't curse me if you guys cried at end ok



Pranam lo Pranam ga




Soul within the soul

Silence within the words I am saying it

If it is pain or anything with burden

I am going away from you

The dream which you got that day the story which you listened yesterday

Won't come with you tomorrow

In this way with disappointment

Crossing my destination

Changing my places

I am going away from you

My heart won't obey this

Soul within the soul

Silence within the words I am saying it

If it is pain or anything with burden

I am going away from you

The dream which you got that day the story which you listened yesterday

Won't come with you tomorrow

In this way with disappointment

Crossing my destination

Changing my places

I am going away from you

My heart won't obey this

Soul within the soul

Silence within the words I am saying it

Friendship is mine love is mine

All these betrayals is also mine

Eyes are mine fingers are mine

And the tears are also mine only

Mistake is mine punishment is also mine only

I cont escape from this

In this desert in this storm I was getting wet and dry

I can't see the end and was moving against flow

Soul within the soul

Silence within the words I am saying it

Game is mine winning is mine

Unexpected loss is also mine

Words were mine reply is mine

I reminded like question at lost

It's my fate with my own hands

I myself rewritten that

On my past like a tomb changing my direction

Changing my emotions I am living like this

Soul within the soul silence within the words I am saying it

On my past like a tomb changing my direction

Changing my emotions I am living like this





I know there are many grammatical mistakes and all

It's my 1st poem which I have written long back

So not sure how it came







This poem is for you praff

Your poo




Sparkle

Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yay finally a thread I can read them yuppie
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

yay finally a thread I can read them yuppie


updated poem check it 😉

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