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Shiv-Anupam
Anupam:Are Shiv kis soch mein ho?
Shiv:Dada aaj main ek bade uljhan mein fasa hua hoon aur mujhe aapki salah ki zarurat hai
Anupam:Haan bolo!
Shiv tells anupam everything abot their marriage,suhaagrat,their hatred,the jungle incident,their nite at Pink Candles and also how he startd liking Gauri
Shiv:Ab aap hi bataaiye dada main kya karun.Gauri mujhe pasand hai par main use pyaar nahin karta.Aur main use khona bhi nahin chahta.
Anupam:Achha to yeh baat hai.Thik hai.Main tumhe jo kuchh v bataoonga ek hafte k baad bataunga
Shiv:EK HAFTA.
Anupam:Haan ek hafta.
Shiv(helplessly):Par dada
Anupam leaves.
As soon as Anupam leaves Gauri enters with a serious look
Shiv:Kya hua Gauri?Itni upset kyon ho?
Gauri:Mujhe ek hafte ke liye Kolkatta jana hai.Baba ki tabiyat achanak kharab ho gayi hai.
Shiv:EK HAFTA.ab to main pagal ho jaunga
Gauri:Janti hoon ki aapko ye achha nahin laga ki main siurf ek hafte ke liye jaa rahi hoon.Par agar main wahan zyadaa din rahi to baba ko shaq ho jayega
Shiv:Tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho Gauri!Achha main tumhe chhor doon?
Gauri:Woh aapne mujhe kab ka chhod diya hai.Rehne dijiye.Main khud chali jaooingi
Shiv:Gauri plzz.Aisi koi baat nahin hai.Is baar main tumse poochhta hoon----Friends?
Shiv advances his hands.Gauri thinks that once she caught the hands and they left her.Repeating the same mistake again was something she did not want to do.It was like Shiv had read her mind.As he withdrew his hands,Gauri advances her hand and they both shake hands.
Shashank witnesses this helplessly
Next Morning at 11 a.m.
Shiv:Gyarah baj gaye aur main avi tak so raha hoon???????Gauri tumne mujhe uthaya kyon nahi??
Anupam:Are Shiv!Gauri par chilla kyon rahe ho?Woh bechari to avi yaha hai bhi nahin
Shiv:Oh!Hah!!!!Main to bhul hi gaya tha
After bathing,Shiv comes out in a towel and is furious to see that his dress is not ready.Just as he goes to shout to Gauri,he remembers that however loud he cries out,his voice will not be able to reach Gauri.......
How he missed Gauri,how he wanted Gauri to be beside him,with him,in him.........
Shiv:O god!Wat am I thinking?I must have gone mad
At the dining table,there was no breakfast served.Poor Shiv had to starve that morning
At Office
Shiv:O God!How hungry I am
Just then he sees Gauri approaching
Gauri:Yeh lijiye Shiv!Aapke liye garma garam aloo paratha
Shiv:Thanx Gauri!Agar tum na hoti to...
Snap!!!!
Anupam:Kitni hairni ki baat hai na yah.Jab Gauri yahaan thi to tum uska shakal tak nahi dekhte the,aur aaj jab woh nahi hai to.......to tum use har pal yaad karte ho
Shiv:Woh... aisi koi baat nahin hai
At evening
Shiv:Bahut ho gaya.Ab main KOlkatta jaunga aur use le aunga
Vivan:Yaani ki aapka bhi yehi haal hai!
Shiv:Bhi... Bhi matlab??????
Vivan:Mera bhi kuchh yahi haal hai.
Shiv:Ek pal ek saal jaisa lamba lagta hai.Chaaron taraf sirf wahi nazar aati hai.Uske bina kuchh bhi achha nahi lagta hai.O GOD!!!!Ye kya hai...............
Vivan:Ye pyaar hai
Shiv:Kyaaa nahi nahii
Vivan:Ye to pyaar hi hai.Aapke maanne na manne se yeh badal to nahi sakta..........
Shiv:Nahin.Aisa kabhi nahin ho sakta........
As the week came to an end,Shiv suffered from severe cough and cold and was ill.In this week he had realised hell lot of things....He realized that he is incomplete without Gauri,helpless without Gauri.In fact,he realised that Shiv does not exist without his wife Gauri.Then how could he think of him existing without his wife Gauri?Shiv realises that he cannot stay without for a moment.He needs Gauri.He realizes that he likes her very much and is afraid to lose her.He realizes that he "loves" Gauri
After 1 week
Gauri:Badi Maa!Dadi!
Nikhila:Gauri!Aa gayi beta!Ab Alok bhaisaab kaise hain?
Gauri:Baba thik hain Badi Maa!Par aap sab thode se upset nazar aa rahe hain.....
Nikhila:Kahan?Kuchh nahin hua...
Maya:Pata nahi tumne Shiv par kya jaadu kar diya hai!
Dadi gestures Maya to keep shut hoping Gauri hasnt heard anything.But its too late
Gauri:Kyun?Shiv ko kya hua?
Nikhila:Beta Shiv ko to kuchh bhi nahin hua.Tumhe to pata hi hai ki Maya kabhi bhi kuchh bhi bolti hai....Ab tu fresh ho ja...Phir aaram se baatein karenge
Gauri:Nahin Badi Maa aap mujhe abhi bataaiye aapko meri kasam
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Dadi:Woh,Shiv ko tez bukhar hai.Usne do dini se kuchh nahin khaya hai.
GaURI:iTNI BADI BAAT HO GAYI AUR KISI NE MUJHE EK PHONE TAK NAHIN KIYA!!!!
Dadi:Woh tu abhi abhi apni baba ki dekhbhaal karke aayi hai.Shiv nahin chahta that ki woh tujhpar bojh bane.Usine ne hume tujhe khabar karne se mana kiya tha
Gauri:Waah unhone mana kiya aur aap unki baat maan gaye.Badi maa aapko lagta hai ki pati ki seva ek patni ke liye kabhi bojh banm sakti hai????
[Palak and Maya keep making faces...]
Gauri:Shiv kahan hain?
Nikhila:Beta Shiv office gaya hai.Keh rah tha ki koi important meeting hai
Gauri:Kyaa iss halat mein woh office gaye hain!Aap ne unhe roka kyun nahi????
Nikhila:Woh hamari baat sunta hi kahan hai?
Gauri is furious and leaves
At Office
[Shivs cabin]
Gauri pushes the door open to see Shiv sitting on his chair.He has turned pale and thin.He looked extremely sick.His eyes are red
Gauri rushes towards Shiv
Gauri:Shiv ye aapko kya ho gaya?
Shiv:Woh kuchh nahin.Thoda sa bukhaar hai..utar jayega.tum kab aayi?
Gauri:Woh main abhi abhi lautii hoon.Ghar gayi to pata chala..
Shiv:Kya pata chala?aur jo vi pata chala uske bare mein hum baad mein baat karenge....tum ab jao aur aaram karo.Itna lamba safar taye karne ke baad tum yahan kyun aayi ho?
Gauri:Aap mujhse kuchh mat chhupaaiye.Gahrwalon ne mujhe sab kuchh bata diya hai.Ab aap mghar chalie
Shiv:Par Gauri...
Gauri:Par war kuchh nahin.Aap chaliye
In Shivs bedroom
Gauri is making bed for herself when Shiv enters the room
Gauri:Shiv ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai?Kuchh sudhaar aaya?
Shiv:Ab bahut bahtar mahsus kar raha hoon.Tum jo aa gayi ho
Gauri blushes
Shiv:Joke kr raha tha.Anyways mujhje tumse kuchh kehna tha
Gauri:Kya
Shiv:woh Gauri...
Gauri:Kya?
Shiv:Woh...
Gauri:Kya?
Shiv:Woh...
Gauri:Kya?
Shiv:Woh...
Gauri:Kya?
Shiv:Woh...
Gauri:Kya hai Shiv?
Shiv:Ab main tumhe ye baat kaise boloon.....
GAuri:Kya hai??
Shiv(closing his eyes):Gauri aaj se tum bed par so sakti ho
Gauri is toooooooooo surprised
Gauri:Kya
shiv:sun nahin sakti kya.Maine kaha ki aaj se tum bed par so sakti ho
Gauri:Haan par woh..Shiv
Gauri turns back to see shiv lying on the bed with his eyes closed
Shiv gets up in the morning to see gauri sleeping on his hand.she was looking like an angel who after doing all the hard and good work finally has some rest.shiv just cannot take his eyes off from her.
this was the person he dared to haurt.this was the angel whom he gave tears.this was the person he hated.and now this is the person he loves.he knowas that he loves her.he wanted to confess his love as fast as possible.but today for the 1st time he thinks,does gauri love me?after his refusal to her love how could he expect her to love him?the whole week he has pondered his feeling for gauri.he thgought that after his confession,both he and gauri will live "happily ever after".but wat if gauri had rediscovered her love for shashank?SHASHANK,wat abot his promise to shashank?but then how could he actually forget his love just for a promise?moreover how could he be so sure that gauri still loves shashank?gauri never mentioned shashnks name after their marriage.but the way she was looking at the photos of her ring ceremony with shashank.those eyes.........those eyes were longing for shashank.Longing...were those eyes really "longing"for shashank or just questioning shashank?but how could shashank answer those question?????everything was planned by them and not shashank.the pan..the plan that changed his life...the plan that brought him and gauri so close to each other.the plan that made him rtealise his love for Gauri....
Shiv made up his mindif he has promised shashank,he will surely fulfill it,but only after asking gauri where her happiness lies..........but if her ans.was shashank???
NOOOOOOOOO
gauri wakes up with a start
Gauri:shivkya hua shiv?koi bura sapna dekha?
shiv:bura sapna nahin...
us bure sapne ko haqueeqat mein badalte hue dekha
Gauri:nahin shiv...sapna hamesha sapna hota haiwoh haqueeqat mein nahin badalta hai...jaise se ki mera sapna
shiv couldnt hear the last part
shiv feels light at heart
he holds gauris arm and rest his head on her shoulder
shiv:thanks gauri.aise hi hamesha mera saath dena
gauri:main aapka saath umr bhar nahin chhodungii
umr bhar....these words sounded so good.how good the thought was.but could this be true?
after his denial how could he expect that
At shashanks place
shashank:enough is enough!now if i dont do anything to get gauri back..then ill be a complete lose....no ways!ill create problems in shiv-gauris happy married life.so many problems that gauri will be compelled to leave shiv.ill be back..i promise
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At shivs office
clerk:sir aaj aapki kuchh foreign delegates ke saath meeting hai
shiv:o haaa!main toh bhul hi gaya tha.par meri tabiyat kuchh thik nahin hai
Just then ipshita enters shivs cabin
Ip:shiv tumhe kya hua?tum thik to ho na?
Shiv:haan main toh theek hoon.bas thoda sa sardard hai.
Ip:to aise mein tum meeting kaise sambhaloge?
Shiv:main sambhal loonga.tum bhi to aaj anupam ke saath jaa rahi ho.aise mein main meeting nahin conduct karoonga toh kaun karega?
ip:Idea!tum ghar jaakar araam karo,meeting Gauri sambhal legi!
Shiv:g.....g......Gauri!Gauri meeting sambhalegi!tum paagal to nahin ho gayi na
Shiv:i mean usse kya bizness ha b bhi aata hai.main maanta hoon ,ki woh pehle kaam karti thi..par wahan usne sirf ek meeting hi sambhala tha.aur woh meeting to kisi....
Ip:mehta & associates ke saath tha.jo aaj india ki one of the largest companies hai...abbhi tumhe lagta hai ki gauri yeh meeting nahi sambhal payegi?
Shiv:Haan par woh itni jaldi..
Ip:dekho shiv..meeting teen baje hai aur abhi sirf das baj rahe hain.I am sure gauri sabkuchh sambhal legi!
Shiv:tumhe gauri par pura bharosa hai!!!!!!
Ip:Haan!aur tumhe bhi uspar pura bharosa karna chahiye.akhir woh tumhari biwi hai
Shiv:achha ok thik hai!par meeting mein main bhi rahoonga
Ip:o achhha!gauri ke binaa ek pal bhi nahin kata jata!i understand.......waise main nahin jaanti thi ki tum kisi se itna bhi pyaar kar sakte ho!
Shiv:o shut up!aisi koi baat nahin hai.woh to main bas aise hi!
Ip:aise hi kya?aise hi ......Achha ab ghar nahin jaana kya!Gauri toh ghar mein hai
Shiv(blushing):agar tumhari bakwas khatm ho gayi ho toh chalein
Ipshita smiles and leaves with shiv
At home Gauri reads the project file carefully.Afterreading it thoroughly,she gives a naughty smile.shiv notices this
Shiv:kya hua?tum muskura kyun rahi ho?
Gauri:woh to aapko meeting mein hi pata chalega
Shiv:dekho Gauri,ye 5000 crore....
Gauri:ka project hai.jisme hamein north ke saari zameen mil sakti hai
Shiv:impressive
Gauri:woh sab to thik hai magar aapko pehle mujhse ek vaada karna padega
Shiv:vaada....kaisa vaada?
gauri:pehle boliye ki aap vaada karenge
Shiv:Par...
Gauri:pehle vaada
Shiv:achha thik hai chalo vaada kiya.ab toh bolo kis bare mein
Gauri:aap meeting mein kuchh nahin bolenge...
Shiv:par..
Gauri:Shiv,aapne vaada kiya hai
Shiv:achha thik hai chalo!
At meeting
Clerk:I woud request Mrs.Gauri Shiv Kapoor to speak two words on the project
Gauri:do shabdon mein main ye kehna chahungi"DEAL CANCELLED"
Everyone present is shocked.Gauri just walks out of the hall
At home
Shiv is all angry and uttering angry words to Gauri
Shiv:Tumhe pata hai maine is project ke liye kitni mehnat kiya hai.arre main pehle se hi jaanta tha ki tum ye zimmedari kabhi nahin sambhal paogi.main paagal ho gaya tha jo ipshita ke baaton mein aakar maine tumhe ye zimmedari saupa.actually galti tumhara nahin mera hai.nahi main tumhe ye meeting sambhalne deta nahi tummere kiye karaye par paani firti.tum mujhse kaunse janam ka badla le rahi ho...aur kyun le rahi hol!maine tumhara bigada hi kya hai
Mahen:jab Shiv ne tumse kaha tha ki ye project hamare liye kitna important tha....to tumne ye deal kaise cancel kar diya?
Maya:Maine to pehle hi kaha tha ki yeh ladki kabhi bhi kuchh achha nahin kar sakti....ye toh kapoor khandan ki bahu banne ke laayak bhi nahin hai..pata nahin ismein aapne aisi kya khoobi dekh li ki ise kapoor khandan ka bahu bana liya...iski wajah se aaj Shiv ek anchahe rishte mein phas gaya hai
All taunt Gauri but she keeps mum.That night,she sleeps in the guest house as Shiv slammed the door on her face
Next morning
Dadi:Aap abhi bhi match dekh rahe hai.jab dekho tab match match match.ekbaar news to dekh lene dijiye
Dada:achha baba ye lo
The news reporter reports that the foreign delegates,with whom the kapoors were going to strike a deal,were fraudsthey fled from India the nite before and all the companies dealing with them had to encounter a heavy loss
By this time the whole kapoor family comes downb as all have seen the piece of news
Shiv:Ye maine kya kar diya...ek hi pal mein mera Gauri par se bharosa uth gaya
Mahen and Nikhila feel ashamed and ask Shiv to bring Gauri down so that they can apologise
Shiv:Par woh toh kamre mein nahin hai
Mahen:Kyun?
Shiv:Woh maine......
Gauri:Woh kal raat ko main kaya ke paas gayi thi.use neend nahin aa rahi thi to main kaya ke saath so gayi
Vivan:Kya...Kaya ko neend nahin aa rahi thi.aur aap use sula rahe the
Vivan turns towards Kaya
Vivan:Tum abhi bhi ek bacchi ko
Kaya goes red and tries to say something but Gauri gestures her to keep quiet
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Mahe and Nikhila apologize to Gauri for thei misbehaviour
Shiv:Par Gauri,tumhe ye sab pata kaise chala?
Gauri:who…unhone jo agreement diya tha,wahan ek clause tha ki who kabhi bhi India chhodke jaa sakte hain.Ye clause mujhe ajeeb lagi.aur jab maine iska pata laqgane ke liye unke office phone kiya,to pata chala ki who to office hai hi nahin.woh to ek shooting set hain,jo kuchh dinin ke liye unhone hire kiya tha
Shiv:thanx Gauri!tumne itne kam waqt mein itna sab kuchh pata kar liya aur hume barbad hone se bacha liya.thnk u once again
Gauri:maine aapko nahin apna ghar bachaya hai.aur ye mera hakk aur farz dono hai
Vivans bedroom
Vivan is searching for something desperately.Kaya sees this and comes inside
Kaya:kuchh dhoond rahe ho?
Vivan:Haan who meri recipe book nahin mil rahi hai
Kaya:Kuchh madad kar doon?
Vivan:Arre nahin.iski koi zaroorat nahin hai.Main khud dhoond loonga
Kaya:khud dhoond loge!Aur who bhi is dustbin mein
Vivan:Tumne dustbin kise kaha?
Kaya:Tumhare bedroom ko!
Vivan:Tumhari itni himmat!
Kaya:Aur nahin to kya hai ye?Chalo pehle room saaf karlo..phir book apne aap mil jayegi
Vivan:Kya!Main aur ye room saaf!Kabhi nahin..
Kaya:Achha thik hai!as u wish.Loss tumhara hi hai
Vivan:Tum hi batao it na bada room main kaise saaf kar sakta hoon!arre tum ho naa!tum meri madad karogi..Rite!!!
Kaya:Wrong!!!!!Jab maine help offer kiya tha..tab to tumne thhukra diya
Kaya turns to leave.Vivan holds her hand and makes a pleading face
Kaya:Achha thik hai.Ab itna natak karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.Chalo main mada karti hoon
Shiv:Gauri,Mujhe tumse kuchh kehna tha
Gauri:Boliye shiv.kya baat hai
Shiv:isse sunkar tumhara jo bhi faisla hoga,mujhe who manzur hai.
Gauri:Aap kya bol rahe hain?
Shiv:Tumhari aur shashank ki shaadi tooti nahin thi,todi gayi thiAur ye sab,papa ne kiya hai
Gauri is stunned
Shiv:Gauri ,hum ek Guruji ko maante hai.unhone humse kaha tha ki mere shaadi ke waqt,mera shani(ill lukk) poora asar karega.Mujh par kai jaan lewa hamle honge.iss sab se maa bahut pareshan ho gayi.Jab Guruji ne tumhare aur shashank ke shaadi ke waqt tum dono ka kundali mila rahe the toh unhone humse kaha ki tumhari kundali mein itni shakti hai ki who mere hamle sahan kar le.Aisa karne se meri jaan bach sakti hai.Papa aur Mummy dono aisa kuchh bhi karna nahin chahte the,par meri wajah se unhone sahmati de dii.Guruji ne kaha kii ye tabhi mumkin hai jab tum meri biwi bankar,ek saal mere saath raho.iss ek saal ke dauran mere upar jitni bhi buri saaya hai, who sab tumpar chali jayegi,aur ek aal ke baad,tum tum..mar bhi sakti ho.Par hum sab itna khudgarz the ki…..
Shiv turns to see Gauri in tears
Shiv:Gauri,main ye kabhi nahi chahta tha ki tumhare saath aisa kuchh ho.maine tumko shaadi wale din bhaagne ko kaha tha.aur shaadi ke baad bhi main tumse sakhti se pesh aaya taaki tum mujhse nafrat kar sako.aur is narak se bhag jao.apni zindagi ki taraf bhaag jao.jo kuchh bhi maine kiya,sirf insaniyat ke naate kiya……
Gauri gets up and walks towards the drawer.She opens the drawer and takes out their marriage photo.Silent tears drop on the photo.Shiv sees this and cannot bear it.
Shiv:Gauri,ye khamoshi mujhe maar rahi hai!ye mujhe andar hi andar chir rahi hai.plzz gauri,plzzz kuchh to bolo
Silently,Gauri walks towars the potrait,holding their marriage photo.This was the Gal who occuried a special place in Shivs heart,a place she craved for.Not because she wanted that place,because she needed that place to live!Her eyes were full of questions but she didn't ask even one!This made Shiv feel guilty as ever.She just thought…thought abot the moments she spent with Shiv----Moments ofhappiness,hatred anger…and the list continued till eternity.She thought about the moments she spent with Shiv----their candlelight dinner,her confession,his denial and all that followed thereafter.Somwhere down.she always pondered the idea of Shiv falling in love with her.Though this was impossible,shealways thought that if it was even 1% possible,she would wait….wait till eternity



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Posted: 18 years ago
this is the story till now!thought ull have 4gotten!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Just can't wait for the next part!!!!!!Plz continue
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plz hurry up, i love ur story i cant wait for the next part 😳

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