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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ammmuuu...Where Are You...😕
Update The First Part Already Dear!! 😆 I Can't Wait More You Knw!? 😆 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update soon we are waiting to read

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys! Thanks for all ur comments!!!


Character Sketch:
-The Vadhera's-
Viren Vadhera: An ace lawyer.This 26 year old guy is a smart,good looking and lovable person who loves his family and career equally.Not interested in marriage though!!
Virat Vadhera: Viren's younger bro.A stylish youth who shares a great bond with his bro.
Vanshika: Viren and Virat's mom.A well cultured and a friendly Maa.
Then the strict officers of the house-Swamini Bua and Dadaji and also Inder Chachu,Kadambari chachi and Shlok.

-The Choudhary's-
Jeevika Choudhary:A simple,cultured,and extremely beautiful girl of 24 who loves her family,especially her sis Maanvi.She works in a software Company.Not interested in marriage also!
Maanvi Choudhary: A fun luving,lovable girl,who does anything for her sis Jeevika.
Then the Choudhary's -Beeji,Chachu,Chachi and Daboo.
Both the families live in Chandigarh!!!

CHAPTER:1
Viren's House:
The clock struck 8:00 and it's the breakfast time of the Vadhera's.
Viren: Maa,serve me the food soon.I'm getting late.
Vanshika Maa: Hold a sec Viren! I don't have 10 hands!
Viren: Oh should I laugh for this? Fine 😃.Now serve me fast!
Vanshika Maa: You keep running always! Haan don't forget to return early today...she said serving him the parathas.
Viren: But why?
Virat: Don't act bhai!!
Viren: Acting? Why shud i act? C'mon tell me the reason.
Swamini Bua: Viren,today we are going to see the Choudhary's.
Viren: Oh! Who are they? And why shud i come?
Virat: They are your future in-laws and u shud come cause u are the groom!!!😉
Viren: Wat the hell? Who asked ur'll to look for an alliance now? I can't get married this early!!
Virat: Oh! So if u want get married at 60! We don't mind about it!😆
Vanshika maa: Shut up Virat! Viren beta,it's for ur good.
Viren: Maa but...
Vanshika maa: No buts!!! We are leaving by 5pm k?
Viren: Maa just listen to me once.I'm...
Vanshika maa: Beta,she's a very good looking girl.You'll definitely like her.
Viren: What if i not?
Vanshika maa: Hmmm...we'll see to that in th evening.You r getting late so hurry up!
She said moving to the kitchen along with Swamini,leaving behind a depressed Viren.
Virat: Bhai!! Chill out!! You just cum with us,see the girl,then decide wat u r gonna do.
Viren: Well I've taken my decision.I'M NOT GONNA MARRY NOW!!!
He said banging the dining table and left.

Jeevika's House:
Chachi: Jeevika beta,you remember wat Beeji said right? Be on time dear!
Jeevika: But chachi,you know right that i'm not interested in this? Pls help me na!
Chachi: No my dear i can't help u in this.I'm sorry.Okay! I've kept your new pink suit and the jewels in the cupboard,to wear this evening.Bye dear!
Jeevika sat in the bed looking worried,when Maanvi entered.
Maanvi: Hey di!! R u not gng to office today?
Jeevika: Hmm...wat's the use in gng? Anyways i gotta sit and do all the household chores,hereafter!
Maanvi: Oh! so u r worried about the Vadhera's visit,right?Don't worry di.Everything will be fine!
Jeevika: But how? I'm not interested in this even a bit.
Maanvi: Ok! shall i do a thing? I'll ask Daboo to arrange some men to break the Groom's leg and send himback.K???😉😆
Jeevika: Oh u want me to spend my life in jail huh?
Maanvi: Just kidding di!! We'll see the groom,and accept the proposal if u like him or else...
Jeevika: I say it right now,I'M NOT GONNA MARRY NOW!!!
Maanvi: Oh di! Wait till evening na.Don't be too fast.Now calm down and get ready for ur work.Go my dear!!! She said patting her back.
Jeevika took her sister's words and left for her office.

Evening at Choudary's House:
The Vadhera's arrived on time.Viren dressed in an elegant outfit,while Jeevika,dressed in her pink suit with perals on her neck,looked stunning.She was in her room with full of anger.Just then Maanvi entered,
Maanvi: Di!!! The groom is awesome.He luks like a hero!😉.I think u can accept this proposal.
Jeevika didn't utter a word.
Maanvi: Ok! Now let's go out and meet ur future "pati"😉
Jeevika gave a frowning look.😡
They entered the hall and she greeted everyone.
Viren,who was raedy to say "NO" till the last second was now dumb-founded by Jeevika's beauty.
Virat (whispering): Bhai!! C'mon say "NO".
Viren: Shut up! Am i a stupid to reject such a beautiful girl?😉
Virat: Wat???
Vanshika maa: Jeevika u look so pretty dear!Hai na Viren?
Viren wasn't able to react.
Swamini Bua: Why don't u two have some light talk?
Beeji: Haan,both of u can share ur thoughts freely.Jeevika beta,take Viren upstairs.
Jeevika: Ji...
Maanvi (whispering): Di! It's a great chance don't miss it!! Pls say "Yes".He looks like really a good person.Believe me!!!
Jeevika: Really???
Maanvi: Haaan 100%
Jeevika: Hmmm...Shud i say Yes?
Maanvi: Definitely!!!
Beeji: Wat is happening there? Jeevika take him with u.
Jeevika nodded and Viren followed her to the terrace.

In the Terrace:
Viren: Well...Hmm...I'm Viren and...
Jeevika: Excuse me.Shall i say one thing?
Viren: Oh! Ya sure!
Jeevika: Well...Mr.Viren,I'm sry to say this but...but...I'm not interested in this marriage.I'm sry it might hurt u,but i can't marry u.So,pls...
Viren:Err...U know wat? Even i was abt to say this.
Jeevika looked at him confusingly.
Viren: Ya! i just came here out of my family's compulsion.
Jeevika: Oh! Thank God! So can u say to both our families that u didn't like me? I can't say it to my Beeji,coz she'll not spare me.
Viren: Ya! I came here, only to say that word !
Jeevika: Thanks!
Viren: Thanks to u too! For making my Job easy!
They smiled and went downstairs to meet the families that were waiting eagerly for their reply.
Vanshika maa: Viren,did both of u discussed abt the decision?
Viren: Haan Maa!
Vanshika: So, wat's it?
Viren: Well...

That's it for now!!!!😉.I know this part was a bit bore.Anyways i'd like to read ur views and suggestions,so pls DO LIKE AND COMMENT!!!!😃

NOTE: I would send PM's to only those who comment or like the story.Because i find it difficult to send 130+ PM's and recieving just 30-40 likes and few comments.Pls understand my position.I leave th choice upto u all!!!
~AMRITHA~
😊

Edited by AmmuKryan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
res
unress😊
me no first😭 but its oookkk😊
me second
first ques why did u stop here????😡
just at the right time 😡
😊nice update😊
👍🏼u write so well 👏
loved it❤️
both r not interested in marriage😆😆
viren was dumb when he saw her
why jeevika said no to viren
and what will viren answer
virika are made for together🤗
would love to see how their love will blossom😊 😉
looking forward for it😊
plz continue soon 😊
waiting!!!!😊😊

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
RES!!!
UNRES!! 🤢

Amritha!???? 😡 Why Did You Stop Here!??? 🥱 Very Bad!! 😡

The Update Was Amazing!! 😃 But I Thought That The Two Will Agree And Get Married!! 🤢 😆 But Why Did Jeevika Said A 'NO' To Viren??? 😕 😲
And Why Is Viren Not Agreeing For Marriage? 😕 What's Going On?? 😕 😆 Ammu Update Soon I Can't Wait To Read More! 😭 😆

Ammuuu...You Better Update Soon And A Bit Too Long!! 😆 😉

Take Care...😛

Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sweet_aayushi

res
unress😊
me no first😭 but its oookkk😊
me second
first ques why did u stop here????😡
just at the right time 😡
😊nice update😊
👍🏼u write so well 👏
loved it❤️
both r not interested in marriage😆😆
viren was dumb when he saw her
why jeevika said no to viren
and what will viren answer
virika are made for together🤗
would love to see how their love will blossom😊 😉
looking forward for it😊
plz continue soon 😊
waiting!!!!😊😊

Thanks di😃
For the big wala comment😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RiddhiTacker

RES!!!

UNRES!! 🤢

Amritha!???? 😡 Why Did You Stop Here!??? 🥱 Very Bad!! 😡

The Update Was Amazing!! 😃 But I Thought That The Two Will Agree And Get Married!! 🤢 😆 But Why Did Jeevika Said A 'NO' To Viren??? 😕 😲
And Why Is Viren Not Agreeing For Marriage? 😕 What's Going On?? 😕 😆 Ammu Update Soon I Can't Wait To Read More! 😭 😆

Ammuuu...You Better Update Soon And A Bit Too Long!! 😆 😉

Take Care...😛

I know that everyone will be mad at me for stopping at this point😆
U shud wait to know that my dear😉
Long????? I'll try😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AmmuKryan

Thanks di😃
For the big wala comment😆


that was required
as it was just awesome update😊
u deserve it😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_aayushi


that was required
as it was just awesome update😊
u deserve it😊

thanks again di!!1😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lil sis this is not fair with ur sis...
how can u stop such an amazing part at this point...
no...no...no...
I want more... crying...
I loved ur whole update...
they don't want to marry each other...
pretty different...
nd viren want to say yes after watching jeevika... awww
but jeevika has some other plans.
loved it..
perfect...
phenomenal...
lil sis u better cont soon...
I m ordering u as elder sis!!! :)

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