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Posted: 11 years ago
wow that was really good update paa ji
present was really bliss to read with maaneet baby
wow geet didn't left there baby felt like maan is not there in there lifes
i mean she said baby knows he is her dad she is such a cutie pie re


and past haha poor geet ye maan bhina jab dekho work work
he wants nothing apart from that and ha geet is still with him
celebrating his b.day what else he wants his feeling i can felt his hapiness

you makes me feel soo special with that feel love you for that
geet's dad got reality check thats why he planned everything to make them apart no wonder

i am hating geet's father for making maaneet suffer like that
and also there cutie pie also huh now i need one big warm up update

waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
MAAN IS AWD BY HIS DAUGHTER - SHE IS HIS ANGEL
AND WHAT A PLACE TO STOP
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...finally Maan got to meet his daughter...felt very emotional...
I want both Geet and Maan to confront Mohinder and Geet to be strong...will also love to read some tender moments between Maan and Tamana
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Posted: 11 years ago
Intaah ho Gyi intzaar ki
Aayi name much khabar
Teri dear😉

Chl ab update de bhi de

Tamanna made 😳😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!!!
absolutely loved it <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

chapter 10
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banner credit goes to cutetommy




warning: the part contains 18+ content


past




the awkwardness of the moment made Geet cringe, what was she doing? her hands were already busy wringing her dupatta around her fingers and her head hung down, as if in mortification of her deed.

"is she ashamed of herself? did i make her feel ashamed? but why" Maan's mind was a whirlwind of emotions whereas his face appeared to be a collage of various expressions, from confusion to bafflement to anger. he felt disappointed at the same time that his love felt that the act was shameful, whereas it demonstrated their love for each other.


'come Geet I'll drop you home, already it is way too late, and your dad must have lost a kilo pacing in his study' Maan said.

the sarcasm in his tone was quite evident and hence Geet looked up, searching his features.

"what!" he barked at her which made her jump

'why are you behaving like this?" Geet asked uncertainly

"why? as if you don't know?" Maan drawled

"no, i dont" her mutinous and hurt gaze met his and once again Maan felt himself drowning in those hazels



your eyes are a myriad of expressions
they are the window to your soul
your heart
when i look into them
i feel myself getting lost
the more i look
the deeper i go
i see love
love
care passion
compassion
care
all of it for me
but then
why do i feel uncertain
why is this insecurity gnawing at me
as if
you'll leave me
or
someone would take you away from me
why
when i see you dedicated solely to our relationship
is it the warning of an impending storm...






"what Maan? what are you trying to see" her sweet voice jarred him out of his reverie

"nothing" he tried evading and looked away

"you know, you cannot lie, then why do you? that too me? tell me Maan? what is it that's troubling you?" Geet implored


'are you ashamed of me?" his question left Geet dumbstruck, never in her wildest dreams had she thought that she would have to hear something like this from his love.

"no!" "why would i?" Geet denied vehemently, her face a compass of hurt.

"then why did you behave like that, don't you trust me?" Maan asked

"off course i do, but its just i.. it was all very new to me, i have never felt anybody's touch, and i didn't know what to do and i went with it but you were going too fast and i just didn't know what to do..." Geet's words came out in torrent.


"my you were nervous!" Maan hand shot to his forehead and he immediately crashed on the couch laughing. all his worries vanished within seconds, he couldn't believe that while he was sulking over her feeling ashamed of her she was, all the while thinking about her performance.


"what happened Maan? i just don't understand you and your whimsical behavior! what is it? one moment you all lovey dovey, all over me, kissing me, next you are stern and unreadable and then the worst of all, now, you are laughing! what am i going to do with yo... ouch!" before she could finish Maan pulled her down to him and crushed her to his arms.


"love me" he looked deep into her eyes and his voice sounded like silk

"hmm" Geet immediately became aware of his mood and she flushed

"so tell me Geet, which part did you like the most, my caresses, my touch or my kisses" Maan's voice changed to a slow husky whisper while he nuzzled into her ears. his breath fell seductively over her neck and it tingled her senses.

"huh Geet, which one was better, my kisses, the feel of my touch or my caresses?"with that his hands moved along her body, touching and caressing her while his mouth left soft, small butterfly kisses along her ears and neck.

Geet sighed, her lips trembled, her breath came in slow gasps while she gulped.

"Maaann" she moaned while Maan's magic worked his way to her cheeks

"hmm Geet, what? tell me, which one did you liked the most?" he said


"please Maan" Geet was hyperventilating by now

"what please Geet" he nuzzled her nose while laving a sweet slow peck on her lips, the magic of which lingered on

"hmm Geet, bolo" he implored

geet couldn't take his torture any more and crushed herself into him, their hearts thudded in absolute symphony while their breaths mingled with each other, they held onto each other tight. geet's body pressed into maan's in seductive way, her b***** brushed against his chest while her hands moved generously along his taut muscles, feeling him get h**d with each of her touch. without warning maan lifted her up into his arms. her eyes snapped open only to encounter sleepy bedroom seductive eyes of her love. his chocolate brown eyes drew her like a moth to fire and she felt a strange sensation, that made her shiver.


"are you cold sweetheart?' Maan whispered close to her mouth, their lips brushing against each other, Geet looked up, her hazels were a mix of love passion and innocence and she felt herself drowning in his love, his voice pulled her towards him, her heart sang his name.


"dont worry, I'll make you all warm" with that Maan led her to his room and kicked the door shut.

he laid her gingerly on his small bed, her eyes remain closed, while she felt his presence near him.
he nuzzled into here ears, while his hands roamed along her body, Geet felt her dupatta slide away only to be replaced by his lips, he left slow, long lingering kisses along the length of her neck to her cleavage. he licked her ears and Geet moaned, he bit her slowly on the area above the hem of her kurta and Geet writhed.

"do you like it" he teased her

the very next moment Geet felt empty, he was nowhere near, she opened her eyes only to find Maan perched at the end of the bed where her legs lay.



looking straight a her, not taking his eyes off her even for a second, maan bend his face and kissed her on her foot and blew into her payel, the very next moment geet knew her payel had left her feet. he sucked her toe slowly and geet gasped, she had never known that such a simple gesture can give pleasure like the way it was. her body was now a hostage of maan, and he just knew all the right places to touch and caress. coming over, geet felt his weight on her, while his face hovered over hers. she opened her eyes only to see Maan gazing at her loving, at the very next instant she felt him lower his head over her's while his lips settled over her sweet ones. the sent fireworks coursing through them, they touched each other, felt one and another while their souls mingled into one. it was slow in the beginning, but eventually picked up speed, their tongues engaged into a battle of Passion invading into one another's mouth. the kiss made both hot and warm with desire. their lips molded into each other's as if they were meant to be, and so were they.




not leaving her mouth even for a second, maan lifted her a bit, while his hand reached for the zipper of her kurti. this made geet stiffened, and their kiss was broken, their eyes met and all geet saw love but somewhere geet felt unsure, "trust me" maan said in broken whisper and it was all the assurance geet needed. the zip gave away and soon geet was left bare from top, only in her inner. Maan's smouldering gaze roved lustfully over her top half. though Geet tried to cover her with crossing her hands over her b***** yet she felt Maan's gaze burn her skin,. she failed to look him in the and looked away. Maan settled behind her back and moved her hair to one side. what he say was smooth flawless skin. holding her by her waist her brought her closer to him, he dipped his head into her skin and left soft wet long kisses along the length of her spine, he tugged at the one barrier holding her b** with his teeth. it made geet gasp aloud while she turned into his arms and held him close to her. maan caressed her back, while his hand lingered on the band. geet knew the impending and shut her eyes close tight.

"please Maan' she whispered

"please what sweetheart?' he asked

"cover me first" she replied



Maan looked deep into her hazels and laid her down once again on the bed while he began stripping, first his shirt, then his belt and the rest geet didn't wait to see since she had closed her eyes again but she could hear. soon the remaining that were covering her body became maan's sole agenda. Geet felt the straps of her b** slide away while maan bit her on her shoulders while he slowly moved towards her b*****, he nuzzled her n****** with his nose while his hands caressed them ever so lightly, soon his mouth replaced his hands and he loved her soft c**v** with all his might sending her into a tizzy, kissing and li*k*** them. her salwar and the remaining also joined the heap of clothes that now settled on the floor. both were bare and were covered in the same blanket. Maan took his time exploring her body taking turns and giving special attention to all her pleasure spots. he left no part of her body untouched. each part was touched caressed and loved with equal affection. Geet too took time in loving and exploring maan while their moans filled the air. just when maan felt Geet was all ready, he came near her and whispered.



"sweetheart it'll hurt a bit the first time, please forgive' and left a long lingering kiss on her lips

Geet instead of being anxious asked, "will it hurt you too Maan?"

this query mad Maan's heart swell with love and at that very instant he was in her.

tears rolled out of her eyes while she moaned, "Maan"

Maan kissed her and wiped her tears away with his mouth, "yes sweetheart"

Maan gave her time to adjust while he whispered sweet nothings into her ears to ease her.

soon the initial pain was replaced by pleasure and they they were at it together. Maan tried to make it the best for Geet while Geet poured all her love for Maan until they reached the peak together and crashed into one another giving each other the most beautiful gift, "Tamanna😉











precap: past and present




people am writing such an update for the first time, i was way too nervous while writing it and hence dont know how it actually came out so please forgive me if i let you down, but i have tried my level best is all i can say. i know i have taken too long to update, over a month, thats because i had a major back problem in november while during december i had to take a sabbatical with my family to Denmark hence i had been missing from the forum. i hope you all will understand and will shower your love likes and comments upon me, preferably longer comments please since i love hearing form you and if you are not liking any part please lemme know i'll try to amend. and last but not the least thank you so much for the lovely likes and the fabulous comments. i had a gala time reading them. a big squishing hug and loads of love to all my readers. love you.

also my dear fried cutetommy who made the wonderful banner has turned a goldie so please don't forget to wish her.

my soul sis appy has turned rockerz so congratulations to her and she has also opened her blog of poems, please spare a glance, she is amazing!

http://arpita-ay.blogspot.in/


Edited by doublecross - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeppy me first

Lovely well written part
Making of Tamanna was so sweet & filled with love

How could he even be away from them for so many years

Congrats Appy !!!
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mind Blasting Hot Update ☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update and beautifully written showing how innocent geet and her love was

Maan making it beautiful for her
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great part buddy.And dont worry you have done a fabulous job in making Tamanna 😃

Maaneet love making always gives me a dreamy feel and you've done it in most decent manner.Its so happy to see Maaneet's love flourish and get to its destiny in dis beautiful manner.

Loved d part.

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