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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Over the top clichd cheesy but me sooo Likey Likey!!

LOVE IT ❤️

LOL...I WARNED EVERYONE BEFORE I POSTED..IT WAS ALL CHEESE N MUSH..N CLICHE' STUFF...WELL ENJOY IT GAL😃😆

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hearts appearing in the air animated gifThis is for a cute story, even though I am way past age 16. It made me relive my teens and Disney movies. So thank you!

THANK U THANK U THANK U.,...N HEY...we r never too old to re live our teens...n enjoy disney movies..I still do...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
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Originally posted by: princess101

I LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃

thank u so much m glad u enjoyed the cheesy romance😛

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Wow wow wow...I'm in lala land...this was freakin' awsome...I so wanted this prequel🤗...ASYA's first meet n the kiss😳😳...I loved loved loved the last line-Is that a yes?or is that a yes?😆-I can imagine Asad saying this to Zoya😳...now update ASAP😃😃

P.S.-you are one of the most amazing writers in this forum...I just love your writing🤗

seems like from ur comment..that u enjoyed this prequel a lot..n it was wat u wanted outta it..so m happy to provide this cheesy sappy love story..😃..n as for the last line..I guess i have used such lines in other chapters in turnaround..I guess it suit ASad naa😆
n as for ur PS...😳🤗🥳❤️ m happy happy happy...😃

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome

thanx for pm

thank u😃

Originally posted by: Mayeesha2217

Wowww...You already started the prequel🤗and man..it is just sooo romantic and yeah,fluffy!But I laaawww fluffy😛😛Beautiful,continue soon hun and PM me pleeeaaasseee😊

yes...its ongoing now..n stay tuned for more fluffy n sappy romance..n funny moments...n its makes it all the better wen u enjoy such stories...so yieee😃

Originally posted by: asyafreva

OMG...!!!!!!! I Sooo freaking loved it...! Nd their first encounter nd they kissed each other...! Hayee...!!! Bt the best kiss was d one in d football field..! I sooo wished dat dis was d actual story of d serial instead of gul showing dat piece of crap...! Dis is way too beautiful fr words...! update soon..!

Aashka

Heya Aashka...thank u for an awesome comment...n yieee u enjoyed the update..m happy happy..n as for the kisses..there are a lot more to come...so keep readin...I'll try to make it funner n sappier..n fluffier...thank u for ur compliments gal..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
thank u😃

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is totally fabulous...

amazing...
luv it...
totally addicted to tis ff...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

thank u so very much😃n stay addicted to my stories😉

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Just prfct...qow...awesum...so romantic...thnks

thank u😃

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

bang on!!!
just loved the start...
but why only 5 chapters???
anyways I'm happy!!!
continue soon

Thank u so very much for ur comment...n m glad u enjoyed the start..there's a lot more to come..n ya 5 chapters...I mean how far can I drag fluff rite???😆😃

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

loved it ...do pm me next part

Thank u ..n will do😃

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

i love it..i just love it..


plz plz plz update asap

thank u so much..n will update as soon as I am done with turnaround😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
thank u😃

Originally posted by: kals82

now... we are going to know about the love story of 2 ordinary person... asad and zoya...

loving it... it is attraction... and love at first sight... for both of them...

waiting for it...

yup ,,,its going backwards...to know the story of how they fell in love...so stay tuned..its gonna be a fluffly sappy n fun ride😃
thanks😃

Originally posted by: cherryfrasier

Love it. its better than i expected. Do continue...

thank u m glad u liked it n it turned out to be better thn u expected😃

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

prequel is great

this is wow

Thanks Alot...m glad u enjoyed it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Aashna,

Thank you sooo much for starting this SS. I am so happy to see it & read it too.
I know this story will have parts we know of already but you it makes it all the more exciting for me. Everytime you quoted a flashback from their past, I was lost in the beauty of that moment & in awe of their love. Now when I get to read the whole thing, what can be better?
I just loved reading the whole passage how Asad & Zoe met in detail. It is a treat, honestly, watching them get connected to each other deeply on their first meeting itself. You know it's quite hard to imagine this way. I mean after reading Turnaround, I know Asad has changed due to the past circumstances but I could never imagine him to kiss that too just after fighting with her. Gosh, I'm so excited to see how it went on with their date.
Continue soon..
Love.

N here we go again...loving the comment..n loving to respond to it...so gal..m very very glad to know that ur enjoying this SS..its a welcome change after all the ups and downs in Turnaround..This one is all about love..n love n love..nothin else...n goin back to it..n then relating it to the parts in turnaround..just makes their story more complete.. n now u get the details of how they used to be n its gonna be fun..at least thats wat I am aiming towards lets c how that turns out to be..n then u wont have any problems picturing Asad as this happy flamboyant guy..cos as of now..even in Turnaround..he is getting back to his old self...so gal..keep readin...n hopefully u'll have lots of laughs n blushes n ooh and aah moments...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome...loved it...continue soon...thanks 4 pm
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Here you go Peeps...another part of the prequel...hope you enjoy it..😃
CH2 The First date (Courting)

2 hours and Zoya was seated in a pile of her clothes. It seemed she had tossed her complete wardrobe onto her bed,trying to figure out what to wear. It was her very first date, ever and to top it up, it was with a guy she couldn't help dream about even for a Nano second. Everything about him gave her the chills and all she wanted to do with every new tremor of ardor that engulfed her was to run upto him and capture his lips into the ravishing kiss they produced when they mated together. She sighed; these feeling were going to be the death of her. It was very alien for Zoya to feel so deeply for someone else and that too in a matter of 2 meetings and ...2 kisses...She sighed once again dropping down onto the pile of clothes and laying down...staring at the ceiling...twirling the loose strand of her hair, unable to contain the glee and the plastered grin on her face...as she waited to see him again.

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Asad found himself in the exact same position as Zoya sans the pile of clothes, laying in his neatly made bed, staring at the ceiling and reliving the the past 2 days, the most unpredictable, the most unexplainable days of his life. Asad who thought of himself to be a man of singular purpose, of success and progress, was finding himself drawn to unchartered territories. Zoya had unleashed the most dormant and, possibly nonexistent emotions in him, making him loose to his carnal desires. He still couldn't understand how and why had he been so affected by her that her words had pricked him, and had made him run up to her and kiss her senseless, without even her consent. And to make things even more confusing, she had reciprocated his kiss with equal fervor. And then yesterday, her unexpected visit at the soccer field, her genuine concern in her eyes when he hurt himself, and his follow-up actions, his kiss and his insistent desire to take her out on a date had left him, succumbing to the refines of his dorm room, staring at the ceiling for the past 2 hours, trying to decipher this turbulence within him.Zoya had dominated his existence ever since, her smell, the feel of her skin, her plush supple lips quivering under his lips, the ardent uproar of emotions when her body pressed against his just made him sleepless, restless and powerless. A man as stoic as Assad was flustered and being flown around like a loose leaf in the winds of his untamed desires. He had 2 hours to plan their date, to get ready and to face the unpredictability of their 3rd meeting and their first official, his first official date.

So he stood up, the thoughts of his past rendezvous dancing all around him, diverting his attention from the task at hand, making him nervous another emotion he had never experienced.

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Zoya, finally after 5 hours of rummaging, whining, sighing, dreaming, and getting even more tangled up in confusion had dressed herself up in a nice flowy aqua blue top and jeans, pacing around her dorm room, waiting on Asad. She had no clue what to expect out of this date, how to act and react, and pacing around didn't help, it just raised her heartbeats making her even more anxious. Thankfully before she could spiral outta control the knock on her door brought her back to present. She rushed herself to the door and opened it, Asad standing there,in his jeans and grey v neck Tee, looking like he had just stepped out of an Abercrombie and Fitch ad, looking effortlessly sexy and Extremely appealing and edible, making Zoya forget all her inhibitions and tip toeing herself to reach upto his height and planting him a kiss of desirable promises and as if it were second nature to him, Asad grabbed her by the waist and pulled her into him, her legs dangling an inch above the floor,one of her feet popping out with pleasure as they continued to bathe themselves in the glorification of their kiss.

Asad finally having placed her petite frame on the floor eased out of the kiss, staring into her drunken orbS of desire, her deep big brown eyes, drinking in her beauty and the moment they just experienced.

Asad-Well now that's the way to welcome someone huh...he teased...making Zoya nip at his lower lip a little..

Zoya-well why not when the package at the door step is so visually appealing. She teased back...making Asad smirk with satisfaction..

Asad-Gotta tell you..you are one feisty gal...I like it..now shall we get out of here...or do u plan to have our date, making out like love-struck teenagers...?

Zoya-Well you are the one that needs to show me a good time so after you.. Mr Abercrombie and Fitch...she gestured her hand in the direction of the door, asking him to make the first move..

Asad raised his eyebrows at her last comment and started to walk, Zoya following him, locking her door behind.

Zoya-So what's the plan..she filled in the distance and walked besides him, her body pulsating with the aftereffects of their kiss...

Asad-Well I guess we should eat first huh, and then if we can work our way past this ridiculous pull that kicks our awareness outta the window,ending with u in my arms, ur lips swollen and my libido ignited...then maybe we should get to know each other...he glimpsed at her sideways, his voice sincere...with his confession.

Zoya instantly felt a little relived, even he was going through the same jolts of emotions as her it seemed...but just to make it clear...she decided to ask him..

Zoya-Umm..so you feel it too..she asked...fighting through her initial hesitation of lookin at him, turning herself to face him, stopping him from walking any further.

Asad looked into her eyes...trying to decipher the mystery around her, and why she stirred his dead soul, pulling him towards life...He took 2 steps to her, now standing an inch away.As if by an old known habit, he traced the outline of her face, taking the time to notice her, truly notice her beyond the physical, beyond the magnetic pull..He opened the chapters of her life in her eyes and read them, his soul understanding the language in which it was written, feeling all the ripples of emotions it created as he, as his soul understood a little more about this enigma of a girl standing by him.

Asad-Yes...I feel what you feel,I feel that I have something with you that allows me to touch you with right, that erases any doubts of you not reciprocating. I feel that my soul has woken up from death itself and now wants to live, wants to hold your hands and allow you to walk me through life, be by guide and reacquaint me to the possibilities. I know, I know nothing about you, but somehow I feel like I am home when I feel you near me, when your lips trace mine and I take u in me and hold you close to me. Zoya, I feel like you are pulling me towards you, into the deepest most unexplored recesses of my being and I can't fight it, and I don't want to fight it. I want to explore this, this utopian sensation that courses through my nerves and I want to kiss you every chance I get, cos it makes me feel so alive, so free and so content...His eyes bored into hers, as he observed the acknowledgment of his words in her eyes...

Zoya-Wow..was all she could say..his words, ringing so true ,so identical to her own thoughts...I am hungry..were her next words...making Asad laugh out of the stupor.

Asad-Well then..what can I feed Miss Zoya.. ... Farooqi..filled in Zoya..So tell me where should I take you...Miss Zoya Farroqi... he offered her his hand which she gladly took,...Pizza...she said...as they started walking..hand in hand...like a seasoned couple.

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Asad-Btw way..why did you call me Abercrombie and Fitch..he asked...lazily munching on his..pizza slice, staring out the bay, into the sea, enjoying the evening breeze...

Zoya-Umm?..she asked..in between her bites...too engrossed in enjoying the pizza to care what he said...

Asad turned towards her only to see her look like a 5 year old,so into enjoying the food that she was completely unaware of the sauce on her face..He shook his head n smiled, grabbing the napkin out of his pocket and leaning down to clean up the mess she had made...His touch made her stop, her mouth open on it way to bite into the pizza, her hand frozen with the pizza an inch away from her mouth. He carefully, and very gently cleaned up her face, the way her aapi used to, when she was young. His gesture, the care in his eyes and the soft smile on his lips made her heart get all mushy...It was the sweetest thing, and to feel such gentleness from a man of his size and strength just made her gawk at him in awe as he continued to clean her up...

Asad-Done..he said. Grabbing the hand with the pizza and directing it towards her open mouth, you can carry on with your eating, but please, don't be so messy..he teased...Zoya snapping out of her drooling zone out and feeling a lil embarrassed. Who would be so stupid as to chomp on their pizza so messily. That was so unlady like...she grunted...again..so unladylike to grunt...she muttered to herself...

Asad-Just stop with ur self-cursing and answer my question, why Mr. Abercrombie and Fitch?? His eyes danced with laughter...

Zoya-Hmm..Oh..just cos u look like one of their models...well sculpted face, angular jaw, intense, sexy eyes and a body...Oh..a body to die for...How I would...starve myself for months if my reward for doing so was a chance to nibble on to that rock solid abs, those bulging muscular biceps, that forbidden trail to euphoria...Damn those bulging veins, those strong arms, that lean waist, the prominent collar bone..Oh how I want to bite it...she spoke...completely lost in her visual lustful daydream of what she would do to Asad's body if it were at her mercy...totally unaware of the fact that she was speaking out loud, each and every word, heard by Asad loud and crystal clear, his male ego, ballooning up with every word, making him smirk, making him grin, making him want to let her have her way with him, allowing her to fulfill her fantasies. He didn't know that Zoya had gone that far in a matter of 3 days, in dreaming about him. Guilty himself, his mind had wandered off, piggy backing him along, in his lustful daydreams of Zoya and what he wished to do to her petite compact lil body...He shook his head as he laughed...no longer fighting against himself.

ASad-OH... he said...enough to create a ripple in Zoya's otherwise calm and colorful daydream, pulling her out, making her gasp as she looked in his eyes and realized, she had said that all out...heronly option, running away.

Asad laughed...as he saw her running away...catching up to her in no time and grabbing her by the waist and twirling her...Zoya's giggle unable to hold back, as she felt the tickle of his fingers and his stubble by her neck...

Zoya-Let go of me she screamed...still laughing hard. As he continued his tickle monster bit...tickling her waist.. And by her ribs, all the while not letting her get off his grip, her feet not even close to the ground...

Asad- So...you want to bite and nibble your way around my body huh...he said...putting her down but still holding her close, her back against his hard torso, his lips whispering against her ear, his breath making the blood rush around her ear, turning her pink, making her hot.

She closed her eyes, enjoying this ecstasy, not paying attentions to his question...

Asad smiled, liking the reaction his closeness had on her, wanting to push it a lil further.

He slyly trailed his lips from her ears all the way to her shoulders, not kissing her just breathing over her, fanning her senses with his breath, tickling her snoozing circuits awake...making her inwardly moan, the first moan he had heard from her, so sexy so jazzy so...smooth, urging him to divulge further...

Asad-Liking it?? he asked nuzzling her neck, his hands by her waist...lazily caressing the small of her waist...loving the feeling of her in his arms...

Zoya-Ummm...she sighed..completely lost in the moment, her body gently swaying with the evening breeze, the sun setting in the distant horizon...

They stayed there like that for a moment, longer than eternity. So lost and consumed in each other, feeling the most potent, the most fulfilling emotion known to man, connection. They felt right together, under the crimson sky, lost in the melodious beating of their hearts.

Asad stared out to the sea, his face resting on the nook of her neck, holding her tight...Zoya still in her dreamland, her eyes shut but a small smile, dancing on her lips...

Zoya-I like it she finally said...as she opened the eyes and looked forward, in the same direction Asad was looking...

Asad-Ummhmm...me too..he answered...finally letting her go...Zoya turning around and facing him...gently holding his face and giving him a lite feathery kiss...

She smiled...

Zoya-And I like this too.. she said...mischief and sincerity in her eyes...

Asad- Ummhmm..Me too...he said...but I think I will like it better when you bite my collar bone...and nibble your way to my forbidden trail to euphoria. He winked...

Zoya-Hey...that was not meant for you to hear ok...she tried to be cool..failing miserably...

Asad-Well tough luck I heard it all...and now its imprinted in my mind and it has scarred me for life.Only you can ease me outof this and you don't need to starve yourself for months...I am here..now... he said deviously, enjoying the fluctuating expression on Zoya's face, the last one telling him to run as she...grabbed her remaining pizza slice and tossed it towards him. Zoya ran behind him and Asad ran ahead of her...running, running running..until..they couldn't run anymore, or atleast until Zoya couldn't. She bent down holding her knee, trying to catch her breath, while Asad stood at a distance... laughing...not flustered even a little...making his way to Zoya, ready to gloat...but she just stood up and walked away flicking him off...mad at him...

She sat by the bench by one of the piers and huffed, not finding Asad anywhere..

Zoya-Such a jerk...first he broke my camera..she remembered and then he kissed me without my consent, not once but twice.and now...he is teasing me by my own words...and wow what a gentleman he is...making me run after him...and rather than making it up to me...he just left me...when he had to make a lil effort..how typical...all guys r the same I tell ya...she mumbled to herself...just as Asad made his way back n patted on her shoulder...

ASad-Are you done..cursing me he asked...

Zoya-Don't you dare...to be all smug MR...you are such a jerk...I don't like you...she vented out..Asad trying hard to hold on to his laughter..And hey I know you want to laugh at me...wow such a gentleman you are...she mocked...I mean..you tease me...and make me run behind you..and when I get mad at you you don't even have the decency to make it up to me..you just walked away...I mean what kinda guy...just walks away...what was so important for you. That you l pissed your date off and walked away huh... she looked up...only to be embarrassed to see Asad standing with 2 Magnum ice-cream sticks...his eyebrows raise in amusement...

Zoya-Uh...how do u know that I love ice-creams?? She asked...hesitantly taking the ice-cream he offered. And that too..Magnum...she asked..still staring at him...absentmindedly opening the wrapper, imitating his actions as he did the same...

ASad-Uh well..what can be better than to cool a hot headed gal with some ice-cream...and Magnum...cos its my favorite ice-cream...he shrugged biting into the ice-cream...all nonchalant the glimmer of mischief still in his eyes...So...am I forgiven he asked...

Zoya-Ummm..yum...huh?? oh ya...I can never stay mad with ice ream in my hand...she licked...the ice-cream dripping on to her hand...making Asad shake his head in disapproval. Laughing at her antics...yum its so delicious...

Asad-Well...I guess...it will taste even more delicious...when you lick it off of my...rock hard abs...he teased...running off as once again Zoya..ran behind him...to chase him down n beating the crap outta him...

So how was it??? 😲
I hope youre liking all the sappy and all the cheesy and all the..cliche' and all the over the top romance...😆
Enjoy it😃 n I will...come up with my...intro( Asad and Zoya's character intro...) for my new FF very soon...so look out for PM's...
Now go hit like and type up ur comment..I am waiting to read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super Awesome Update!
Loved every bit of it...
Thnx for the Pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariam1368

Super Awesome Update!
Loved every bit of it...
Thnx for the Pm.

Thank u so very much m glad u liked it😃

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