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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part...
Loved it...
Very well written dear..
Thanx for pm Jasmine
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..
Loved it..
Thanx for pm dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Marvelous update. I have enjoyed your story for many reasons and love the couples very much. But I have also enjoyed your characterization of Guman. Her hate for the Desai has destroyed her relationship with nearly everyone around her. She could have had so much but her hate robbed her of all...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well written., loved ur work. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

The Shell of love Part 10



All the Desai members along with Laxminandan,Danny and Saras were there.
Guman did not know what to do.
Gum:Laxminandan...
LI trusted you.But your betrayal was bitter than anything else.You separated me from my own wife and son.I will never pardon you.
Gum:Laxminandan...
He slapped her many times.
Guman looked at Danny:Danny...please tell dad not to...
Danny:No mom.A dirty person like you deserves more than this.
Laxminandan held her neck tight.
Vidhyachathur:Laxminandan...leave her.She is a woman.
L:No.She is not a woman.She is not even a human being.Today you won't say anything.Let me do what I was supposed to do long ago.
Laxmi slapped Guman again.
L::You did this for my money.Right?Now listen.You have lost all your rights on my wealth.You are even out of our life.Never again come back.If so I will kill you with my hands.
Guman was shocked.
Laxminandan pushed her out of the haveli.Guman cried loudly.
Slowly she started laughing.Laughter which whole world could hear.She lost her mental balance.

Saras was depressed.
Kumud:Saras,i know you are guilty of misunderstanding your father.But he will forgive you.But he just needs your love.Saras...listen to your heart and do what you feel like.Do not have any mental block.


Immediately Saras went towards Laxminandan with tears in his eyes:Dad!
Laxminandan also lost his control his control.Both of them burst into tears.They hugged each other.

Seeing the father-son reunion everyone smiled emotionally.
Laxmi looked at Kumud:Kumud like last time,now also because of you I got my son back.
Saras:Thank you Kumud.Thanks a lot.
Kumud smiled emotionally.

Kalika and Yash in their room:Please forgive me Yash.
Y:No need Kalika.Though you fooled me you did a great thing today.I am proud of you.
Kalika became emotional.


Now Guman is Ratnagiri's well known mad lady who was even ignored by Laxminandan,Saras and Danny.

Kumud,Kusum and Kumari got ready for the mehendi function.
Kusum was sad not finding Sunny around her.
She thought:Where is Sunny?He said he will come before I get ready.But he has'nt come yet.


Kumari:Kusum,come for putting mehendi.
Kus:No Kumari.I will come only if Sunny comes.


Kumari smiled:So stubborn.
Kumari went away.
Sunny came.

Kusum was relieved.
Sun:Sorry Kusum.Got stuck up in work.I needed to send the draft copy.
Slowly she smiled.He smiled at her.
Seeing him smile her face blossomed.
She went for putting mehendi.


Dugbha:Kumari,marriage is a big responsibility.It's not a joke.So you should be more responsible and mature.

Kumari:I will try my level best Maa.
She hugged Dugbha.Dugbha smiled.
All the 3 girls got their hands adorned by mehendi with their lover's name being written over there.

Kumari showed the letter 'D' being written on her palm to Danny.

Danny held her hand and looked at it happily.Then he looked at her romantically.
She blushed.
His lips brushed her palm.She blushed.

Kumud and Saras smiled at each other.Kumud showed him her palm which had 'S' written in mehendi.

He became very happy.




Sunny was also impressed with Kusum's mehendi design.


Sangeet function...
Kalika announced:There would be a competition between boys and girls in dance.Let us see which team wins.
Kusum and Kumari got tense.
Kuma:If we fail...
Kumud:We will not fail.We will dance together with passion.


They smiled.
Kumud went and wore a beautiful saree and brought dhol.Saras smiled seeing her in a gorgeous saree.

Kumud,Kusum and Kumari danced.

Hey dhum tadak dhin tadak
Aaja udke sarat
Pairon se bedi zara khol
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje,
Dhaain Dhaain Dhaain dhum dhum dhaain
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje,
Dhaain Dhaain Dhaain dhum dhaain..(Ram Leela).



Saras,Sunny,Danny started dancing.

Aankhen khuli ho ya ho band
Deedar unka hota hai
Kaise kahoon main o yaara yeh pyaar kaise hota hai
--CHORUS--
Tududu dudu dududu tu dudu dudu - 2
--MALE--
Hey, aankhen khuli ho ya ho band
Deedar unka hota hai
Aankhen khuli ho ya ho band
Deedar unka hota hai
Kaise kahoon main o yaara yeh pyaar kaise hota hai
--CHORUS--
Tududu dudu dududu tu dudu dudu - 2
--MALE--
Aankhen khuli ho ya ho band
Deedar unka hota hai
Kaise kahoon main o yaara yeh pyaar kaise hota hai
--CHORUS--
Tududu dudu dududu tu dudu dudu - 2

Dream sequence:

Danny danced around Kumari.
D:Aaj hi yaaron kisi pe marke dekhenge hum
Kumari winked at Danny.
Kuma:Pyaar hota hai yeh kaise karke dekhenge hum
Sunny walked around Kusum looking at her romantically.
S:Kisi ki yaadon mein khoye hue khwaabon ko humne sajaaliya
Kusum held his hand and stood close to his chest.
Kus:Kisi ki baahon mein soye hue apna usse banaaliya
Saras interrupted them by kicking Danny and Sunny.Danny-Sunny were awaken from the dream.
Ae yaar pyaar mein koi

The boys continued dancing.

--CHORUS--
Tududu dudu dududu tu dudu dudu
--MALE--
Ae yaar pyaar mein koi
Naa jaagta naa sota hai
Kaise kahoon main o yaara yeh pyaar kaise hota hai
--CHORUS--
Tududu dudu dududu tu dudu dudu - 2

Saras was lost in Kumud who was smiling at him.

Saras' Dream...
Kumud danced around Saras.
K: Kya hai yeh jadoo hai koi bas jo chal jaata hai
Saras held her hand.
S:Todke pehre hazaaron dil nikal jaata hai
Kumud cupped his face in her hands.
K:Door kahin aasmaano par hote hai yeh saare faisle
He caressed her face.
S:Kaun jaane koi humsafar kab kaise kaha mile
Jo naam dil pe ho likha
Suddenly his dream was interrupted by the chorus.
Tududu dudu dududu tu dudu dudu...

Saras continued dancing with Danny and Sunny looking specially at Kumud.

S:
Jo naam dil pe ho likha
Ikraar si se hota hai
Kaise kahoon main o yaara yeh pyaar kaise hota hai

Kumud blushed.

--CHORUS--
Tududu dudu dududu tu dudu dudu - 2
--MALE--
Aankhen khuli ho ya ho band
Deedar unka hota hai
Aankhen khuli ho ya ho band
Deedar unka hota hai
Kaise kahoon main o yaara yeh pyaar kaise hota hai
--CHORUS--
Tududu dudu dududu tu dudu dudu - 6(Mohabbatein).

The song was played.

ai kha na na khan khanaa
he Tan na na Tan Tanaa
ai jha na na jhan jhanaa
chhan na na
jii jii jii ai haa.n


Danny-Kumari,Sunny-Kusum started dancing together.
Kumud was surprised when Saras got ready to do Dandiya in which he was not confident before.

She was happy.Saras smiled at her.


They both danced together.

Dholii thaaro Dhol baaje Dhol baaje Dhol baaje Dhol
ke dham dham baaje Dhol
re Dholii thaaro Dhol baaje Dhol baaje Dhol baaje Dhol
to dham dham baaje Dhol(Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam).

Yash and Kalika came on stage.
Yash:The winner team is...
Kalika:Boys or girls?


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Posted: 11 years ago
Glad to see that i am the first one to comment, very nice update as usual i love thesong part and the competition between boys and girls i wonder who win. I realky enjoy reading the interaction between danri as in the show they r not jodi i m still very disappointed of the cvto ruin my dream. Anyway i dont watch the show anymore i came only to readur update so good job
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Posted: 11 years ago
just superb update.
v well done written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow great update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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