ARAKSHI OS: FOREVERS DON'T SEEM TOO LONG...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here's my first arakshi os...

It is entirely from Arjun's pov... hope you all like it...

Please do press the like button and do comment...after

all aapke likes aur comments sadda haq hain...

There's no roshni past in this...

I had originally written this for sadda haq forum and posted it there too..but then I felt that it would suit even Arjun...so I've modified it and here it is...the title too is different from the original...

Hope you all like it..

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She stood there in a white kurti and pink churidar, her hair tied in a loose ponytail, her head buried in a case file...oblivious to her surroundings...

He was still awed by the way he had started noticing everything about her...her twinkling doe shaped eyes, soft silky hair, lack of make up and the way she pushed away the flicks of hair falling over her forehead...and most of all her tinkling laughter...how much he looked forward to hearing it...how its sound made his day...how it echoed within him & filled him with an inexplicable happiness & how desperately he wanted to be the reason for it.

At twenty eight, it wasn't as if he had not had his share of women...but he had never met someone like her. An unrequitted high school crush, a college fling with a girl who was one year his junior and a complete dunce and 2 years of being played & used by a selfish manipulative b**** ,for her academic & professional ambitions, whom he had sincerely loved had been enough to make him puke at the word love'. After that bitter heartbreak he had scarcely allowed himself to look beyond his cases...convinced that his cabin was the only place where he'll ever find solace. But one fine day she changed it all...she had come, she had seen & she had conquered...his heart.

He had known for just over an year...But then an year is no less a time period...he couldn't exactly recall when or how she had covertly crept into his thoughts...perhaps around the time when her contact name in his cell phone changed from Sakshi to Sunshine...Before he had realized, she had got past all the barriers he had placed around him...his heart beat faster when she was near...and her smile made him want to forget all his worries...

Though, he had caught her stealing glances at him when she thought he wasn't looking, this didn't amount to any serious emotions...and perhaps he didn't want her to reciprocate what he felt for her...No. she deserved someone better...not an eccentric like him...someone who could give her all the happiness in the world and not someone like him who shied away from all reasons to smile, living behind a self imposed faade of nonchalance and raw attitude...

A loud urgent voice broke his reverie...

"Arjun..."

Rathore was looking for him...it was time to usher the team into the conference hall for case discussion. He turned to walk away...but not before glancing in her direction one last time...

Yes he loved her...more than anyone else in the world...

There was just one problem...destiny seldom favoured him...and this time was no different...he was leaving for an undercover mission tomorrow..leaving everything behind...leaving her behind...and he wasn't even sure whether he'd return to see her again...he wanted to savour the moment...look at her long enough to capture her vision in his heart for eternity...yes he wanted to be with her forever...but from where he saw it...forever's didn't seem too long...

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sisodia_shefali thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os something different arjun has no past with roshani but still has failure love stories
and fair share of heart breaks and so he is afraid to declare is love for sakshi
and now poor thing has to go for undercover mission
but arjun babu darr ke aage jeet hain 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thatz very nice. Continue it.. like it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fab update
Arjun is heart broken.
cont soon

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you maisha...i'm happy u found it nyc...😊


u did? thank a lot...😊

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice os something different arjun has no past with roshani but still has failure love stories

and fair share of heart breaks and so he is afraid to declare is love for sakshi
and now poor thing has to go for undercover mission
but arjun babu darr ke aage jeet hain 😉


i agree...dar k age jeet hai...n for arjun..dar k age sakshi hai...😉
glad u liked it..😊

Originally posted by: zan101

Thatz very nice. Continue it.. like it...


thanks dear...good to know you liked it...😊
continue? i'm not sure...i'm not too good with long storys...


make sure u unres it really sooonnn...samjhi ya samjhaun?? 😉😉😊


thanks a lot dear...😊

And a big thanks to all of you too!!!😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Only appreciations 4 arakshi writers thank u so much 4 writing arakshi Os it is amazing plz continue it w8tng 4 next wht happend during or aftr undrcovr mission
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luci333

Only appreciations 4 arakshi writers thank u so much 4 writing arakshi Os it is amazing plz continue it w8tng 4 next wht happend during or aftr undrcovr mission


thank you so much dear...😃
i'm glad you liked it so much...

about the continuation part...well i am not too good at writing long storys...
so i guess not now...maybe sum other tym...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice thinking
But you should continue
Try to do it
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful..do update more😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rehana25

Nice thinking
But you should continue
Try to do it
Thanks


thank you sooo much!!!😃
let's see..i don't promise anything..😆

Originally posted by: Sakuu

amazing os! Very nice


thank you sooo much!!! glad u liked it!!😃


thank you!!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: nehashtha

beautiful..do update more😊


really? thanks a ton!!😃
can't say abt updating more...

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