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Wow that was a very powerful n emotional short story
Felt so sad when Anjali died then Arnav
Loved how u used the flashbacks to add to the stories intensity ( sorry can't think of a better word to describe it)
God that shyam was such an evil bas*ard glad Arnav managed to regain his strength intime to save his love ultimately making up for what he couldn't do b4 n bringing back his confidence n ASR
Oh one thing wanna ask did the girls father get better are u doing an epilogue ??
Anyways thanks for pm really enjoyed n looking forward to reading more PMS of ur other stories ...beautifully written
Felt so sad when Anjali died then Arnav
Loved how u used the flashbacks to add to the stories intensity ( sorry can't think of a better word to describe it)
God that shyam was such an evil bas*ard glad Arnav managed to regain his strength intime to save his love ultimately making up for what he couldn't do b4 n bringing back his confidence n ASR
Oh one thing wanna ask did the girls father get better are u doing an epilogue ??
Anyways thanks for pm really enjoyed n looking forward to reading more PMS of ur other stories ...beautifully written
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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