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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey
How you? 😊
Amazing, superb update 👏
Loved it loads ⭐️
Sorry for the late reply
Feel sorry for Sana because she is being played by Uday n Manav
Really want to know what happened that Manav is angry with Manyata
Just hope he can actually listen n talk to her properly
OMG, wonder what Uday's going to do to Manyata
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃

thanx a lot Humairra! I am glad that you liked it nd ya u will soon come to know the reason behind Manav's hatred. I will try updating asap. Nd for the pm dont mention because it was my job as long as you stay in touch with my story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: nishaya...

thanx a lot Humairra! I am glad that you liked it nd ya u will soon come to know the reason behind Manav's hatred. I will try updating asap. Nd for the pm dont mention because it was my job as long as you stay in touch with my story!


Don't worry, I will, I promise n I never break any promises
N I love it already, there's no way I leave a story unfinished 😉
Edited by humairaa1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Nishaya Great job dear👍🏼
Loved manveer so much😃
You can continue this story😉
It's tottaly cute and sweet 😛
I loved it core superb lovely😳
Manav and all characters are superb👏
Story going so nice👏
Update soon...😳
Pm me for sure😉😆
Edited by -.-SUNSHINE-.- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Will be updating soon dearie!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: -.-SUNSHINE-.-

<font color="#009966" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Nishaya Great job dear👍🏼</font>

<font color="#009966" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Loved manveer so much😃</font>
<font color="#009966" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">You can continue this story😉</font>
<font color="#009966" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">It's tottaly cute and sweet😛</font>
<font color="#009966" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">I loved it core superb lovely😳</font>
<font color="#009966" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Manav and all characters are superb👏</font>
<font color="#009966" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Story going so nice👏</font>
<font color="#009966" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Update soon...😳</font>
<font color="#009966" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Pm me for sure😉😆</font>

Thanx Parivarsh. I am glad that you liked it, and i will surely pm you. Thanx again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Hello guys, How are you all? Hope well! I know that i am damn let so for that i am going to give you people a DOUBLE UPDATE, this time , Please do like and leave back your reviews, it means a lot and from now on i assure that as am perfectly fine so the updates will also be faster, enough of my blabbers, here are the chappies, ENJOY READING!!!


Chappy 4

Days had been passing like blinks yet Manyata saw no sign of effort from her bhai to search for Sana, seemed like he did not care much about her absence or rather say he did not care AT ALL. But things couldn't go that way, she had to find Sana at any cost and any how after all Sana,her best friend, was someone whom Manyata could not afford to loose at any cost.

She glanced at the watch and it showed the correct time of action, a time of the day when Manav goes for his site inspection. She picked up her cell and dialed his number;

manyata: hello, mr.roy?

The man: good afternoon mam!

Manyata: i need to see you mr.roy immediately so can you be here,right now.

The man:surely maam, will be there in moment.

Manyata:alright then be soon.

She had cut the call with a sigh of relief murmuring," I hope Mr.Roy ,you will really be of some help.

~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~
There was a glint of proud in his eyes as he saw her crying helplessly. He was amused and why shouldn't he be as tears were the funniest joke for him. Sana was weeping endlessly but these tears were not for herself but for someone who was dearest of all to her and to whom, she was going to cheat so mercilessly.

Uday smirked as he removed one strand of hair from her face,he was satisfied that finally she was shattered as he proceeded;

Uday: "so miss scout have you made your choice?", he asked arrogantly,'becoz if you haven't then do it now as i have waited enough and remember more time,more pain to your sister though till now she is fine but might not be further since you know I am not a good man."

Sana had really had enough of this man, but she knew there was no runaway as this was her destiny that every one just used her as a step of ladder and with that threw her in waste, she looked at him,jerking his hand off her face and spat," make a choice for what , as to whether i should die or my sister should for as your highness said that if i don't work for you my sister is gone and if i do then i am gone because another thing that i know is Manav Singhania is not a good man either.", her voice broke as she completed but who cared, Uday caught her by hair and whispered deadly," i dont care god dammit for your whatsoever but if you don't do what i say then consequences will not be bad but WORST.

~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~

Mr. Roy had given her all the information about the job of Sana but this made no sense to Manyata about her absence. She looked at him for a last time and asked firmly," is there anything that you are still hiding from me Mr. Roy?", Mr. Roy,s face turned pale at this while his tongue shuddered," no,no Ma'am i mean wh..hh...y should i.

Now Manyata knew the missing link and it was heights, her temper was lost which could no more be controlled," how dare you lie to me.",she shouted,"i said i WANT to know the reality so will you spit it out now or you are not at all in love with your job.",

Manyata's salvo was dead serious and Mr. Roy knew ,there was no point hiding otherwise the outcome would be hell so he finally spoke," I aaam..m sorry ma,am but my life will be on stake.", he begged

manyata : thats my responsibility so no more ifs and buts, be quick

mr. Roy sighed in helplessness and said,"she was our company's under cover employee Ma'am who works in Singh industry as a scout."

The floor suddenly happened to sweeped down her feet as her ears could still not make themselves clear and when they finally did, only two words rang in them " Singh industry", " SCOUT"!

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Edited by nishaya... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
chapter 5
Sana cried and cried until her tears had finally dried up, she cheated on her, cheated on a person who was so close to her heart , her best friend Manyata. There was havoc in her mind as flashes of past were running down her memory, she remembered the best of moments that she had spent with Manyata while one just flashed in front of her.

Fb

Sana was hell busy studying, her books were scattered all over the table and she was fumbling through sometimes for books and sometimes for pen when suddenly she heard her door opening and then click shut. She knew who it was but paid no heed but Manyata exclaimed,"my gosh Sana tu ye kitabo ke beech mein apni samadhi(grave)kyun bana rahi hai?"

Sana: Mannu i have exam tommorrow so keep shut!

Manyata: ha toh ek exam ke liye itne books padne ki kya zaroorat hai?", manyata winked as Sana gave her a Will-you-shut-up look!

Manyata:thik hai thik hai bharak kyun rahi hai chal teri iss halat pe ek sher sunati hoon,

"Samundar (ocean)jaisa syllabus hai,

nadi(river) jitna padh pate hai,

balti (bucket) bhar yaad rehta hai,

glass bhar likh ke aate hai,

chullu (handful)bhar number milta hai,

and guess what hum usi mein dub ke mar jaate hain."

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Sana smiled remembering her antics with her eyes filled up. Their laughter rang in her ears and she hid her face in her palms whispering,"I am sorry Manyata, i am sorry."


Manyata was constantly asking the driver to speed up. She knew what she was going to do would only worsen her relations with her bhai but this time she did not care, not at all. Because Sana's terrified voice couldn't let her.

Fb

Sana:hello Manyata

manyata: hello Sana,Sana, is that you, O god Sana how are you and where are you?

Sana: not now Manyata please, look i want to meet you today at 5, i will send you the address,please come or else i will...", and the line went dead.

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Uday had been waiting for her since half an hour but he knew she would come though she was much different than her brother but then again, she loved Sana and for her, he was sure that Manyata WILL come.

Manyata's car stopped in front of a secluded factory in the outskirts of the city as this was only the address given to her. She entered the factory and moved down the stairs which took her to a hall where a man was standing facing his bact towards her.

Manyata: "excuse me.", and the man turned. Hell, it was Udayveer singh, she knew him ,from tv, from people, from her bhai and that clarified that Sana hadn't called her but was made to call her.

Uday looked at her,all mesmerized. He had never seen such wonder of nature, she was a perfect piece carved in heaven. He moved close, closer and closest to her. He was hypnotized by the innocence in her eyes. Their breath were entangled when suddenly her breath got stuck in her throat when he softly touched her earlobe with his lips whispering,"who says that Manav Singhania's sister is different than him,its not so as both of you can drive people crazy just that he does it with his brain and you, do it with your beauty.",and he hid his face in her hair!

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Edited by nishaya... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
woah that was gr8
Uday fell for manyata at first site
not bad!
poor sana
stuck between hell and hell on both sides
update soon
loved it loads
and ya plzz really soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

woah that was gr8
Uday fell for manyata at first site
not bad!
poor sana
stuck between hell and hell on both sides
update soon
loved it loads
and ya plzz really soon

thanx a lot! Manveer had to fall for each other so the sooner the better and worry not i will update really soon now
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

woah that was gr8
Uday fell for manyata at first site
not bad!
poor sana
stuck between hell and hell on both sides
update soon
loved it loads
and ya plzz really soon

thanx a lot! Manveer had to fall for each other so the sooner the better ;-) and worry not i will update really soon now

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