rishbala ss sachayi part 5 updated pg 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">i am writing an ss on rishbala AND THIS IS MY FIRST SS😊</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">plz forgive me if it is not gud...😕</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">rishab shouted at madhu saying : yes now ria my dost is important for me and not u superstar madhubala😕</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">he left angrily but madhu, she is not feeling any kind of emotions🤢</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">she was shocked to the core...</font>

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear
hope this dies not have a sad end
and please clear all mu soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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will continue soon😛

PART 1

madhu felt that bond with her pati is goin to break very soon...😭😭
still she is not in a condition to realize that
she is heartbroken...and falls to the ground memorizing their sweet moments ...with a pain in her heart , may be from this point she may hav to live only with their memories. she felt lifeless.

outside the room bittuji was listening to their conversation...😭😭😭
rk walks out angrily and sees bittuji standing there...
he ignores and walk beside bittuji🤢🤢🤢

bittuji asks rk to stop and said, ; cheif the day is not too far that u wil realize what u r loosing. may be that time comes when u will realize ur mistake but at that time the most precious thing of ur life may be gone too far...
bittuji was crying throughout and he looks at madhu who was sitting on the floor lifeless and he looks at his cheif who is ready to eat him but he ignores and goes down...👏👏

rk was not in a mood to digest bittujis words and he thinks that at this time he wants company of his new frnd (not worlds but nly his remember😆) RIAAA
He calls her and asks her to come to his farmhouse...

after an hour ria reaches his farmhouse and rk was waiting for her with their common frnd (alcohol)




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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2

Ria comes and hugs rk 😡😡😡
rk felt a little comfort and hugs her back tightly not allowing to break the hug🤢🤢
ria felt something fishy and asks rk if he is havin any problem...
rk breaks the hug and asks her to sit...

he starts with thanking ria for coming to his life as he was lacking support of a frnd. he says that he luvs madhu very much 😛😛 but what she did to their baby that i cannot forget.
ria's expression changes when rk says that he luvs madhu 😡😡😡
rk continues he knows that he is jealous of madhus sucess but he doesnt wants her to be an actress. he wants her nly as his biwi, his madhu...
rk tells ria that madhu started to ignore me as she is falling for her stardom. he tells ria abt yesterdays incident that madhu was enjoying with the chawl frnds on her birthday. he gets hurt bcoz he had arranged surprise for her birthday...his eyes starts to secrete tears...

ria takes advantage and hugs rk...😡 she says that u will get ur biwi soon trust me (but something else was in her mind , yes rk u wil get ur biwi soon but not madhu but me)
rk thanks her and ria breaks the hug
she says that she will drop him home as he was not in a condition to drive..
she drops rk at rk mansion and she goes...
rk enters bedroom and ignores madhu who was sitting there lost in thoughts
he falls on the bed and madhu looks at him sadly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3
bittuji comes and tells madhu that he wants to talk to her...
madhu looks at rk who is sleeping and goes out with bittuji
as soon as they are out bittuji started bhabhiji cheif is not goin thru the right path, if he goes on like this we will loose him...plz bhabhiji aap meri behen he na plz save him...
madhu places his hand on him and says bittuji u know that rk is not even talking to me. he beleives that i am loving stardom aur mein kitnibar unse kahoongi ki mein sirf unki banna chahti hai aur uski bache ki maa banna chahti hai
i am trying me level best to bring back my rk but he is goin far away frm me
bittuji consoles her and says dont worry bhabhiji all will be well soon and he will be always with her.
suddenly 2 voices came from back saying that we are also with u...and we will bring our rishab back...
a new kind of confidence was coming to madhu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dear, such fast updates, i really appreciate it, and about the last update, i guess the one among the voices will be deepali and the other might be pabho or radha, am not sure, waiting for the next part eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
part 4
it was radha and sikky who joined hands with madhu and bittuji
all of them is having happy tears in their eyes but three of them ( madhu, bittuji, and radha) who cannot beleive their eyes that sikky also joined with them
all of them looka at sikky with questioning eyes
he understands them and says all of u hav considered me as a joker and it is true to some extent but i also hav a heart inside me . now i dont hav anybody to luv me not even my father or my mother or my wife😡
all the sin i hav done is to acheive something in my life but nw i understands that i had been a fool all over the time.
eventhough i hav acted against rk i luvs him like my own brother but i will become furious wen my wife goes behind him
it doesnt mean that i doesnt like but just my insecurities, my kamzoori...he had been crying all thw while😭
maa i know u hate me but i always luved u because i can see my original maa in u. dont hate me maa that i swear on u that i will not do anything wrong from now onwards and will try to make everything ok.
radhaji cannot control her tears and hugs him and said no beta i luv u and u r also my own son...
bittuji and madhu smiles thru their tears at this happy moment
sikky turns to madhu and says ur very gud bhabhiji and i will not allow u to go away frm my bhais life and u r my sister😭😭😭
she hugs him happily and said yes i am ur sister and i am the happiest sister in the world as i hav got two brothers...
sikky says i am also become superstar like ur pati , not to the people but to my dear sister i will become a superstar brother...😳😳
all laughs . bittuji hugs sikky and cries...😭 u will become a superstar i swear
all four of them shares a happy moment👏👏👏

at rias house she is continuously drinking and smirks determined
she says as pabho brought me to seperate u and madhu but nw i luv u rk and i will make u mine by hook or crook...😕
uma88 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Back to back updates, thanks you for that and i kinda liked this group to save rishbala life
.Shree. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Read all the updates in one go 😛
Lovely Updates Dear 😳
So Radha and Sikky also joined with them.Poor Madhu
Hope they will bring Back RK soon.
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Read all the updates in one go...
luved it... nice SS...
plzz continue soon

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