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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 18 - Dooms day in paradise

To my dear readers, old and new, thank you all for your comments, for your encouragement, for taking your time to read my ramblings, and lastly/most importantly for wanting to read more. I am deeply touched by your response to my work. Only makes me want to do better. I can only hope I do justice to your love.

As usual, I am handicapped by the 20 posts per day limit. I may not be able to reply to each of your post but rest assured I read each and every comment of yours. Continue your support and happy reading!

Astha had her dinner and went to bed. Sleep was eluding her. She did not know if coming away was the right thing to do. She was punishing herself and her beloved by running away. Maybe she should have stood her ground in front of Shlok instead of shying away like a coward. Something was bothering her. Her heart felt gloomy, as if something sinister was looming above her.

Bappa! Keep my family, my love safe. I don't know why I am praying to you. You are my savior.

Shlok's anger simmered and concern took over. Did she eat? When will she come back? Maybe I should give up all this and go and bring her back tomorrow. Yes. That's what I will do. I am going to speak to aunty and uncle and then go bring her back.

With the decision made, Shlok had some satisfaction and lot of anticipation to meet his angel. He craved her presence, her touch, her unique fragrance, her eyes that radiated love. He understood the folly they both were committing by staying away. He knew it was futile to put a lid on all the love that was flowing between them. There was only one way from here; the path of love.

Next day dawned with dark clouds looming in the sky. The sun seemed to be missing that day. Astha told her aunt she wanted to go out for a while and she went out to the local market to do some street side shopping. When she stood admiring a local craftsman's work, an automobile hit her from behind. Her fall was swift and she fell down unconscious. Blood was oozing out. A crowd quickly gathered around her.

Kalindi received a phone call. She placed the phone in shock. Avdhoot had already left for work. She called him and informed him. Immediately she rushed to the Agnihotri's, and went to inform Anjali.

Anjali ran to Kalindi when she saw her come in with tears. "kalindi, what happened? Why are you crying?"

"It's Astha. She has had a bad fall and is in coma. She is in ICU. I just received a call. I am rushing to the hospital. Wanted to inform you before I left."

Shlok, who was coming down from his room, was completely immobile in shock for a minute. He gathered courage and grabbed the car keys. "Aunty I am coming with you. Chalo."

Anjali also went with them. Anjali was consoling Kalindi on the way. "Don't worry Kalindi. Bappa will not let anything happen to our Astha. She has the grace of God." Anjali also had tears in her eyes.

Shlok drove like a mad man. He wanted to reach Astha immediately. There was no place for him on this Earth without Astha. He was calling himself all kinds of fool. Why? Why did I let her out of my sight? God, I don't know if you are really there but my Astha believes in you. You better keep her safe. Else you got to answer me. Got that?

The doctor told them that there was some blood loss but mainly there was internal hemorrhage which caused her coma. "She may get out in a few hours or she may even take a few years. We cannot say anything. Trust in God."

Kalindi completely broke down. Anjali was trying to control her own tears and console her. Avdhoot also reached. He was naturally grief stricken. He went and saw Astha. She lay there like a doll, without life. He could not see the sight and came out with wet eyes.

Shlok could wait no more. He went inside. His Astha was lying there lifeless. He refused to cry. No! She was going to be alright. He will not rest till then. He sat besides her holding her hands, transferring his love through his touch. Unknowingly healing her in the process.

Edited by ipkkndfollower - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super update but I cant take astha hurt plzz give us lovey dovey updates 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

To say... " DUH??? what was I reading???"... and then it hit me like a stone... this is so getting good... man a shift from oozing hot romance to melodrama...

thankyou dear...😳

hehehe... shlok in a frantic mode...i'm so going to love the next update..😆

P.S. thanks form the PM...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: banoo2012

Super update but I cant take astha hurt plzz give us lovey dovey updates 😛


although i loved the twist i can not see Astha hurt...so i must agree with banoo...looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
hope she wakes up soon

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- Dooms day in paradise
Next day dawned with dark clouds looming in the sky. The Sun seemed to be missing that day.

Bappa! Keep my family, my love safe. I don't know why I am praying to you. You are my savior.

It's Astha. She has had a bad fall and is in coma. She is in ICU. I just received a call. I am rushing to the hospital. Wanted to inform you before I left."


Don't worry Kalindi. Bappa will not let anything happen to our Astha. She has the grace of God." Anjali herself had tears in her eyes.

She may get out in a few hours or she may even take a few years. We cannot say anything. It's in the grace of God."

She lay there like a doll without life. He could not see the sight and came out with wet eyes.

sat besides her holding her hands, transferring his love through his touch. Unknowingly healing her in the process.
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Tears tears tears fears away.. The sun will rise as paradise is thier in ashlok love.
All women in one place with shlok can heel the ICU?..

Don't know why felt close to my heart.isty too.


But the hands reached will heel. Will feel the strong as to rise up high cutting the negativity of line..


Thank you for this wonderful update and showing a new ways of paradise for ashlok lovers.
Your EBP story is so natural and pure..
U are indeed depth and close to hearts,..you have so well conencted the care and concern .


Must say your are unique...touched base.

May I know your name dear...@madhu here




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Posted: 11 years ago
yes it was too nice but really feel bad for our love birds 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! Ashtha's poor family. But when I read in the beginning I thought Shlok would get into an accident, but it was Astha. Hopefully this strengthens their love! Great twist!
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok so there comes the twist bt twist are always nice as at last love emerges ad victorious and stronger after the twist
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update thank you hope Astha will be ok soon

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