NEW OS: FORBIDDEN LOVE...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone...I'm new to this forum...and this my first os here...I don't know why but I am really fascinated with the idea of sanyukta-vardhaan pairing...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜Š

So here's my os based on this idea...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

It is entirely from vardhaan's pov... hope you all like it...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Please do press the like button and do comment...after all aapke likes aur comments sadda haq hain...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

FORBIDDEN LOVE...


She stood there in a white kurti and pink churidar, her hair tied in a loose ponytail, her head buried in a thick book...oblivious to her surroundings...

He was still awed by the way he had started noticing everything about her...her twinkling doe shaped eyes, soft silky hair, lack of make up and the way she pushed away the flicks of hair falling over her forehead...and most of all her tinkling laughter...how much he looked forward to hearing it...how its sound made his day...how it echoed within him & filled him with an inexplicable happiness & how desperately he wanted to be the reason for it.

At twenty eight, it wasn't as if he had not had his share of women...but he had never met someone like her. A high school crush, a college fling with a girl who was one year his junior and a complete dunce right here in FITE and 2 years of being played & used by a selfish manipulative b**** ,for her academic & professional ambitions, whom he had sincerely loved had been enough to make him puke at the word love'. After that bitter heartbreak he had scarcely allowed himself to look beyond his machines...convinced that his lab was the only place where he'll ever find solace. But one fine day she changed it all...she had come, she had seen & she had conquered...his heart.

He had known for just over an year...But then an year is no less a time period...he couldn't exactly recall when or how she had covertly crept into his thoughts...perhaps around the time when her contact name in his cell phone changed from Sanyukta to Sunshine...Before he had realized, she had got past all the barriers he had placed around him...his heart beat faster when she was near...and her smile made him want to forget all his worries...

He knew somewhere deep down in his heart that his feelings for her were wrong by all social standards...a twenty eight year old man falling for an eighteen year old girl...and his relationship with her didn't exactly justify these sentiments...He was well aware that if someone were to know of it...she would be the one to face the brunt of the society...all fingers will point only it her...and he didn't want that...though he had not been lucky with women, he respected them. But this wasn't the only reason holding him back...he was apprehensive regarding what she felt for him...Though he had caught her stealing glances at him when she thought he wasn't looking, this didn't amount to any serious emotions...and perhaps he didn't want her to reciprocate what he felt for her...No. she deserved someone better...not an eccentric like him...someone who could give her all the happiness in the world and not someone like him who shied away from all reasons to smile, living behind a self imposed facade of nonchalance and raw attitude...

A loud urgent voice broke his reverie...

"Vardhaan..."

The dean was looking for him...it was time to usher the students into the hall for their semester exam. He turned to walk away...but not before glancing in her direction one last time...

Yes he loved her...more than anyone else in the world...

There was just one problem...She was his student...

DO LIKE AND COMMENT...APPRECIATION AND CRITICISM IS EQUALLY WELCOME... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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daydreamer... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...loved your os...a very refreshing take on the show..your style of writing has impressed me...loved it dear...keep writing more...๐Ÿ‘
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Oh my god. that was lovely.
Would you please turn this into an SS or an FF?
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that was amazing!!! my heart was beating so hard that I thought everyone around me (i'm in the library studying with30-80 people) could here it. hope you continue it and make it into a ff.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful update๐Ÿ‘loved itโค๏ธ
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lovely writing dear...loved it...โค๏ธ
please make it into ans ss or an ff...would love to read more of it... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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brilliant os...you've got some awesome talent lady...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
why don't you extend this story...into maybe 3-4 parts...a short ss kinda thing...
awesome and really interesting concept...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am a Sava fan too...loved d concept...pls make it n ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ur writing is so livly...loved it a lottt...
Please make it a ff...plz plz plz...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: daydreamer...

wow...loved your os...a very refreshing take on the show..your style of writing has impressed me...loved it dear...keep writing more...๐Ÿ‘


really?? feels good to know..๐Ÿ˜Š
thank u sooo much!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd

Oh my god. that was lovely.

Would you please turn this into an SS or an FF?


Thanks a lot...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i wud..bt unfortunately i'm not too good at long stories...๐Ÿ˜ญ
maybe sumtym in the future...๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by: iluvrainaarti

that was amazing!!! my heart was beating so hard that I thought everyone around me (i'm in the library studying with30-80 people) could here it. hope you continue it and make it into a ff.


OMG!! ๐Ÿ˜†
I had not anticipated this..๐Ÿ˜†
and thanks a lot!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i wud do it but for my inefficiency in long storys...๐Ÿ˜ญ
but u never now...๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: ajaved

Amazing os loved it


thanks u so much!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ


thank you!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: ..Twinks..

beautiful update๐Ÿ‘loved itโค๏ธ


u did?? thanks a ton... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: alien123

lovely writing dear...loved it...โค๏ธ

please make it into ans ss or an ff...would love to read more of it... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


well..this is really nice to know that so many of u want more of it..bt i don't wanna ruin my 1st impression here..๐Ÿ˜†
i'm really not good at longer storys..๐Ÿ˜ญos is more of my thing..๐Ÿ˜Š
maybe sum other tym..๐Ÿ˜Š
and a big thank you!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: shubhang23

brilliant os...you've got some awesome talent lady...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

why don't you extend this story...into maybe 3-4 parts...a short ss kinda thing...
awesome and really interesting concept...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


well...i'm gratified ๐Ÿ˜Š
but seriously i don't think i can handle sumthing lyk an ss or an ff ryt now..maybe later..๐Ÿ˜Š
and thank you sooo much!! i'm happy u enjoyed it!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: samwllms

I am a Sava fan too...loved d concept...pls make it n ff


Hi5 then!! me too SaVa fan..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
though i'm a SanDhir fan as well...๐Ÿ˜Š
i'm really glad u liked it!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
and ff..well maybe sum other tym..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by: abanknama

Ur writing is so livly...loved it a lottt...

Please make it a ff...plz plz plz...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š



thanks dear..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
feels really good to know u liked it so much!!๐Ÿ˜Š
bt i don't think i can write an ff write now...i'm nt that good at longer storys..always end up messing them up..maybe sum other tym..๐Ÿ˜Š


AND A BIG HUG AND THANKS TO ALL OF YOU AS WELL ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜ƒ

The following 14 member(s) liked the above post:

alien123, Angel91, shubhang23, zaryabnaqvi, snemaan, missdramak, iluvrainaarti,



Thank you sooo much for liking and commenting..i hadn't expected such a good response for this one!! thanks a lot guys...๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—


Edited by myriad_hues - 11 years ago

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