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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
o god!! that stupid guy!!!but thats so cuteeeeeeeeee

ak!! FOREVER even if they dont know it..

kiss iscoming up.. ak kiss rite?? 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
gr8 part... i jus read ur ff!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 5

kripa opens her eyes and looks at angad shocked.

k (softly)-angad...

angad places his finger on her mouth. he slowly moves closer to her and whispers in her ear

a-ajj tum bouth achi lag rahi ho

kripa lightly blushes. angad smirks and kisses her check adn kripa closes her eyes. angda kisses her other check. then with his finger he touched around her lips making kripa anxious for her kiss. angad moves closer and lightly pecked her on her and then the kiss turned passinate. soon kripa returned the kiss with full force. all of a sudden...

"buzzzzz"

the alarm rang and they seperated breathing heavily. kripa couldnt breathe. adn her breath was all heavy. soon they saw a flame behind them and kripa immediatly fainted. angad caught her in his arms and carried her in his arms and tried to find a way out. all the ways were blocked by the fire. then he set kripa on the ground and wrapped her in his coat and stayed close to him adn carried her again and broke the window and went out... angad was worried that kripa fainted adn he rushed her to the hospital.

kripa woke up and got up to sit but her back hurt.

k(thought)-mein kahan hon?

she looked around and found angad in front of her.

a-vo... tum behosh hogi thi or mein tumko yahan le aya...

angad waked closer and sat by kripa with tears in his eyes. kripa noticed and wondered why he was crying.

k-kya howa?
a-vo.. kuch nahin..
k-angad...
a-kuch nahin.. tum so joa...
k-ok

kripa obidiently went to sleep adn angad watched her and some more tears came out.

a (thinking)-im sry kripa.. if i told you, you would break... just like me....

next-kripa trying to find out what angads hiding...

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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
gr8 part... pls dnt tell me shes got sum disease or sumfin dats y she fainted!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
cute!!!!!!!!!! 😳 👏 👏 i hope she is not pregnant!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
heeh i like the suspence...! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
nice and i also hope that you continue as soon as possible
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
awesome part!!! but why was angad crying ...ok...the suspense is seriously gonna kill me... i hope it isnt that serious like someone is dying or something ....u are enjoying torturing us like this, left us hanging 😡 😭 ..lol 😆 ... continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
hey dear i just read aal please conti soon 👏

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