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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely very lovely.

read last three parts.
Awesummm.
loving d way maan handling evry situation.
geet ki kbhi haan kbhi naa wali confusion... Uff.
Dis is really tuff fr both maaneet bt it's gonna b interesting to see how both control demselves...

conti soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaj tho update milega kya???
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
will try to give an update today...
but may be little later
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Originally posted by: tellyme

will try to give an update today...

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😃😃😃 thanks ... would be waiting
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Originally posted by: tellyme

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Part - 28

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Shruthe - Tons of Thanks and 🤗 for this wonderful banner Dear.

"Ok, I am leaving" But Geet immediately jumped "why so soon. You will have to eat something and go." She quickly figured out ways to stop him.

Maan did not know what to do with this girl, she can't see him going, her case is hopeless than his but jidd iskee. Well Maan's hands were tighed when she was concerned - "Gulami kee hai nibhani to padegee", he smiled.

"Okay, but just for today. Now onwards I will only come as a guardian" "Okey okey"

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Geet made as many things as she could and it took so much time that Maan was atlast straving

"Geet are you planning to cook whole night, I am startving." "Bas, I am all done"

"Well Chote Thakur, woo Sam di is upset, you are not talking to her"

"Geet, its between my friend and me, you don't trouble urself with it"

Geet did not say anything but she did not like the way he asked her not to interfere. Maan felt it. He went near her "Okey okey, I will talk to her. Is it fine now?" Geet smiled and Maan kissed her on her forehead.

And then she served him, and the patience of Maan paid off, the plate was so well decorated. It clearly showed the immense love she holds for him. They were having food when his friends barged in...

"Hey, you are still here... kya chal raha tha" and then their eyes went on the food placed on the table

And they could not stop from enjoying the food and teasing Maan and Geet. Maan talked with all but avoided Sam. Sam did not speak much either.

Every one was leaving. Sam was about to sit on her car when she felt someone pulled her out, it was Maan.

"Leave Maan, you got all your footage, right" "yeah and now you are getting it."

"Why? I can't. You are not my boss here." "I know. Okey. Listen Sam, I was upset with you and you know that"

"I did what I felt right, but now I know my limits" "It's not about limits yaar, its about her, she is my weakness"

"I know that very well now, she is much more than your weakness" They had small arguments and later they shook hand and both were feeling light.

*****************8

Days passed by and Maan gave Geet her needed space. Pari and Meera mostly took care of Geet while Maan was always there to look from top.

Sam would also be meeting them and set up her own different level of friendship with Geet.

Once in a while whole group would meet and they would be having a blast of time. Maan was liking the fact that Geet had mingled so well in his friend's group and was actually everyone's darling.

How he wished that even his family accept her like this. How could they not see her sweetness and innocence?

But Geet was always ready with tons of complain for Maan and he would quietly fold his hands on his chest and watch her complaining with smile on his face. This would make Geet even angrier. Later Maan would please her but he definitely kept distance. Because once out of control, he will loose himself and then she will loose herself and then she would go in guilt which will effect her.

So quietly listening to her complains he kept distance. At least her mind did not go in that direction.

But it was only he who thought that way. Geet herself knew how hard it was for her. Each day she wanted to rush to his arms, to feel his unlimited warmth and care but then she had to control for her Chote Thakur.

While in KM

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Kamini have been seeing how Maan was yet patient and nice with all family members and spent time at home other that business, which would keep him busy like hell. But she also knew that he was still in contact with Geet and she could feel his heart was always with Geet.

Any Marriage proposal, he would outrightly reject. She knew the reason.

While Rajendra, her husband had kept his calm on matter. He didn't talk with Maan on that matter, knowing very well, if forced Maan can revolt.

Even harming Geet was not an option, this would definitely make him revolt and Raj, in no case wanted to loose his son because of a girl. But that does not mean nothing was going in his mind.

He was very well keeping track of Geet and how Maan has merged her in his friend's group. He also had idea that Maan once in a while went to meet her. In short, he was keeping the brief record of their life.

One night in room of Raj and Kamini

"Ji woo" "what? Why are you hesitating? " "Actually, I was thinking that if Maan likes Geet so much, there must be something in her. Why don't we"

"bas Kamini. How can you even dare to think in that direction? Now you want to bring that girl here, in this Mansion as our Bahu.I am ashamed of your thought."

"But if Maan likes her so much, we can at least try to find what qualities she has."

"Bas, not a single word in this topic" "who will be hurt, it's only our son" "I said not a single word."

"even Mehak was saying, its nothing wrong in it. See, she have seen outer world."

"Now I, who have been managing our family and business, have to listen to your daughter who has just entered her twenties." "But" "Not a single word, if you have any respect for me"

Kamini did not have guts to raise this topic again. After the talk that day she has to face unspoken anger of her husband for about a week. He showed his anger in many ways that made her shiver. She had always listened to him, without thinking it right or wrong and this time she raised a voice against him and it was intolerable for him.

******************8

2yrs passed, Geet had applied for all the major medical college all over India.

She had been selected in most of them and more than her's Maan's happiness had no bound. Offcourse she will take admission in Delhi.

It was few days for admission process to start everywhere.

"Well Geet, I will go for your counseling with you. I am feeling so proud of you."

"Who else will go. You have to be there" "OK, it's 15 days left for process to start. Dad wants me to go to London to deal with one of his client. It's just matter of 1 week; I will come back before the procedure starts."

"Sure. But be back in a week or I will start getting nervous" Maan pecked her on her cheeks and left.

How beautiful their relation has been again since he has stopped forcing her. But Maan was each day waiting for her to confess her love. That she knows it's not a sin but Geet preferred to keep that topic away too.

Maan had left today for London and Geet was strooling near her house in thought of Maan, her new college, her career... so many things.

Meera and Pari had been married and were at there husband's place now. Geet was remebring her days with them too.

A bike came with force and stopped in front of her. She looked up to see that Dev was there.

"Dev Thakur Aap" "Haan" Dev said with attitude. "Dad have called you to Mansion, do you have any problem coming there"

How could she deny, she can never dream of disobeying them. "No, no problem"

Dev had all different thought seeing beautiful Geet with this close. "I can understand why bhai is so crazy about her but why have he to be admant of marrying her for that, he can get it from her in many other ways. " and all wrong thought were building inside him.

Geet sat on his bike and Dev looked at Geet from mirror. Something dirty came in his mind and he speeded the bike. Geet got jerked but her immediate instance was to hold support as tight as she could. Dev was irritated to core. Had it been Maan, she would have held him tight. She was so comfortable sitting with him.

Anyways, Geet was now standing in the larger than life size and stylish hall of magnificeint Khurana Mansion.

Raj: "Geet, coming to point, do you love Maan"

Geet bowed her head down "JI yes, I have commiteed this sin"

Raj: "So you love him and you know it's wrong" "JI"

Raj: "Do you really love him or you are showing it because of what he is"

"Ji, I don't understand" She felt so small standing in front of this royal family in this royal place. Everything made her realize how magnificient her chote Thakur is and how she does not belong in his life.

Raj: "Simple, if you love him you will think of what is best for him and if you you love him for you shake then you will keep him in your clutch as you have been doing till now"

Geet did not know what to answer him.

"You know, Maan is not ready to marry and seems you are very hapy with it"

"No Sir, its not like that. I, myself want him to settle down"

Raj: does not look like that. You very well know till he is in touch with you and keeps meeting you, his mind will be surrounded by you. If you keep making him feel loved how he will move on. But you still continue keeping him in your cluthes.

Only if you are not infront of his eyes, only if you stop showing love and concern to him, only if you stop being so sweet to him, he can move ahead. Am I right or wrong?

"You are right sir. I understand what you are saying but what can I do."

"I know its very tough to sacrifice all the easy life you are getting with him and thus you cannot see the ways to help him. Or must I say you don't want to loose this easy life. This can only be done if one loves anyone above them. Maan has showed that he loves you way more than he loves himself but you cannot show it because you care for yourself more than him."

"No it's not true. My babaji knows for me Chote Thakur and his happiness is way above me. I will do anything to free him from me. He should be happy in life, he must get best in his life. But how can I do it."

"You have such a good opportunity. You have got call from Medical colleges in Mumbai too, right and that college is no less, right. See Geet, I have no problem with you career, my only concern is Maan. Now I give this job to you, take your initiative to make Maan go away from you in all ways... dil se bhi. Detach him from yourself. Can you do it? "

"I will do my best sir" "And if you will do on your initiavie no ones else name should come in between. I hope you will not do anything to make him upset with his own family. At least you owe him this much."

"I understand sir and it's my promise to you."

Geet left from there all lost. She knew her life is taking a complete new turn form now onwards.

Next: Maan back from London... faces new Geet.

Thanks for all you supports girls. Please do keep liking and commenting. And have faith in my story and keep patience. I won't disappoint you all but I can't change the course of story.
Edited by tellyme - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😃
Both were so happy
but they had to still pass the test of the love...
waiting how will they both will sail through it...
Edited by reachsky2011 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
last part starts the real test for der bandhan . loved it anu .
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update

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