RaBir FF Chapter 10 UPDATED. - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
ohh god, please continue soon this sooo excited,
cant wait to read more..

owww this will be great
im loving them more and more

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
I love you! Seriously! You just read my mind! I wanted them to have a rain scene so bad! Omg Thank you!!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Awesome update as usual...loved it alot
My gosh...there is really something burning somewhere 🀣 🀣...it's so obvious Kabir cannot control his anger and jealousy
This entire outdoor schedule is gonna be FUN

Plsss update soon
Edited by eshasrk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
people unfortunately i m nt updating tmrw ..srry ...mah sis is not well so I wont be able to update but will dobit son
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
it was an awesome update as usual!πŸ€— as usual, was smiling and blushing the whole wayy☺️...and this time even I thought it was too short and was hoping to read moreee.
but you know kudoos to you for understanding the character so well...what I mean is, you actually made sure that kabir took along his grandmother with him on the trip...the fact that he really cares for her/take her along anywhere he goes so he can make sure she's fine. BRAVO!πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: angelinasingh

people unfortunately i m nt updating tmrw ..srry ...mah sis is not well so I wont be able to update but will dobit son



hope she gets well soon,

we are her

take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
First time reading them and I absolutely love them. Please carry on, can't wait to read the rest. πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
wow...πŸ‘ ... i read all the parts at a stretch... and you know...
after every part i was worried if the next part is updated or not...
which means i dont want to give a break reading this... πŸ˜ƒ
a very nice storyπŸ‘.. loved it...πŸ‘πŸΌ waiting for your next update.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Rachna ,Kabir,Dadi and Nitya are ready to leave ...

Kabir: Dadi and Nitya will leave together ...Rachna we need to take some dress material on the way..U will come with me...(Rachna reluctantly agrees )πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Nitya and Dadi leave first.. with all the luggage while Kabir And Rachna are putting dress material of presentation in their car..😊😊

Kabir and Rachna get ready and head for benaras main market...and get down at a big showroom

Kabir : Rachna ..I need some traditional looking neck pieces ..and Bangles..here's the money...and I will go and get some stalls

Rachna : ok KT..

Kabir goes to the Stall shop where he finds the stalls easily and goes to help Rachna ..

Rachna meanwhile is unable to find Bangles and Neckpieces matching the dresses ..she finally finds them ..and asks to get them packed ...while her eyes rest on a beautiful silver locket ..

Kabir has reached that shop finally after searching for Rachna..but he does not enter the shop and watches from outside..

Rachna(to shopkeeper): how much does this cost...??

Shopkeeper: Rs.1000 maam..

Rachna: wt?? that costly

Shopkeeper: maam Silver prices are also up nowadays..

Rachna: f9 just...pack this and give me the bill ..

Rachna takes the bill and material and leaves..

Kabir enters the shop and buys the Neckpiece which Rachna had selected..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³

Outside Mall

Rachna is waiting for KABIR..and Kabir reaches with locket in his hand..

Rachna : KT..may we leave now..

Kabir(instantly hides the locketπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›) : sure..lets leave...

Kabir and Rachna are in the car at the backseat.

Kabir (calls Nitya):HI nitya ..hwz Dadi.?😊😊

Nitya: Dont worry about Dadi I m Here with here we will reach Lucknow in Next 3-4 hours wt about u have u started

Kabir: yes we have we will also reach hopefully in 5 hours..

Nitya: f9 ..I will check in the hotel..u message me the hotel name and our room nos..

Kabir : ya sure ..

An awkward silence prevails in the car between Rachna and Kabir...for about 2 hours ..none of them speaks ..suddenly the car stops at Rae bareilly ..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Kabir: Driver ..what happened ..

DRiver:sir I think car is at fault...

Kabir:get a mechanic fast ..we need to reach Lucknow Before it gets dark...

Rachna : God ..its bcz we r l8..

Kabir: No we r not l8 ..we will reach in tym..

Driver : Sir ..We won;t get any mechanic here at this tym...

Kabir:f9 ..lets take a taxi ...

Driver: sir ..yahan Taxi u wont get it..

Kabir: wt??

Rachna(to herself):et the hel!!now I have to stay with him ...err..OH!God Get me out of here..πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

It starts raining heavily...and Kabir gets frustrated...

Kabir: arr...F9 is there a hotel somewhere...??

Driver : yes sir..ther's a hotel near...Come..

Kabir turns to Rachna who is fully drenched in Rain ...Kabir just looks at her and keeps on looking...AT HER ..as she playfully stands there...catching droplets of rain...☺️

Kabir heads towards her...and When he gets near her..Rachna's foot suddenly trips and she is about to fall but Kabir holds her in his arms..and They both enter A Romantic embrace ...Rachna for Fraction of second is lost in Kabir's brown hazel eyes...and Kabir is simply mesmerised at seeing Rachna's face with water droplets..with his mind urging to tease her by sucking them but he controls himself...☺️☺️☺️

Driver: sir ...Come I will show u the hotel..

Rachna and Kabir get conscious of their proximity...and awkwardly move away from each other..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Rachna is not able to walk properly..so Kabir offers her his hand ..which she hesitantly holds and starts walking with his support...Rachna's clothes clung to her body and her hair completely wet...all this urged Kabir more..but he maintained his composure...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Kabir and Rachna reach the hotel...

Kabir: manager..we need two single rooms..

Manager: ya sir ..let me see..

Manager: we r sorry sir..there's no single room..infact there's no room ..

Kabir: plz check ...we need rooms..

Manager: well sir ..today at 6:OO pm a double room will be free...otherwie we r full...😲😲😲😲

Kabir: f9..can we get towels ...

Manager : ya ..ya..

Kabir gets the towels and gives it to rachna ..πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±

Meanwhile ...Manager comes to them to take tehm to the room..

KABIR: WELL need one more favour manager..our car is at some distance ..if u cud get the luggage

Manager: f9 sir...

Rachna and Kabir enter their room..

Kabir: sorry miss garg actually ..

Rachna : sir I know we have only one room its f9 ..its just a situatuion we can't avoid..πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

suddenly it thunders very loudly...And RACHNA HUGS KABIR TIGHTLY AND Kabir gets shocked...but he reaches out to her and hugs her back...☺️☺️☺️

Kabir: Rachna..f9 its ok ..just thunder..

Rachna(moving away): ya sorry sorry...

Kabir: f9...our luggage will be here ...u can change from it ..well otherwise u will get cold...

Rachna : ya ..!!

The luggage arrives and KABIR asks Rachna to change first ..Rachna finds a simple gown to change into..and KABIR CHANGES JUST Into a vest ..😈😈😈😈

Kabir: Rachna we will leave early in the morning...so get an alarm..

Rachna: ya..

KAbir: i have informed Nitya ..she has rescheduled the meeting and they are first going for Dadi's check up..

Rachna : sure sir..

As Rachna turns her feet get stuck in the gown and she trips ..Kabir tries to get hold of her..but he slips on slippery floor..both of them land on the bed..witn Rachna on top of Kabir..with her still wet hair ..Kabir's hand aroind Rachna's waist .and Rachna's hands on his chest..Rachna's heart starts beating faster... and she tries to get away but again falls on kabir...😳😳😳😳

Kabir: wait...

Kabir turns her and now he gets over her... and moves away...and goes to sleep on the couch..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Kabir and Rachna are both sleeping..Rachna on bed ..Kabir on couch while Rachna gets up and sees Kabir shivering in cold without blanket She gets to him and puts the blanket on him..and then suddenly

she stops and looks at him...

Rachna: who will believe that he is a rude arrogant brat ...see how seet he seems in sleep..she puts her hand through his hairs and then gets up and goes to sleep..😊😊

In the morning

Both get up and leave ..for Lucknow..as they have to travel nearly for 2 hours more...

Rachna and Kabir sit awkwardly in car..trying to steal glances ...remembering their all close moments of last n8...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The driver plays a Romantic tune..and they both awkwardly look at each other and then turn away...

The car jerks at speed breaker..and Rachna falls on Kabir..😳😳😳

Kabir: Driver..Take care..

Driver; Sorry sir..

Rachna : Its all r8..

THey reach the Presentation place..where Nitya is all ready with preparations...Nitya smiles seeing Kabir helping Rachna walk as her feet was still paining..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Next chapter ..

Rachna -Adi , Kabir -Nitya dancing and Kabir and RACHNA stealing glances...

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Dont forget to comment!!!!

and sorry for any mistakes or if I didn't meet up to ur expectationszz

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Posted: 11 years ago
woo hoo they actually spent a night together ...
i just hope the cv s copy this from u ..

so kabeer decides to buy the trinket for her .awww n he has started having naughty thoughts!!!

update soon

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