AsYa OS: Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai?

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Azriya
Love it! So sweet!

Thanks 😳

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Jazlyn Lodhi

@Nutella.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Are you proud of me, Monica? I'm getting around to all your works, albeit at sloth pace, but getting around nonetheless! My goal is to comment on everything in this lifetime. If I know myself, it seems realistic enough.😆

I always seem to be writing so much, half of it is just bullshit that seeps out from some unknown crevice of my mind, but I do usually have a lot to say. But this one... I don't know where to start. I mean I could say it was beautiful and all, but the mediocrity of that word makes me shudder. So if what I say doesn't make sense, I apologize in advance.

First of all, this scene was one of my favorites in the show too! KaBhi's acting was perfect and I, too, thought that if the CV's weren't so hellbent on dragging the Billi track like an elastic that will eventually snap in their face, it would have been the perfect opportunity to to progress AsYa's love story. So thank you for this OS!

I don't know who I loved more, Asad or Zoya. Asad's acceptance, his unconditional love was definitely a treat to watch (in my head, of course!). But Zoya's naivety, her innocence, her baby steps into the unexplored world of unmatched emotions definitely made her the star!

This was a beautiful confession! And Zoya's hesitancy was just perfect! I guess we would all have been happy if she jumped on him with an I love you too, Mr. Khan! But then, you really don't know what you're missing until you have experience it. And this surpassed any cute/passionate/hot hug that could have happened. Even if Zoya does come off across as the modern type girl who would confess her love first, I think behind the outer boldness, she's extremely naive. And who better than you to depict that?

I think I am going to stop. It's just one of those days where I am just rambling and not making any sense. Hopefully, you got the gist though. I guess the bottom line of what I'm trying to say is that this may just have been my second favorite way to go about the AsYa confession. First being a complete Mangalpuriya way, of course.

Really, thank you gifting us with your beautiful writing. As someone said to me, keep 'em coming!

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SakeenaSidd

@SakeenaSidd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

What a lovely lovely story of AsYa! I absolutely adore it!

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Black.Jack

@Black.Jack

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

another freaking awesome shot! what are you?

loooved it for sure!

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

absolutely wonderful. ..😳

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Priyanka Chettiar

@priyachettiar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

This was so good...
omg they kissed n tht too initiated by akdu...😆
their play of emotions n zoya's hesitation was so nycly written ...😊
but the star was asad I mean he proposed her n even kissed her n comforted her..❤️
this is 3 rd os of ur's I hav read today will read all of them as I get tym...😉 😃
bye.