TS: Dubte Hue Sitare, Part 2-Pg.6

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

read the two parts in one go...it ws so emotional.,please tainar try to get some good sleep and pleasant dreams my god you got such a depressing nightmare dont know how your day might have gone.but he way you put it in words is so commendable..the star crossed lovers will stay united forever.

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

That was heart breaking!

part 1: you set up the emotional side really well. Madhu's frustrations yet hope was very clear to see. She was trying so hard to be everything to RK but ...

And RK's point of view was helpful. It was good to see that he knows he is wrong but as always his pride comes in the way.

Part 2: got to see more of RK's view. Loved Bittuji as always. But really sad and I cannot blame you as the current story line really is depressing.

Very well written!