Pregnant with player's kid#4~ epi pg 30 check pg 41

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I do have a story on hold i am aware of it but i m in no right mood to continue that now

This story has been in my mind ever since i read sleeping with my enemy but no it is neither copy nor inspiration . just that when i was reading this story some idea popped into my mind


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INDEX


PART 33 scroll down

PART 34 Page 12

PART 35 PAGE 20

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PART 33

*Maan's POV*

When something happen in my life i think nothing more amazing can out beat this but life always proves me wrong. Because with Geet here everything that happens in my life is better than other.

First i thought having a baby was the best thing happen to me, then Geet entered my life and changed it for good. When i was living happy with that thought she told me that she has feelings for me and wants to give us a chance, if that wasn't the best thing Geet just now confessed her love for me with those three words of bliss.

Finally i feel as if all my worries are gone and i can have and happy ever after of my own.

After the shower tying a towel around my waist i walked to the room. Geet was standing in the balcony, staring at the stars. I went and hugged her from behind spraying some water droplets from my hair on her.

She turned to look at me. Her eyes didn't hold the same glow that had few minutes ago. A fearful feeling crossed my stomach.

"Are you okay?" i asked worried

" yeah" she said suddenly masking her expression.

"Are you sure?" i asked

Suddenly a strange thought worried me what if she is regretting telling me those magical words. As if reading my feelings she tip toed to kiss my forehead followed my eyes, the tip of my nose before she captured my lips in a long passionate kiss.

" I will stay with you always whatever happens, we ll face it together " she said

"Okay!!" i said unsure

Why is she telling me all this suddenly?

"is everything okay Geet?" i asked

" it is as far as we are together " she said hugging me.

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The next morning unusually Geet was awake before me and she was playing with my hair.

"Good morning" i said with sleepy voice

"morning" she said bending down to place a kiss on my forehead

I got up and leaned on the bed post looking at her. I studied her. She all ready early morning, she was wearing a pink sleeveless chudidar her hair was still wet. I raised my eyebrows.

"Are we going somewhere ?" i asked

" yes" she said

"okay. Do i get to know where?" i asked

"no" her answer was straight.

I pulled her into my arms hugging her from behind. I kissed her nape before pressing my forehead on her shoulder.

"Why don't you tell me what is bothering me" i asked

" i ... can we go out?" she asked after a sigh

I tried to read her eyes but failed miserably so i accepted defeat and went to take shower.

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After about an hour ride from our hotel we were sitting in a beech away from the crowd on one of the rocks opposite each other. Geet was in deep thinking throughout the ride. I didn't ask her anything but considering that she hasn't let go my hand since when we left the hotel worries me.

" Do you remember when i met Anchal in hospital?" she asked

I knew evetually it will be something related to her. I regret having her in my life.

I looked at Geet urging her to continue. She took a deep sigh before she looked right into my eyes.

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*Geet's POV*

Its high time i did tell Maan about what i learned from Anchal. I was trying to protect him but now he should know what is happening around him.

FLASHBACK

When me and Aarav were out shopping i got a call from hospital saying that Anchal met with an accident and she needs to talk to me before she enters the OT. I was sure it will be about Maan, now i was determined to talk to her and give her a piece of my mind on staying away from someone else's man.

I entered the room where Anchal lay with many tubes on her body and machines surrounding her. When i went near she looked at me with her dope eyes. She looked so much in pain and i felt bad.

"Geet" she called my name

I looked at her helpless not knowing what to do.

"hey" i said

" You must be wondering why i wanted to talk to you" she said

I looked at her blankly motionless.

"or are you wondering why i am back in Maan's life?" she asked

Now i stared at her with narrowed eyebrows.

" You must be knowing that we had a history " she said

I nodded.

" But i always knew we are not made for each other. But know what Geet i always knew something else " she said looking at me.

I looked at her. She chuckled looking the other side

" i knew that anyone who he truly loves will be treated no less than a princess" she said

I can't agree with her less. He does treat me like a princess.

" I was selfish enough to convince him that i was the one' for him until my father went hard on us"


" He thought Maan will be no less than his father and so he didn't want me involved with him. " she said looking at me.

"My dad chose Ashok for me, he had everything that a girl wants except time and attention. When i saw you and Maan well i am not gonna lie , i was jealous of you. He was treating you how every girl wants to be treated by her man. He was charming, attentive, loyal and he loved you a lot. I wanted to show my dad how wrong his decision was about Maan and i wanted to show Ashok how someone in love should be treated." She said

It all suddenly made sense. Her popping out everywhere we went and her invitations for dinner and lunch.

"you must have thought those dinner invites were suspicious " she said

"a bit" i said

We both laughed before she looked at me making a bit self conscious.

"But i didn't call you here to tell you how lucky you are for having him though that counts " she said

Now i looked at her worried

"A week ago my father received a call from Mr.Keshav Khuranna " she said

"Keshav Khuranna ?" i asked

"Maan's father don't you know " she asked

Maan's father? My whole world spun. Maan's father, i still couldn't digest that.

"i thought he was dead " i said as softly as possible

" he isn't who told you that ?" she asked

Maan never told me what happened with his father. He told me about his mother's death, how he suffered and then how he grew up with Anchal's father's help. He never told me what happened to his father later. He completely skipped it.

"He is alive?" i asked shocked

"He is Geet." She said

Composing myself after the shock. I looked at anchal.

"Why did he contact him?" i asked

"There are many things that Maan doesn't know so high chances that you are not aware of it " she said

"like what?" i asked

"Geet i ..." before Anchal could tell further we were interrupted by nurse who asked me to go out not wanting to disturb the patient.

I tried my best to talk to Anchal but was unsuccessful.

"Take care of Maan " she said before she was taken to the OT.

FIN

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Maan looked at me as if his heart was pulled out of his body and i just told him that i crushed it. Please God do us good.

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I guess it will be over in next 3-4 parts

Now Anchal is serious yet she talk to Geet for so long, you must think its strange but well thats accepted in fiction.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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so anchal wants to show her dad what every girls wants with her partner

she told about maan's father that he is alive.😲 now what is stored in maan's life
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi congrats on the new thread! Interestin update! FB secenes well incorporated! So anchal tells Geet abt Maan's dad! Geet finally tells Maan everything! Suspense! update soon! Well written 😊
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Congrats for the new thread
Awesum prt
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congrats on your new thread ...
lovely update ..a bit scary ...
hope all goes well with Maneet
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nice update
anchal told geet that maan's dad is alive...
now what will happen...
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aanchal is not bad as we thought
she want to show her dad n fianc how a partner should be..
maans dad is alive..
n what s going behind maan
is he in trouble..
ossum part
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Congo for New Thread.. !!

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