Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 78

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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This update was more on court proceedings! Infact the most of it highlights on dat yet the chapter dsnt fail to make a tremendous impact!! bt there are so many n the chapter is long..so i will just quote--😊
so i will start 4m dis-'That's
why Abhay never wanted to get
involved with a human. Not for him,
but for her. He has suffered enough in this life to know how to bear isolation
and suffering. He would have lived like
this for another 200 years, won't make
a difference. Why she had to come and
change everything for him and herself
as well? Why she had to give him a taste of love, being human, to feel and'- 👏 Spectacular tanzie! This lines are just awesuum.! Specially the one that i undrlind. 👏 so beautifully u have brought out his mind! True-isolation is nothing new to him! Very true! thanks so much Indu. i always like how u highlight the parts u liked and honestly i like them more when i see them in our comment 😆

'It's a hit or miss. If today if she
cant defend Abhay she might lose him
forever and she can't allow anyone to
do it. She didn't want Abhay to know it.
There's a chance he will lose the temper
and say something which might take wrong turn for the case. She felt
emotionally overwhelmed. There was
insecurity building inside, fear, anger,
madness and extreme love. Her heart
cannot carry all that together anymore.
Pia just wanted the case to end.' this isnt turning point part of the story yet i loved this one because the way it has been explained! here the pressure of conducting a case day after day n how horribly it effcts the mind n creates emotional hazards has been shown excellently!! Courtroom proceedings in supernatural world is no less traumatic!! Fantabulous! 👏 thanks Indu. the case is key point right now in the story and i had to bring out the helplessness of both of them

'Abhay glanced at Kol, he has a feeling today is going to be an
extremely dramatic day.' was this a hint tanzie ? 😉 i guess this was presented in order to prepare the readers for a good long roller coaster ride!😉 yes hint indeed 😆

And it starts here--'Pia wasn't ready for
this. the old man said he lost his powers
as wizard but he do know everything
and he isn't any compelled human that
Pia will easily counter-defense him. She
failed to prove him wrong. He confidently described how he saw
Abhay killing Gaurav Khurana, how and
when Abhay's eye color changed and
how for this even in darkness of the
forest he could recognize him that he is
a vampire. He perfectly described because he isn't afraid of darkness or
jungles because he has seen the
supernatural world for a long long time
and he was strolling inside the jungle
to search for his lost tiger cub!! To make
it worse, he brought photo of him with his tiger cub infront of his house and
the scanner resulted it as "unedited
photograph" ' 👏 👏 superb..superb..tanzie!! Presenting a story wth a right dose..of good humour is extremely tough!! Yet u have blended it here marvellously!!👏

'Kol was surprised Pia didn't even
point out a pet tiger cub is not allowed
on grounds of animal rights in India. In truth Pia was too tense, sick and when
fear and frustration grip you usually
your sane mind betrays you. Exactly
was happening with Pia.'- amazing!! Dexterously amazing i say!!!👏 ⭐️You know i was completely bowled by the marvellous use of humour so efortlessly! Its so fluid that dsnt luk forced in anyway n neither it effects the seriousness of a courtroom proceeding!! 👏 👏 and so true-in times like dis a mind dsnt work properly!! even a sane mind would collapse ! Cnt blame. it happens right. she is a human and trama and too much tress can make peoples brain function differently so yea had to right it.

and that dsnt end here!-
'He said
softly, "darling see..." But haseena cut
her in, "Sue your darling away Mr
Raichand. Save my son and I don't
know how.' superb!😆My god tanzie!😆 this was as amazing as the cub!!👏

''WOMEN. be it vampire
and human can always drive you
nuts!!"-this dialogue is awesuum n i simply loved it!! Completely admire for the way u have suggestd it! ⭐️Nt to forget this also reflects even men are nthng bt same be it vampire!😆👍🏼 yeap n its true 😉

Now abt the action-
tanzie u have to belev me when i say this-i really really was immencely amazed when i came to ths part! I wantd to mention it be4 bt forgot. The courtroom n its detailing are excellent!!! Perfect!! 👏 I simply lovd Judge Terrance's portrayal n other details!! Superb!⭐️
'Jury Clementine who
was till now sleeping woke up.' -and this crackd me up! 😆 bt thngs like dis does happn even in real court rooms! What a realistic credible picturisation!!!👏


and tanzie i guess i havdm said dis number of times bt anyway am never tired so i will say again u are completely perfection personified especially when it cums to supernatural detailing-you are an ace!⭐️ and dis says it all!- 'the man or whoever
from court stuff took Alina's left wrist
and cut a little, put the blood in a vial
and infront of everyone he poured the
vial of blood on a white plate. Pia was curiously watching not knowing what's
going on and what the plate is made of.
the blood started to travel inside the
plate and a wolf image raised in line of
blood and another one with light of
power, meaning wizard. The man declared: this girl is half sister of Gaurav
Khurana, Half werewolf and half wizard
bloodline.' 👍🏼

and dis one! I couldnt stop laughing myself..🤣- 'Abhay knows he was sleeping half of
the time. He couldn't help muttered,
"you would better ask what he was
dreaming for all the time he was
asleep."-You'r soo soo good in making such great humorous scenes!excellent tanzie excellent!! I don't know what else to say! U are just amazing!⭐️ sorry bt am always short of words! Often i dnt knw how to express! Am just i guess too spellbound!!👏
and dis again-'Some people started laughing and Mr
Paul Clementine gave a huge yawn,
"Your honor. I think the case was on
killing a fairy right? The accused should
be punished." the whole court started
laughing and Judge Terence rolled her eyes, "Sit down Paul. and read the
summary again."⭐️ this might luk as nt so important compared to the story,i mean it myt nt concern the current track n the seriousness of the atmosphere bt it is in no way less in magnifying the impact!! These additions myt b little bt in effct they'r gruesome!! i knw dis comment myt luk lyk..am blabbering..😆 bt tanzie am too too enthralled!!
Plz pardon my rambling bt i cudnt help myself frm mentioning dis one!-'Abhay could read her face and he
couldn't help a sarcastic smirk and
before anybody can say anything he
couldn't stop himself, "that's because a
hybrid jury is sitting right on top left of
u. that rule changed long ago. care to stop using makeup for a while and read
the rule books instead?" !👏
and wow! These.. ends wth a brilliance!!-👍🏼'The vampire Mrinalini was in shocked,
"OMG is she pregnant?" Victoria looked bored, "Mrina.. how
many times I told you not to watch
hindi serials? when a woman fell
doesnt mean she is pregnant always.
*BULLSHIT* she is sick I think." The werewolf Aditya looked amused,
"is she dead?" Victoria rolled her eyes again, "You are
seriously a wolf? can't you feel she is
alive?"
and i love dis line-😳-'"Oh you got permission. Good.
Otherwise I dont know what Abhay
would have done. Their love is
legendary I must say. One of a kind."
would love to see more of kol!!😃 perhaps mre in the future updats..if possible?😊

Over all a stupendously fabulous update!! 👏 Carry on please..and am again sorry for being soo..late.
bt like i said..i would always cum...😉 cnt miss u knw..!
n thanks a ton for the pm. And giving us such great updats inspite of ur crazy time scedule! Take care..🤗 thanks a lot Indu . for such wonderful comment. it means really a lot to me 🤗 i tried to best to bring some humor. im not good with humor so i had to try it as practice maybe + the story is long so it cant always be the same type as in very serious or abhiya romance. i have to explore other tracks. different scenarios and people and i tried my best. the court situation is a mock kind of like real life political situation. how fragile they are. kol will be there for some time. he isnt wont dissappear in book 4. no worries 😆


p.s. Cnt wait for book-4!!too excited!! 🥳😃

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am first after a long long time 🥳

Finally Pia and Mohini came face to face 🥳 Now dont think I have lost my marbles to be rejoicing but I always wanted to see that ever since you mentioned Mohini. And I just loved it. The whole scene was written brilliantly Mohini - I guess the name itself is enough to imbibe fear in anybody and imagine being confronted in flesh and blood for real 😲 Not welcoming exactly. I am not surprised at seeing Pia's intitial reaction of fear. She is a fool if she doesn't fear her coz if she doesn't she can never be on guard and knowing Mohini, even a momentary lapse in letting the guard down is risky. But I liked it when Pia snapped back at her when she reminded him of Abhay's state 😎 That's Pia Raichand for you. The only person who is capable of taking on Mohini is her and not because she is extraordinary but her love for Abhay is beyond all the boundaries and she will not let anyone harm him as long as she stands by him. Mohini tricked Pia into taking a strand of her hair? 😲 I am scared for Pia now

No adjectives this time either, as u will say I exaggerate again but I hope my comment says it all