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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Oh gosh. Alina really saved the day what with Pia's stress and everything. I knew Pia wouldnt be able to do that much with so much stress. she seriously needs to relax and I hope she recuperates in time for the next one.The humour was well written. I loved Abhay's interruptions. lol
Oh man...Mohini and Kol / Mohini and Pia meeting sounds really good...please please update as soon as possible? This is still my favourite :P

Oh and awesomely written Tanzie. Stop cribbing. :P



Thanks Shreya. Abhay and Pia are pretty helpless in that situation. glad u liked the humor i was particularly worried about that. Kol and Mohini will defo happen. pia and mohini im not sure, in a dilemma. n shut up 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

No worries Tanzie n I understand how it feels Its more important that u have peace of mind n happiness in ur life n its perfectly alright to update late. Please do it when u get time n I can say for myself - I shall wait for ur update no matter the time 😳 I wish I could say Eid Mubarak or Happy Dussera or Bijoy Dashami but I am a lil late this is the shortest comment you made 😆

Coming to the update it was fab as ever n I never felt u have lost the touch I found it normal sized coz my lengthiest update has been close to being three times as big as this 😆 I felt so bad for Pia 😭 She has completely ignored her health n it took a toll on her but am glad Abhay can be there for atleast a little while with her. SPC jury maybe bored of this case but I defo am not 🤣 Its been one of the best aspects of this story 👏 I am waiting to know what will happen next. Pia Mohini face off ⭐️ Been waiting for long.
As always ur updates r spellbinding to say the least 👏 👏 👏
Do continue when u get the time 🤗 And take care 😳 thanks so much.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

amzng update tanzi ... nd its not boring nd too long ,after reading complete update mjhe laga aww khtm hogya ... I can read ur updates full day without feelng bore
u describd pia's worry , anger so well juries of court were so stupid
now dey knw dat ragini is not alive so nxt trial will going 2 b intrstng
waitng 4 mohini's face of wid pia nd kol


Thanks hema. thats so cute of it.. it was long to write thou and maybe it took so much time to write that i feel its long 😆
thanks so much for saying it means a lot to me 🤗
will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: alicia212

wow great story plz update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for the pm


Thanks a lot 😃

Originally posted by: Syed695

MindBlowing..First Thanks for Updating after long time..Loved it..loved their connection..its the testing time for their love..and things will be solved but slowly..Waiting fir the face off...Thanks for the PM!!


Thanks so much. testing time is going to be over soon.even if i cant promise pia and mohinis faceoff as im planning for some change but Kol and Mohini is must.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

wow
awesome
loved it
now what will happen
just cant wait to read more


Thanks a lot for reading :)

Originally posted by: TeDylove

such racing heart update😆 so much tension ,,, so much drama😆.. but i love it so much.. and thank u for lupdate🤗


Where have you been? i thot you ditched my writing long ago 😆 thanks a lot for commenting and keep commenting 🤗

Originally posted by: aku0705



first I thank u for giving the update
now regarding the upadte it was superb ,well written .
👏👏

it is getting interesting more and more
waiting for pia and mohini's face off
and abhay's release .




Thanks so much for commenting. glad u liked it and not getting bored. Abhay will win the case in next update. planning for changes in story so not sure if Pia and mohini will come but kol will surely do.


Originally posted by: aadi720

nice update...👏⭐️

its wonderful to see pia fighting for abhay, when she herself is suffering so much...😃
continue soon and thanks for the pm...😃


Thanks a lot dear. glad you liked it. all the pain would be over soon in next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

wow that was superb update

pia's anger, her frustration, her agitation...that whole court scene was described well. i could actually feel pia's anger when she shouted in the court. poor pia...really feeling bad for her. and loved the way abhay was taking care of her n how he tried to calm her.
so trial extended yet again. hope this time that pamona's real identity will be revealed and abhay would be free.
and also looking forward to kol n mohini's meeting.

and please there is no need to say sorry or anything because the update was just awesome and we can wait for it even for months without loosing interest. so just relax, you can update whenever you get time.


Thanks a lot Anjali. thats all they can do. be mad or watever but its for each other. i hope the helpless came into words well. Abhay would be free in next update.
thanks lot for the support. im trying to get some time to write so that slowly but i can finish the update.

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

That was an awesome update Tanzee. I completed all the updates only today.

You are an amazing writer. You jump from genre to genre in a very nuanced way.
You simply rock when you write something about supernatural, romance, intimate scenes, the sentiments of relations and to cap it all, the court room scene. What if it is a supernatural court, its again people and their biased opinions.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one and will wait (im)patiently for your next update. Sorry. But I am cant help being impatient as this is too good but I promise not to bother you. thanks a lot Harini. i like to experiment with characters in my story and you can say abhiya are my muse so i experiment on them 😳 thanks for understanding, my current job is extremely hectic and stressful so i have no time even for myself. i want to write but i just dont get enough time.

While reading the FF itself, I get lost into the characters feeling their feelings - be it happiness or sorry or anger or frustration. I dont know how end up feeling every time thinking of an update and finally managing to post it. It must drain out your energy a lot. Its really like using a powerful spell.

I really wish this court room scene would get over soon and Abhay gets acquitted. I mean I am not able to stand the suspense. I can feel the frustration of Piya. thanks so much. court things will end up next update.

Speaking of Piya, what is actually happening to her. Pardon me for asking like Mrinalni. Is Piya pregnant. I know I am asking like in TV serials only. But is she really pregnant. It is told that Vampires cant reproduce. May be they thought so as there was no partnering of Human girl and a Vampire man. This may also come as a surprise. Or is it because of the trauma she had been undergoing all these days, the anger, the helplessness, the frustration that had taken a toll on her health. Wish Chand could do something to help them. She is just a human and even in a Human court she cant last long as she is not experienced and people (be it human or supernatural) are not playing it fair.
Wish there could be someone to help her.
I know how difficult it would be to update at a regular interval esp when you have other things to take care in life.

Take your time Tanzee and please dont give this up. lets see if she is or not. i left hint and sarcasm both so wait for the final declaration 😛 to know that wait for next update. theres actually a lot of people helping her. theres kol, theres aryan and haseena and now alina. even though they cant help her directly here they are giving their contributions also Abhay. thanks a lot.





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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

fabulous update tanzie👏 👏 Loved it...ahan!! so kya pia pregnancy ke signs dikhane lagi??😉😆 seriously SPC has more high drama cast than a daily soap saas-bahu...🤣 phew thank god alina aa gayi...uff shit yaar pia galat time pe faint ho gayi...warna pamona ka secret out ho hi gaya tha...hope pia is fine now...oh oh oh!!! mohini is here..!.!.aaand action!


Thanks Juhi. i left hint and wait for next update. seeing the comments i decided i wont spill the beans 🤣 i wanted SPC to have laughter reasons glad it happened. thank you 😆

Originally posted by: mire220

Woawww...

the update is just awesomeee..
Boring??... No way !!!!

I loved it to read it after so long...
thanks for the pm and continue soon ok!!!!
Amazing story .. very good written !!
dear Tanzie i will always love your work .. never lose intreress !!!!


Thanks a lot. you read it from beginning? entire story? thanks so much for liking my story :)

Originally posted by: Priya46

awesome can't wait for another update


Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya

It was awsm update. Full of drama. Bt i luved it. I wish fr pia to b pregnent. And it was nt long update, it was small update fr me. Hehehehehe... And i'll wait fr ur next update. Try to update soon.


Thanks so much Piya. lets see if it happens or not. will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Awesome and long but very very interesting chapter and you described Pia's fear very deeply and I think she is pregnant but don't know it is true or just my imagination and will wait for the next update no matter how long you take.


Thanks a lot. whats your name? lets see if she is or not.thanks so much for being patient. will try to write soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
tanz...tanz...tanz...what have you done?? this is one of your best...and also one of my fav. i have already told you that i have read this now god knows how many times. since two days, i was reading this fic..all over again. and guess what? i FINALLY caught up with this...and when i read your latest update..i was like...this cant be...i want to read more...this just cant end here...i have always told you how much i adore this fic..and so it characters...be it abhay, piya, chand, haseena, amber and finally my sweetheart aryan.

shall i tell a secret? anyway...it wont be a secret anymore now 😆 i sometimes cant figure out whom i find more adorable, my real abhay or this fictional aryan created by u. sometimes i feel i am in love with both 😆 and no kidding here 😛

now coming to the updates...i had earlier read update till the time pamona enters the court as ragini...and now i read all the parts...together..its just amazing...the way you have handled the trials of SPC...its just awesome...no words 👏

piya is one tigress now..the way she is handling everything, is just amazing..she is one strong gal, standing by abhay and ofcourse a stubborn A**...the kids are so so cute..and i like their bonding with amber...and my aryan, risking everything just protect abhay..the shadow ritual was just mindblowing...and lastly, mohini, she is just kicka** ..she never gives up..does she? i am actually looking forward to the time when mohini and piya will come face to face :)

the court is just hilarious at times...honestly, i really dont know what should i write...while reading i was like i will mention this...mention that in comment but now i am totally clueless...

all i can say is just ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️


P.S: now that i have caught up with this one, shreya's time and again is next on my list now 😛 😆
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This update was more on court proceedings! Infact the most of it highlights on dat yet the chapter dsnt fail to make a tremendous impact!! bt there are so many n the chapter is long..so i will just quote--😊
so i will start 4m dis-'That's
why Abhay never wanted to get
involved with a human. Not for him,
but for her. He has suffered enough in this life to know how to bear isolation
and suffering. He would have lived like
this for another 200 years, won't make
a difference.
Why she had to come and
change everything for him and herself
as well? Why she had to give him a taste of love, being human, to feel and'- 👏 Spectacular tanzie! This lines are just awesuum.! Specially the one that i undrlind. 👏 so beautifully u have brought out his mind! True-isolation is nothing new to him! Very true!

'It's a hit or miss. If today if she
cant defend Abhay she might lose him
forever and she can't allow anyone to
do it. She didn't want Abhay to know it.
There's a chance he will lose the temper
and say something which might take wrong turn for the case. She felt
emotionally overwhelmed. There was
insecurity building inside, fear, anger,
madness and extreme love. Her heart
cannot carry all that together anymore.
Pia just wanted the case to end.' this isnt turning point part of the story yet i loved this one because the way it has been explained! here the pressure of conducting a case day after day n how horribly it effcts the mind n creates emotional hazards has been shown excellently!! Courtroom proceedings in supernatural world is no less traumatic!! Fantabulous! 👏

'Abhay glanced at Kol, he has a feeling today is going to be an
extremely dramatic day.' was this a hint tanzie ? 😉 i guess this was presented in order to prepare the readers for a good long roller coaster ride!😉

And it starts here--'Pia wasn't ready for
this. the old man said he lost his powers
as wizard but he do know everything
and he isn't any compelled human that
Pia will easily counter-defense him. She
failed to prove him wrong. He confidently described how he saw
Abhay killing Gaurav Khurana, how and
when Abhay's eye color changed and
how for this even in darkness of the
forest he could recognize him that he is
a vampire. He perfectly described because he isn't afraid of darkness or
jungles because he has seen the
supernatural world for a long long time
and he was strolling inside the jungle
to search for his lost tiger cub!! To make
it worse, he brought photo of him with his tiger cub infront of his house and
the scanner resulted it as "unedited
photograph" ' 👏 👏 superb..superb..tanzie!! Presenting a story wth a right dose..of good humour is extremely tough!! Yet u have blended it here marvellously!!👏

'Kol was surprised Pia didn't even
point out a pet tiger cub is not allowed
on grounds of animal rights in India.
In truth Pia was too tense, sick and when
fear and frustration grip you usually
your sane mind betrays you. Exactly
was happening with Pia.'- amazing!! Dexterously amazing i say!!!👏 ⭐️You know i was completely bowled by the marvellous use of humour so efortlessly! Its so fluid that dsnt luk forced in anyway n neither it effects the seriousness of a courtroom proceeding!! 👏 👏 and so true-in times like dis a mind dsnt work properly!! even a sane mind would collapse ! Cnt blame.

and that dsnt end here!-
'He said
softly, "darling see..." But haseena cut
her in, "Sue your darling away Mr
Raichand. Save my son and I don't
know how.' superb!😆My god tanzie!😆 this was as amazing as the cub!!👏

''WOMEN. be it vampire
and human can always drive you
nuts!!"-this dialogue is awesuum n i simply loved it!! Completely admire for the way u have suggestd it! ⭐️Nt to forget this also reflects even men are nthng bt same be it vampire!😆👍🏼

Now abt the action-
tanzie u have to belev me when i say this-i really really was immencely amazed when i came to ths part! I wantd to mention it be4 bt forgot. The courtroom n its detailing are excellent!!! Perfect!! 👏 I simply lovd Judge Terrance's portrayal n other details!! Superb!⭐️
'Jury Clementine who
was till now sleeping woke up.' -and this crackd me up! 😆 bt thngs like dis does happn even in real court rooms! What a realistic credible picturisation!!!👏


and tanzie i guess i havdm said dis number of times bt anyway am never tired so i will say again u are completely perfection personified especially when it cums to supernatural detailing-you are an ace!⭐️ and dis says it all!- 'the man or whoever
from court stuff took Alina's left wrist
and cut a little, put the blood in a vial
and infront of everyone he poured the
vial of blood on a white plate. Pia was curiously watching not knowing what's
going on and what the plate is made of.
the blood started to travel inside the
plate and a wolf image raised in line of
blood and another one with light of
power, meaning wizard. The man declared: this girl is half sister of Gaurav
Khurana, Half werewolf and half wizard
bloodline.' 👍🏼

and dis one! I couldnt stop laughing myself..🤣- 'Abhay knows he was sleeping half of
the time. He couldn't help muttered,
"you would better ask what he was
dreaming for all the time he was
asleep."-You'r soo soo good in making such great humorous scenes!excellent tanzie excellent!! I don't know what else to say! U are just amazing!⭐️ sorry bt am always short of words! Often i dnt knw how to express! Am just i guess too spellbound!!👏
and dis again-'Some people started laughing and Mr
Paul Clementine gave a huge yawn,
"Your honor. I think the case was on
killing a fairy right? The accused should
be punished." the whole court started
laughing and Judge Terence rolled her eyes, "Sit down Paul. and read the
summary again."⭐️ this might luk as nt so important compared to the story,i mean it myt nt concern the current track n the seriousness of the atmosphere bt it is in no way less in magnifying the impact!! These additions myt b little bt in effct they'r gruesome!! i knw dis comment myt luk lyk..am blabbering..😆 bt tanzie am too too enthralled!!
Plz pardon my rambling bt i cudnt help myself frm mentioning dis one!-'Abhay could read her face and he
couldn't help a sarcastic smirk and
before anybody can say anything he
couldn't stop himself, "that's because a
hybrid jury is sitting right on top left of
u. that rule changed long ago. care to stop using makeup for a while and read
the rule books instead?" !👏
and wow! These.. ends wth a brilliance!!-👍🏼'The vampire Mrinalini was in shocked,
"OMG is she pregnant?" Victoria looked bored, "Mrina.. how
many times I told you not to watch
hindi serials? when a woman fell
doesnt mean she is pregnant always.
*BULLSHIT* she is sick I think." The werewolf Aditya looked amused,
"is she dead?" Victoria rolled her eyes again, "You are
seriously a wolf? can't you feel she is
alive?"
and i love dis line-😳-'"Oh you got permission. Good.
Otherwise I dont know what Abhay
would have done. Their love is
legendary I must say. One of a kind."
would love to see more of kol!!😃 perhaps mre in the future updats..if possible?😊

Over all a stupendously fabulous update!! 👏 Carry on please..and am again sorry for being soo..late.
bt like i said..i would always cum...😉 cnt miss u knw..!
n thanks a ton for the pm. And giving us such great updats inspite of ur crazy time scedule! Take care..🤗



p.s. Cnt wait for book-4!!too excited!! 🥳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

eid mubarak to you tanzie and an amazing update.

the entire court room scene was just fab...poor pia...she wasn't even in best of her health yet the way she fought for abhay was marvellous.her fear,anger and frustration were so well portrayed here. loved how abhay calmed her down.

glad to see alina reached and supported them in the court but seriously the judges at this trial looks like a bunch of jokers!!!they are plain stupid.
even though haseena and chand couldn't inform pia about the ragini stuff i am sure next time pia would make use of that. abhay pia scene in the last part was lovely.

finally i am happy that in the next update pia and mohini will meet as i always wanted to see that. i am hoping it's gonna be a firecracker meeting b/w both of them and also kol.
can't wait to read further and take ur time in updates.will wait for it!!!


Thanks Megha. glad u liked it. tried to bring humor. Thats all Abhay could do for now but since we are moving towards book 4. theres a huge blow coming up and Abhay will have to take control of everything around him. as all of them will be at stake. anyways enough spoiler 😆 the judges are like politicians 😉 im planning some changes in story so not sure weather Pia and mohini will meet but Kol and Mohini will surely. thanks so much.


Originally posted by: -Chinky-

You have a bad habit of underestimating your work tanzie..😆
the update was everything but boring ! 😳

Guess my fav part ? The jury members sleeping and one of them asking "we are here because a fairy was murdered?" 🤣 🤣
The court proceedings were really good.. I am glad alina came to give her testimony. And god this pamona..such an useless she is :-/
Poor piya..she has to deal with her when she herself is feeling so low. I hope she recovers soon.. And she will, after all abhay is there 😉 I just want her to know about pamona's identity..!
The precap was like WOWW. I always wanted this. Piya and mohini will meet..yayy ! Finally kol ?! Seeing mohini after so long. The next chapter will be one hell of a read...
Love ya and eid mubarak 🤗

PS - I am proud of myself. Ask why ?? This time I am on time. No late comments 😛


Thanks for commenting and I knew you would love that part 🤣 they will soon know about Pamona. Pia will recover soon, no worries and win the case in next update. Love u too 🤗
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