OS - Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its very short and a total Ainwayi, again. :>


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The beautiful dimmed silvery hue in the room changed into gravel grey as the lightening illuminated it theatrically for a moment or two while the lovers lying in an intimate embrace on the bed, found a reason more to sigh, even as he gently yet firmly brought her even more closer to himself by the arm that was adorning her waist while his fingers ran along the bare skin of her back, as they whispered words of love with their light touches. She moved her palm that was resting on his shoulder and gliding it along his chest, brought it to rest on his abdomen, giving her fingers a light strain, as she raised her face up a little from crook of his neck where it had found comfort in. She couldnt see his eyes clearly yet she knew they were at her, perfectly able to decipher her every nuance in the dark as she could of his., waiting for her to say or do something that would hold the heart with its strings as they would stretch, weighing down by the deep and tender emotions and then release to feel lighter even as the heart was left to thud faster.

'I love you, Arnav' she spoke as her lips hovered over his, a light brush with just the feeling of them being close. She could make out his heartbeats under her other palm as her mind transformed them into dear sounds and then helped them to make its way to her heart. The rain came down as suddenly without startling them as an intruder but being there with the promise of lending its mist to envelop them away from everything outside. He could feel her smiling over his lips as the loud drumming of rainfall over the glass of the french doors, beckoned. The warmth left him as she fluidly moved away from, sitting on the edge of the bed as she looked outside and bent down to retrieve his white cotton shirt, drawing it on herself and closing a couple of buttons even as she moved on nimble feet to open the glass doors, looking resplendant. The loud buzz transformed into a musical chime, the cool droplets lighting up her nerve endings as she closed her eyes and let them drench her. Two palms entwined their fingers with hers on either side, as he came to stand behind her. She cherished his warmth even more now as it pleasantly seeped into her body and ran like delicious rivulets in her veins that found their way all along and inside of her. He raised one of hands, bringing them to his lips, kissed them softly even as he then made to rest both of them around her waist, the now translucent shirt sticking to her body. She tilted her head and rested it over his shoulder, as he kissed the corner of eye and lightly skimmed over her cheeks and jaw, taking in her scent and whispered in her ears, lips close enough for her to feel them move over her skin as he softly said, ' You look beautiful tonight.' That tonight is every night was an altogether different matter. She smiled. His words were so expected yet making her feel them with a renewed anticipation. Running up his hands from over hers that rested on her stomach, he gently glided over tender curves and reached her shoulders , turning her around. She wasted no time in covering his warm lips with her cool ones as they moulded their bodies into each other , crossing their arms over each others back, the rain fulfilling the promise of cocooning them.


A/N ~


Thank You for always being there..!! Thank you for reading :)
Edited by Anupama. - 10 years ago


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IronButterfly thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
You have beautifully captured such a tender moment.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nope not sleep inducing at all dear
but cute and sweet
awww that was adorable
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Romantic, heart warming so Khushi & Arnav!

Loved the details, it was as if the rain was a character within itself.

Just beautifully expressed.

*sigh* you make me miss Arnav & Khushi so much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for not trashing this , it would have been a crime ! And also hope you slept well.

I had read a quote somewhere ,can't recall whose ," Some people feel the rain , others just get wet" !
I think i finally understood this.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Anu,

Tune naya OS likha aur I didn't even get a PM? Are you playing Tom and Jerry with me too?😉

Ainvayi, ainvayi loot gayi...(tera OS padkar...😆)

That was romantic, sensuous, full of passion and love.

It's been raining in my part of the world since morning and I have been cursing it but your OS just made me fall in love with rain. It was very beautiful described. Loved it!!

Do me a favor, don't ever discard any of your magical writings. Just share with us in whatever form or shape it is. You have no idea how much I enjoy reading you and how happy it makes me to see you write regular.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was pure romance and you set the heart, mind and everything racing. This is what dreams are made of and when such dreams become reality, the moment will combust into a million pieces. Oo...la la...Loved it, Anu.

Whoever thought the best sensual OS's will be written by the happening single ladies on IF...Between Del and you...you've conquered this section. And I as a reader am a happy camper.

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sigh.

So sensuous, so romantic...makes me want to sing the song you have taken the title from...

And also STOP ADDING TO MY LIST OF THINGS FUTURE RELATIONSHIP MUST FULFILL! Bechara! ;) :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a beautiful OS! This put me in a good mood that I had to take five minutes and listen to the so g again, as I love it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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If u write aiveiiiyy and this beautifully...wid sleepy mind thenvu shud write more in that state :D
one word...beautiful

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