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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok this is probably going to suck but after watching today's episode I have been making up a story in my brain. I'm not a writer and don't know how to transfer my thinking into words. Well anyways I wrote a really short OS about my thinking.BTW my grammar sucks and I haven't proofread this.

After listening to zoya, asad got out of her hold and left from the mazar for the airport. He wasn't thinking straight anymore because he was too hurt by her words and also whatver happened with him. Zoya lost control and started crying in the mazar. Asad in New york was miserable without his love and had sleepless nights. Zoya on the other hand left asad's house and started living in an apartment and woking in a company. She also kept looking for her father without any luck. A year passed away and asad thought that he had enough and he would go back to india to his zoya. He went to his house and found it empty and dirty cuz no one had lived there for a year. He started getting worried and tried to look for zoya but couldn't find her. After several days he started his old routine of going to the office and one day suddenly he sees zoya dressed in office clothes looking beautiful as ever. He runs up to her and puts his hand on her shoulder, she turns around and sees asad. Asad hugs her and surprises zoya. Zoya on the other hand hugs him back but after some time realizez what's happening. She pushes asad away and asks him why has he returned now, he left her alone in India. She was really angry at him so she just left him standing there.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue ...
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Interesting. Please continue. I really wanna see where you take this.
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Interesting...pls continue soon...pls pm me the next update...
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interesting
i like it
excited to read what will hapend and what will asad do to win zoya again
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interesting
plzzz pm me for next part
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intersting...continue soon...plz pm me next part
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continue and pm me wen u update plz

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