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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Okey dear..

will try later in afternoon today

wow...aaj update great,...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 27

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Shruthe - Tons of Thanks and 🤗 for this wonderful banner Dear.

P.S: Many are in confusion so, as Geet has just passed 10th, she is now in 11th. Not in medical school yet, that will come later with its own turn point.

She was about to leave and then stopped "but bhai, don't ever hurt mom and dad. You are their pride."

Maan smiled and nodded. Not knowing how will he balance everything? He only hoped they should not hurt Geet or else he cannot tolerate.

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Maan did not know how to explain Geet. She has listened to him all thruought but why not now. But he knew it was his matter and thus she was not compromising.

He decided to give her some space. His pushing on a thing may make her not think well. Also, if he keeps bugging her about their relation she may get diverted and disturbed and this can affect her studies. These 2 yrs were so critical for her career and her career-dream.

Geet was being taken care by Pari and Meera. Other than some minimal help, that too as she would bug them, they did not let her do anything. She was free to do her studies and enjoy. But what would Geet enjoy? It had been 2 days and no call from Chote Thakur. Was he so upset?

"Pari di.. have you met Chote Thakur in office" she at last asked.

"umm hoon.. hamari Chutki.. already missing her Chote Thakur" "woo di no, I mean.. did you meet him or not di"

"No baba.. he loads up all his employee with tons of responsibility. No friendship in office"

When Meera came all late, Geet again posed question to her but they just laughed on her condition, teasing her.

"What's going about your admission" "I am selected in XYZ school" "wow"

"Need gurdian's signature and some document from Chote Thakur" she pouted "but he is not even picking my call"

"Theek hai, leave the message, daudta chala ayega" they again teased her.

Geet left the message and was very hopeful that this time he will come but Maan got the documents ready for her and signed the documents thru Meera.

4 days passed, Geet was almost teary when Meera handed her all the documents.

"Geet he is damn busy" "pehle to kabhi itne busy nahi hue" she said in low voice and left for her room.

Geet got admission in one of the best school, thanks to her great result and Maan would kill her with his angry eyes if she thinks on ground of money.

It had been 8 days now and there was knock on the door. When Meera and Pari were there at home then who else could be there.

Geet ran to open the door but Sam was there "Ohh Sam di, you" "Why you were expecting someone" "Nahi woo..."

"kya, we all know your condition. Pari and Meera told me. But Geet I wanted to talk to you"

"Please come in Di"

"Geet, Maan is so upset with me, he is not even talking. Whatever I suggested was what I thought is good for him. He is not even responding to my Hi's and behaving completely formal. Geet use request kerna, he can at least let me ask sorry. There was nothing intentional"

"No Di, whatever I did was what I thought was correct. You are not at fault."

Then Pari and Meera cheered up Sam and even Geet as she was already low.

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Maan was in his office and nothing seemed to go correct. It had been 10 days he had not contacted Geet.

Seeing Geet's condition, Pari and Meera called all their friends at home to cheerup Geet and they can have some fun time too. On top of it it was Friday. They just could not reach Maan as he was not contacting with anyone.

So Whole Maan's group of friend was having blast off time and they were trying to cheer up Geet but Geet was feeling very low.

There was knock on the door while Geet was all lost. Then next Yash was welcoming Maan

"Aa gaye sahebzade and if our boss is here then just turn around and leave coz we are all in Friday mode."

"Chal hat nautanki" and it was his voice which caught Geet's attention. Involuntarily she got up, so many emotions running on her face and on top was relief of seeing him.

It did not go unnoticed by others and offcourse Maan whose eyes was stuck shamlessly on her.

Pari and Meera very well knowing the condition of Geet, Pari said "Yaar Maan, we have to continuously handle your Geet, now do your duty. Guys let's go and rock Friday night out in disc"

"Haan..waise bhi pari wants to run away from all of us.. her fincee's long Friday call" "Chup" Pari hit him

"Aur Meera Bhi, how boring it will be to take Abi's call between all of us" added Rohan, Meera blushed

All teased each other but in 15 minutes left the house to Maan and Geet who were dying to be alone.

But as soon as Maan closed the door and turned around, Geet was not there. He searched the room and then found her standing in the moonlight in the backyard, slight wind that were blowing and moving her hair strands. She looked a real beauty.

Geet felt him behind her and then his fingers entangled hers. Geet closed her eyes to feel the eternity and took deep breath as his hard chest collapsed with her back. Unable to hold the waves of desire she turned and started hitting on his chest, tears flowing down her eyes.

"I don't want to talk to you" Maan held her hands in his fist, stopping her but as tears kept flowing thru her she struggled to get out of his grip. As she calmed down a little he pulled her to him by her waist and her head hit his hard chest. They stayed there like that as her tears kept on wetting his shirt.

Geet, this time was badly desperate. Nothing right and wrong was visible to her, it was only him. The strong urge to feel him as close as could be made her hand go inside his this shirt as she spoke "you are very very very bad"

Maan felt he has both worlds under him, just by the feel of her claiming him as hers, unknowingly though. He could not stop himself now and his hand went inside her top to feel the smooth skin of hers and making her body on fire

"Kyun Gulam samajh rakha hai apna mujhe?" She looked up at him in shock, how could he even say that but then she lost the grip of her thought when he pulled her even closer and his palm going up her back

"haan tou hoon, hoon Gulam tumhara. But even we have right to feel pain. I am bondage in your love but that doesn't mean I don't feel pain by your constant rejection to our relation"

He bent down and took her soft ear between his teeth, bit it to release his pain. Geet was all melting, she was not strong enough to get out of this heavenly feel but she needed some grip on her whole self. Her nails mercilessly dig inside his skin, only giving pain of pleasure to Maan. They were lost feeling each other, completely captured by thought of other and their feel, none realized when Maan's shirt's buttons were broken by Geet's soft hand and when her Bra's strap got unbuttoned by him, uff how much bottled desire was there. They were lost, completely lost when then bell rang, bringing them to their senses.

Maan reluctantly separated but Geet coming to her sense moved far away, placing her palm on her mouth "Hai babaji, yeh kya ker diya maine". Maan was irritated to core by her last act, left her there and went to open the door.

There was Sam, looking at Maan's open shirt and realizing his condition, she gave him a smile, "Sorry sorry sorry baba, I missed my cell." She picked her phone "Ok, you guys continue" she said teasing Maan, even trying to make situation between her and Maan normal but Maan gave her no expression.

Sam left from there, small tears formed on her eyes. Her best friend was so angry on her. If her small interference in his affair with Geet made him this upset, she knew now what Geet meant to him. She just hoped, Geet can make

him behave normal with her; take her again as his friend.

Maan came inside to find Geet locked herself in the room

He knocked hardly "Geet open the door immediately, I say, damn it."

Geet opened the door but was not able to meet his gaze. Maan held her tightly by her arm

"Now what's this, can you explain? "

"Its all wrong, chote Thakur. I went with the flow, I know its all my fault"

She placed her hand on her mouth.

"What? All we did now was wrong, you are denying all that came up so naturally. Geet please come to sense."

"Chote Thakur, if it is wrong then it is wrong na"

"Damn, you know what, you are making me feel I did all wrong when I strongly feel and know I am not guilty. I did nothing wrong."

But Geet was stuck with "It's my entire fault" and feeling guilty. Maan was completely irritated. He went out in backyard and sunk himself in the swimming pool.

While Geet was all confused and angry on herself, First she was doing wrong, going out of control and secondly she was making him upset all the time.

Maan had been thinking and thinking there in the pool as he took different strokes in water.

"Geet" she heard his voice after an hour or so... his hair wet and water dropping his wet body.

Geet turned away, why she was loosing so easily these days. What was happening? But Maan turned her to him by her arm. Soo close, geet closed her eyes and tried to go far but he pulled her no expression in his eyes

"You are too young to coordinate between your heart and mind at present." Geet looked down. Maan left her and took his seat on the bed

"I think I hurried in explaining you our relation But what could I have done Geet. I had just wanted to confess but your marriage and taking everything between us as wrong made me aggressive in my approach, sorry"

"Chote Tahkur" But Maan raised his hand to stop her

"Let me complete first. I must have not pressurized your tender mind, so nothing is your fault. Take your own time to understand our relation; I can wait for life long"

"But Chote Thakur" "kaha na, let me complete first. I will now not force you to think anything and you too don't think in this direction. Concentrate on your career, that is most important for me. Only that can bring individuality in you"

"Please wear your shirt na" Geet said suddenly "What? Here I m talking something serious, tumhe mere shirt kee padi hai" but how will she explain how her heart is beating seeing him like that, does he have any idea of his effect on her.

"You will catch cold" she said in low voice. Maan irritatingly went and put his shirt on.

"Haan so where I was" "Ji.. woo my career" They were back in guardian and kid mode.

"yes, Concentrate on your career, focus is all I want from you. I am leaving you in care of Pari and Meera and will come to meet you once in a while but only as your mentor or guardian. And I expect same from you. Apne dil ko sambhal ke rakhna."

He openly challenged her, making her know that he knows how her heart wavers when he is around. "JI" and she innocently accepted.

"But, if you don't even call me a single day, I am not talking to you for at least 4 days. You know how I get restless if you do't call, still you trouble me."

came her next confession. Maan smiled internally, this girl is openly claiming that he has to be there for her the way she wants, she shows her rights on him but still her silly mind is stuck on one subject.

"Ok, I am leaving" But Geet immediately jumped "why so soon. You will have to eat something and go." She quickly figured out ways to stop him.

Maan did not know what to do with this girl, she can't see him going, her case is hopeless than his but jidd iskee. Well Maan's hands were tied when she was concerned - "Gulami kee hai nibhani to padegee", he smiled.

"Okay, but just for today. Now onwards I will only come as a guardian" "Okey okey"

Next: Part 28

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-Anu
Edited by tellyme - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😛
keh tho diya magar kya dono alag alag had main reh payenge kya 😆
lovely update
waiting for next eagerly
Edited by reachsky2011 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for posting!! Another great chapter. Poor Geet is so confused. But my sympathy is actually with Maan, he's the only one who knows what he wants and has a plan to get it. I wish this medical school training gives Geet more confidence. I also wonder what will happen if some other medical student falls for Geet. Jealous Maan would be hilarious. I'm also wondering what the Khurana family is planning. There is no way they are staying quiet and accepting the situation. Cannot wait for the next chapter!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
..awesome part
loved it
poor geet dont want be get close with her chote takhur and at the same time she cant able to see her chote thakur going away from her
maan decided to give her time realise her feelings
he wants to see her independant.
geet got addmission in one of the best college
waiting for the next part
Edited by _lehar_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...
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Maan did extremely right by not conversing with Sam...

as a friend make ur friend understand in ur POV is not wrong...u can make conversation with ur friend if they are doing something wrong...but like how Sam planned to make Geet realize by sending her to Maan's office to make her feel inferior is utterly wrong...she has no right to do that...whatever Maan is and what is Geet it is them to decide...

Geet is till jhalli...not realizing that she loves him and love is not a crime... God never made people rich or poor...it is their thinking only which make them inferior...warna mehnat karke insaan oonchai choo sakta hai then no body can uestion what he was...

awesome update...

waiting for next part...


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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is very clear about their relationship n i think geet needs some time to clear her confusion n she should concentrate on her studies n make her own place n identity in this society , not to become equal to maan for this society but for herself n maan's pride. if she loves maan then she should accept n claim their relation openly regardless what society thinks or not.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This exactly was impt
Very truly written she is too young to decide between mind & heart
Very well said

She needs to focus on her studies
That was t main idea basically tight from t beginning
Grt flow Annu
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Posted: 11 years ago
That waas an awesome update anu...
Geet is completely at loss.. and totally confused... she is so lost in the fight between her mind and heart...
Her heart yearns for him.. but her mind restricts her from acknowledging the same... she is not able to accept the fact that she can love him... the society and the way she was brought up doesnt let her accept the love..
on the other hand, maan is at total loss too... he knows that she loves him, but he is clueless as to how to make her understand things... she means the world to him... and he also knows that its not easy to change her mindset too..
A week she was restless to catch a glimpse of him,. and the same was with maan... and when they meet, their heart completely overtakes them and both are lost in their own world of bliss...
and when the reality strikes, again he faces her withdrawal... Its like, getting back to the same point...
And now that maan has decided that he will just act as her guardian, am anxious to know how geet would feel...
She doesnt want him to go and she wants his time,.. but she is so adamant about accepting that their love to be bliss...
Loved the update anu... i love the way u r taking this story... thanks for the update and do continue soon..

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