RoHal OS |StageLights|

Di...mera naam Roshini kyun hai?

Because Princess...tujhe lantern jala kar sabke ghar jaana hai.

The words were spoken in a tone of jest, & yet...there was an earnestness in them. For Neha...her baby sister was a precious gift, the brightest ray in her life. And she would be so for everyone whose lives entwined with hers...
*******

The sudden white flash in the inky blackness momentarily blinded him. He shielded his eyes with his hands...trying to adjust them to the invading brightness. As the stage came into focus, his frown turned into his signature smirk.

Everyone knew the story of the resident womaniser. There was always one girl, who would tame him, turn his world upside down & capture the heart which would so easily move on from one to another without remorse.

To everyone...it was her for him. His gang...the only few who knew him, believed it. He hadn't been with another girl in months, he barely flirted with any, he paid no attention to any other than her. They said it was love.

"Love.", he had scoffed, pure contempt colouring his voice. Love was for the romantics who roamed around college with sappy dreams in their eyes. It was beneath him.

Ever since she had become a permanent fixture in their lives, he had developed a sort of obsession...to click her. In the beginning it had bothered her to no end...she had protested, but in vain.

There were much better models than her, willing to pose for hours if needed be, & yet...only her face on the polaroid fascinated him.

Outwardly...she had little to show of herself. She was blank, unremarkable...people often wondered how she had become a part of the ruling gang of Regent's in the first place. Everytime he looked at her through his prized lenses, the answer would look him in the eye. Whatever part of her lured him to her pictures had lured them to her in reality.

And so...he kept going back for more. Endlessly, he would capture every emotion, every fleeting thought going through her head. And it would still not be enough.

People said it was love.

He knew it was addiction. A drug more potent than anything Roy could have laid his hands.

People said it was possessiveness.

He knew it was ownership.
*******

She looked at him, standing across the auditorium. The inviting smile on her face hid the burning hatred in her heart. The only emotion which she could have for him.

The only thing which bothered her was the anger that she felt when he lifted his lens towards someone other than her. It was one which she had no answer to, much to her annoyance.
*****

He saw her hold out her hand to him, & made his way slowly towards her.

He just stood at the edge of this brightness, let her hold his hand, pull him out of the shadows, into the stage lights...

...and into the darkness...

Okay...this is super bekaar 😳. But yeah..chotu sa experiment of mine!

Curse you and your one liners

People said it was possessiveness.

He knew it was ownership.

I loved it how this is so vague yet says so much. I won't call it bekaar but rather a little unpolished. It is raw, it could be better. Had to read it twice to get the whole gist of it but it didn't bother me. It was short and puzzling but it did convey a story. Of her being the light, figuratively and her being the darkness, literally. Of him being a non-believer in love, so to speak and him being in love, in reality.

And as I say, you are a writer of sentences. The way things jump out in sentences and I can't help going, "dayum!" at them. Of her being jealous and of him being finally loyal. Her not knowing why she's angry and him trying his best to avoid the real intentions of him no longer flirting with anyone else. So loved how it was the camera which fell for her and since his camera is a big part of him, that is saying so much.

the end was ekdum BANG! Uff! She'd be the death of him and he wouldn't realize it!

OTM VP...this is Maisy approved! 👏

Originally posted by: spicySugar..

Curse you and your one liners

People said it was possessiveness.

He knew it was ownership.

I loved it how this is so vague yet says so much. I won't call it bekaar but rather a little unpolished. It is raw, it could be better. Had to read it twice to get the whole gist of it but it didn't bother me. It was short and puzzling but it did convey a story. Of her being the light, figuratively and her being the darkness, literally. Of him being a non-believer in love, so to speak and him being in love, in reality.

And as I say, you are a writer of sentences. The way things jump out in sentences and I can't help going, "dayum!" at them. Of her being jealous and of him being finally loyal. Her not knowing why she's angry and him trying his best to avoid the real intentions of him no longer flirting with anyone else. So loved how it was the camera which fell for her and since his camera is a big part of him, that is saying so much.

the end was ekdum BANG! Uff! She'd be the death of him and he wouldn't realize it!

OTM VP...this is Maisy approved! 👏

Yaar Maisy...me na...LOVES YOU!!! :* Hayye...inna accha comment <3

You're right. Its kind of disconnected as a whole. Probably a result of having seen just two epis of the show & no insight into the chracter of said male except two words...Photographer & Playboy😳 But anyways...the story did somehow reach you, & that was much better than I hoped <3

Ahh...camera ka toh starring role hai 😎. HE doesn't fall for her...his camera does. SHE isn't possessive towards HIM...she's towards his camera so...yeah ;)

Oh yes she will😉. She will enter his life & twist it right from the inside...the very opposite of what Neha had thought fir her 😉

Eeps...:* Thanks Maisy! For the awesome & very honest comment. Love ya :*

Okay, so you " super bekaar" os had me digging my nails into my hand so hard that I'm pretty sure they left a mark. I'm a rohal shipper too(didn't know they already had a ship name) and had sort of imagined her using nihaal or yudi like this.
Was vague, but that aspect seemed to add to the thrill and the mystery clouding it.
The ownership and not possessiveness monologue war definitely the highlight for me along with the end that left so many things unexplained yet spoke it all.
It's exciting to set roshni getting jealous a little along with the eerily calm demeanor that is characteristic of her and to see nihaal come to terms of-sorts with his feelings.
Beautifully penned. You seem to have a way with words that always sends goosebumps up my arms. Hoping to see a lot more of your works in the forum.
Ps I love the rohal siggie you have

Originally posted by: medha_is_me

Okay, so you " super bekaar" os had me digging my nails into my hand so hard that I'm pretty sure they left a mark. I'm a rohal shipper too(didn't know they already had a ship name) and had sort of imagined her using nihaal or yudi like this.
Was vague, but that aspect seemed to add to the thrill and the mystery clouding it.
The ownership and not possessiveness monologue war definitely the highlight for me along with the end that left so many things unexplained yet spoke it all.
It's exciting to set roshni getting jealous a little along with the eerily calm demeanor that is characteristic of her and to see nihaal come to terms of-sorts with his feelings.
Beautifully penned. You seem to have a way with words that always sends goosebumps up my arms. Hoping to see a lot more of your works in the forum.
Ps I love the rohal siggie you have

Sachi? Medha!🤗

Eeps...I got a fellow shipper <3 Yudi toh seems to be out from Maisy's post on today's epi but Nihaal...hopefully!!!!

Yaar...thank you so much for the awesome comment! :* And yeah...its beautiful na! Mais made it...its there in the CG :)

Oh my effing god...!!
Gal you nailed this OS..!!

Originally posted by: forevermine

Oh my effing god...!!
Gal you nailed this OS..!!

i always wanted roshni to fall for our nihaal...!! i donno something about the bad boy getting tamed made me ship them..!!

Wadeva the reason mayb... your OS jzz made a smile on my face...as i had a horrible day...with Prelims over my head...uhhh i loved it shazz... it was awesome...!!
Doesnt go without saying that your such a treat as a writer to read if it makes any scenes.in other words

an awesome writer and i am not lying about it..!! hahaa!!

i loved it.. how i wish to see it actually happen in the show...!!

although the male lead for her someone else... he is cute as well..!! 😆😉

regards

safrena

SAFI!!!!!🤗 So great to see you here!!!!

SAFI!!!!!🤗 So great to see you here!!!!