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Hey folks!!

am here with the fourth chapter of mae SS. i wasn't able to give update yestrday, as it wa last weekday and the busy stuff...thanx to all those who waited fah update all along...Love you all...you all are just WOW...this post is more about past,, Do give a reading, do hit like and do post your views...and thanx fah the wonderful response,,love you all... Enjoy reading.


Chapter 4

A White Sheet & the Devastation!


Mr. Khan! Phoopi left this for you...

With the blend of shock and confusion he extended his hand to take the paper,,

His heart was wrenching hard with the fear of repulsive things yet to come in his life. His mother was gone...where? He knew where! But how long? He didn't know...would she come back? would she hold him in her arms telling him; It was necessary Asad..I had to..Your father is ill...and he would keep me all happy,, we both would take care of each other,, I would be safe, I would come back as soon as he will get fine.

For an enough fraction of time he kept on staring on the paper sheet that would soon declare the verdicts,, the verdicts who wouldn't proclaim him to the death, but would burn him alive, in the fire of anger and fear at the same time. The punishment would sustain till the death of him.

Finally he unfolded the paper sheet.

On opening the sheet a shiver ran down through his body. It was his Ami's letter for him...

Mere pyaare betay Asad(My dear son Asad,)

Assalam-o-alaikum!!

When you would get this letter, I would be gone, so far,..Last night when you came in my room, I wanted to tell you something. I know it's too late to tell you. I must have told you the day when Rashid asked me to head back to his house. I could not,, I feared that you would have words with Rashid, and the two men to whom I am irrevocably connected would get hurt, even more.

I wanted to tell you that I am going to him, but I couldn't, as I knew that you would keep an option of choosing anyone of both. I want to tell you that you both are my life, I can't pick up anyone of you and walk away. If you are part of my soul, then my heart is deeply connected with his. To live a happy life, I want my all family around me. I am walking away with Rashid, as he needs me.

I know you are deeply hurt, I should have told you on face, but I couldn't, as I don't have courage to face you, to look into your eyes who accuse me of guilt.

Please forgive me my son, I love you. I really care for you, I really value your emotions and your love for me. But this is the way how it is..complicated...just Complicated...

And a side note from me, I have left you with a beautiful companion of life of yours... Do take care of yourself and Zoya, she really loves you. On 25th of next month Molvi Sahib has allocated date for your nikah, do try to meet him 10 days in advance, for some preparations to be done. I know you both are kids, and don't know about...

I know its much to demand, but please forgive me, my son. I know you wouldn't understand now.. but still I want you to forgive your Ami. As life is short, and we don't know what packages it has kept for us...

With love,

Your Ami,,


This note left him staggered him on his life, and finally paper made its way to floor out of his hand, his muscles clenched, each word was stammering hard in his mind...zoya was watching colors of different emotions rushing through his face,, Anger, pain, confusion, fright, protectiveness and loss...

And then he erupted...The lion in him escaped the cages of self-control...And Zoya was watching him with terror, now it was her turn to put back the lion in calm...how she would,,...

With that he stood up and firstly threw off the coffee mug, zoya brought in fah him...then he headed to his side table and threw the lamp off the table,, zoya hurried to his side...

Mr.Khan...what you are doing?? Mr.Khan,, (her eyes were popping out of the fear)

I would get hurt by having words with that Rashid Khan...Haan!! (his trigeminal was trembling hard)

Haan...so she thought to hurt me herself...no,, actually she tried to save Rashid from word..

throwing off stuff from his vanity...

That man...HnnHH...she saved him...

Mr.Khan! stop..please,, its not like that...

She was pleading to him as blood has started dripping out of his freshly bandaged hands...

Hahhaa..hahhhaaa...(he started laughing in utter tension and disappointment) she didn't tell me earlier... cox she thinks I would ask her to choose one... and before even my asking,, and putting the options,, she opted for him...without giving a second thought...

Headed to his books' shelves,, throwing down the stuff on floor...his room was mess by now...

Mr. Khan...please,, its not like that... things may differ, from the way you are looking them...phoopi may be right too...

Asad stopped there, and turned back to her...he took her by shoulders...

What? What did you say?? Your phoopi may be right?? I may be wrong??? Your phoopi didn't have courage to face me, to look into my eyes, because she knows my eyes can't lie...in my eyes she can see the sleepless nights we spent while craving for the food...in my eyes she can see the count down of the days we did on the verdict of owner of our house on rent,, when we did fear in any time he would be throwing us out...

Still holding zoya with shoulders,, n started stepping ahead making zoya to step back to avoid falling back

In my eyes she can see those 15 years of miseries which we spent in the uncertainties...

And you say phoopi may be right??

Mr.Khan! i...

Am not finished yet zoya...

his hands were penetrating hard in her skin

Zoya! She said she still has enough heart which belongs to that heartless bl***dy Rashid Ahmed Khan..

Mr.Khan! please..don't say like that... (she managed to say in between the pain she was feeling in her pectoral)

Haa! How I can forget...my world is all filled with the admirers of Janab Rashid Ahmed Khan... (releasing a sarcastic laugh)

then he let her go...and turned away heading out of his room...

her white shirt was all stained with the blood seeping out of his physical wounds...

Everything in his room was displaying the leftovers of the waves of anguish which flowed through that room few minutes back... in whole fiasco,, only one thing was resting safe...and that was the white sheet who pioneered the devastation...Zoya stepped further to collect that letter...

Along with reading the words in that letter, she could hear the noise of falling objects in the living area, and with that answers to every clause of dilshaad were roaming in the sad air of Khan Villa...

Zoya failed to decide that whom to support. She knew going to Asad means to augment his anger, which is justified,

After few minutes storm came to an halt suddenly, annoying silence followed. She could hear chirping crickets outside in calmness of night Zoya decided to walk to Asad now.

She couldn't find Asad,,

Now where he has gone??

She was about to walk to her room to take her phone, when she saw him unconscious lying on the floor...

She walked to him in a state of alarm...

Mr. Khan,,

Touching his forhead...

Mr. Khan! Wake up Mr. Khan... (patting his face with her hands)

Mr. Khan...Uff Allah Miyan...what's wrong with him... (standing with both of her hands on waist)

I should take him to his room...No...I should call...Phoopi,,, No way... Hospital...

=== === === === === ===

At 12 in the night, Zoya was walking the length of the corridor specified for ICU's in National Hospital, Bhopal...

Her lips were mumbling with silent prayers for Asad...

Soon a physician joined by two nurses came out of the ICU where asad was taken in, 45 minutes before...

Doctor..Doctor,,

O Yes, you are with the patient??

Yes, I am with him...How's he??

Oh...come with me Mrs. Khan,,

Zoya followed him to his room...

=== === === === === ===

First of all I want to ask if you have some other relatives... I mean Mr. khan's brothers or parents..

Um,, actually,,actually they are out of town..

I wanted to tell something about patient's condition...and you look already exhausted.

No,, Doctor,, you can tell me...am enough strong

She wanted to sound confident and strong,, but she was not,,

How I would go through if anything wrong happens to him...

Of course you are strong, that's why you brought him here,, at 12 in night and that too lonely..Well! I must say you are lucky too..

Zoya didn't reciprocate,, waiting for main subject yet to come.

Look! Mrs. Khan! You are lucky cox you brought him here in time. Least people are lucky to escape. And he made it. What's the exact situation, Mr. Roy would tell us in morning, he is a leading neurologist from Swami Vivekanand Regional Spine Centre. I have asked nurse to inform him.

Doctor! Would you please come on the point? Am loosing my patience.

OK! look Mrs. Khan, as far as I can figure it out, it's Cerebral Aneurysm...

Cerebral Aneurysm...

confused sound escaped her mouth,,

Yes.. Cerebral Aneurysm...you may call it as a state of Nervous breakdown...one of the pivotal nerve in his brain got erupted

Zoya put her hand on her mouth to stop the scream she was about to release...

Calm Down,, take this...

He extended a glass of water...

Tears rolled down her cheeks...

Take it...

I didn't see any blood coming out of his mouth or nose, (trying to calm herself down and woof away the prevailing terribleness of time)

That's the worst part... few of the blood clotted in his nose and brain,, so we have to wait,, till he comes conscious.

She couldn't figure out...what to do now... cry here helplessly loosing herself or make a way to home to cry on..she wanted to look composed...

Can I meet him?

No.. not now... he is in intensive care for next 24 hours, as he is still unconscious...you can see him across the glass hole...one thing don't loose hopes

Okay... (while standing up)

And yes ask his family to be here too...as we don't know...But keep on praying

He stopped in the midway, but zoya figured out what he was about to say...

She nodded while removing trail of tears...

It was 1 in the night when she came out of the trance of staring at his unconscious figure through glass hole.

=== === === === === ===

In dim lights, she could see, he looked ill...pale,

Oh! Mr. khan... how we would make it through, but we have to...and InshahAllah we would do it... but I need to inform 1 person.

With that she pulled out phone of her pocket...

Beep...beep...

Beep of her phone made her to come out of the past...

1 Received Message

She knew this message belonged to whom...a smile played on her lips...


Recieved: 10:30:42 a.m.

Today

From: My Sexy Six Packs'

Message Body:

You make me laugh when I want to cry,
Make me live when I want to die,
Make me smile when I want to frown,
You turn my life upside down.
Believe in me when no one else does
You? Are my now, my is and my was.
I need you more than you can believe,
Love you more than you can conceive.
Think about you every night and day
I don't want my life to be any other way
So Please Hold Me & Never Let Me Go
Kiss Me On My Lips, But So Sweet & Slow
Now Let Me Tell You One Thing Again
I Am In So Much Love With You...
I so Love you Miss Farooqi,,,My Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan!

She blushed😳 and replied him back with a refreshed confession message...As she got the one too..


So am done with it,, now hit like and let me know about your views...Love you all😳😳

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