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Posted: 10 years ago
after hospital scene
his reaction
to all family members
for fixing his marriage

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for d pm nandy bt i m not into geet forum...
So it will take me tym to analyse dere character n den read d story... N den i will give my views abt ur stories...
I hope u dont mind me taking sum tym...
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Posted: 10 years ago

sabko aas hui
chalo paaki yeh baat hui
aur finally shuruat hui

but,
koi mujhse bhi poocho
jiski zindagi main
bin masoom barsaat hui
arre mere grandpa ,
yeh bhi koi baat hui !


tumhe ,apni dosti pyaar thi
par , mujhse
kis janam ki 
dushmaani nibhaani thi !

abhi to aayi meri jawaani thi
aur ,
abhi is musibaat ko jhelne ki
baari aani thi !


Thanks ---nishu--- for this awesome poem and those siggies in comments ... you are awesome ðŸ˜ƒ




PART 1

 

                                          Maan Singh Khuranna wasn't in best of his mood. Well he never is but today it was like his own life was slipping out of his hands and he couldn't do anything. He turned to his right to take a look of his 20 minutes old wife. He hasn't seen her face but he knew she is very young. Her figure was petit, her fingers were long but he wondered if they were strong. He heard her voice only when she says Thank you' when someone wishes them good luck. Much information about someone who he is probably going to spend the rest of his life.

 

" Sign the register form " he heard his uncle say

 

                                            Officially his life is ruined. Maan signed and handed the pen to his new wife, without hesitation she signed it and stood beside him. Her signature looked so immature, not that he is expert in judging people by the way they write but since he has already decided to dislike her, everything she does irritates him.

 

                                       It was time for them to go home. Maan sat in the car waiting impatiently while his wife was all over her mother crying. After what felt like years and umm well some 15 minutes his wife sat beside him. Maan ordered the driver to drive as fast as he can so that Maan could return to the comfort of his house.

 

                                      Maan heard a weeping sound and he turned to his side to look at his newly wedded wife. Now that her veil was off her head he could see her profile at least. Drops of tears were rolling down her cheeks and she was wiping it with her palm. He felt a bit bad at her plight, has to spend the rest of her life away from people she has grown accustomed to. Gladly he would have sent her back to her mother only if he has the power.

 

                                    Once they reached Khuranna mansion Maan's Daadi Mrs.Savitri Devi opened the door for them with a huge grin. She praised Geet for her beauty which Maan hasn't seen yet by the way and whispered something in Geet's ear and Geet redone her veil as it was in the marriage hall.

 

                                      Great. Maan thought. Someone who is gonna listens to elders and follows customs blindly. They both walked to the house and were greeted by family who were waiting with another set of rituals to be followed.

 

                                 Maan was getting irritated by everything while Geet was a silent follower, another trait he hated about her. He already knew what kind of girl she would be, very indian Bahu' types, typical as they show in the shows that his daadi watches, She is never gonna talk for herself, She is never gonna be adventurous much to his dismay, type of girl who is more capable of acting his servant than his wife. Not that he had many expectation but when he was getting married, She is after all 18 years old with minimal knowledge of everything under sun or god forbid no knowledge at all. Where is she from again? He remembers that his Daadi was telling that Her mom was some village based. For all he could know Geet is the typical villager.

 

"Maan have this sweet, you need more energy tonight " his cousin teased

 

                                    My foot Maan mumbled giving everyone a glare that worked in his favour. Maan being straight forward, intelligent , strong and arrogant gives him a special place in the family where even elders fear him at times. Maan wondered if that will be ruined with his lamp of a wife?

 

"Come on Geet at least you have this sweet " they insisted

 

 " No i am fine " she said



"Why won't you have sweets if you husband don't " they all laughed

 

                               Maan saw Geet's hands that were clutching his lehanga. Oh man don't tell me she is blushing he sighed. She is never gonna fit in his life.

 

"Now hold hands and touch the god idol together praying for your happiness "

 

                                    Maan moved forward his hands reluctantly but his wife was so shy to even hold his hands. "Kill me now".

 

"Is everything over ?" Maan asked agitated

 

                             For the first time he hated the facts that he had so many cousins. They were all enjoying at his expense. Not that they often get chance to pull Maan Singh Khuranna's legs.

 

                                  Finally his wife was escorted away from him with a promise that he will meet her soon. Maan was held back by his cousins.

 

"So Maan ready for new life?" Jay, his best friend since school said

 

                           Maan didn't bother to answer.

 

" wrong question bro, ask him if he is ready for night" Astha, jay's wife said winking

 

                            Maan glared. Astha looked away as if she is innocent.

 

"Arre what rubbish yaar. Maan just married a kid you must wait till she grows up" Kevin the funniest of their gan joked sharing Hi-5 with his girl friend Roshni.

 

" Now they teach all this is in school syllabus don't they ?" Kevin asked faking shock.

 

"Yaar Maan i thought we both can stay bachelors for long " Amam the only single in gang now that Maan is married said.

 

"Don't worry Aman Maan is more or less stay bachelor " Kevin teased

 

"Go to hell you all " Maan cursed and walked to his room.

 

                                          For the first time his friends had the nerve to tease him and all because of new addition to his life. He already hated her. Now he has to suffer with a girl who is different from a doll only because she can talk. His life sucks.

 

"Maan you can't go in until you pay us some money " his sister-in-law nayantara teased

 

"good i ll go to guest room " Maan said waving his hand

 

"Maan " daddi glared at him

 

                                            Maan helplessly paid to enter his own room. There his bride was sitting in typical bride style in the middle of bed covered with jewels and veil covering her head. He cleared his throat to get her attention.

 

"ji?" she said in a low voice.

 

                                     He just wanted to take an axe and kill himself. How is he gonna survive now? Maan was keen on telling her to change and use the couch to sleep from what he has observed from the evening she is never ever gonna talk back. If he asks her to eat sand she is gonna do that like a proper Indian wife.

 

                                           He sat beside her and with slight movement lifted her veil. For the first time he saw a face to suit the name. She looked very young, well young according to his age but anyone can tell she is in her late teens. Her eyes were almond brown color which he haven't seen before, Her cheeks were pulp with pink powder blush, her lips were neither thin nor big but kiss worthy. Sh*t where did that come from? Maan wondered. A strand of hair was off her braid playing in her cheeks. Maan moved his long fingers to move it aside when the unexpected happened.

 

"f**k" he swore as she fainted

 

"What the hell?"

 

                                               Maan bend beside her and patted her cheeks.

 

"Geet... wake up ???? what happened ? Geet " He called her name but no moment.

 

"Did my touch scare her? Damn i was never going to do anything. I hate it when girls are innocent " he was mumbling searching for water.

 

                                   When he found a jug in the near by table he poured some water in is palm and splashed on her face.

 

"Geet wake up" he patted her cheeks again.

 

                               He swore under his breath and took his phone to call doctor.  His back was facing her when he was impatiently waiting for someone to pick the call he heard hysterical laughter. He turned to see his bride laughing out loud holding her stomach.

 

                                         Maan for a minute thought that she has gone mad. She pulled out her veil and threw it away as if it didn't matter much. Still laughing clutching her stomach.

 

"Caught you there Khuranna " she said

 

"Excuse me?" he was still in shock not understanding what is happening around.

 

"did you see you face ? god million dollar worth. You are a funny man " she said laughing

 

                                       Funny man? Maan glared at her but he doubt if she noticed that because she was laughing as if her life depended on it.

 

"How was the surprise? " she winked

 

                            And that moment Maan realized life is gonna be tougher with her than he imagined.                   

 

 

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Edited by NANDY_BRU - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh god last may kya jhatka diya😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
god lovely update
loved it to the core
maan thinking he got married to a gwar type typical indian girl ...
he is thinking that his life gonna be tough with this seedi saadi girl
but poor him that seedi saadi girl is not actually seedi saadi she scared hell out him doing fake unconsious stunt at their first night and laughing loud at his condition...🤣

jhor ka jhatka dheere se laga...😆
maan babu be careful with ur seedi saadi wife...😆
such mein she gonna give him tought time and how will he gonna handle her...??

 waiting to see thier journey as husband and wife with nokh jok and all
continue soon
Edited by _lehar_ - 10 years ago
Downhill thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
simply superb
loved it/
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats for new FF..I thought Maan don;t going accept her..because she listen all people..last part was good..
waiting for more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
yes...i loved it.i love this geet i love this maan.i love the whole package.
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Posted: 10 years ago
First, I am really glad you are back!!


Interesting start!  Why do I have the feeling that Geet will be the complete opposite of what Maan was thinking??  

Sounds like fun!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one...

but ending was...umm what to say...unexpected...
I was laughing...


Maan ko ab imature wife mili hain...dekhte hain kya hota hai...


do continue soon