VIOLIN~RHYTHM OF ROMANCE # 4 love punishment page 62/ 8th january - Page 16

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Haii how are you all

As you see I am giving updates of "KAAM KARNA MANA HAI OFFICE MAI"

I thought it will end soon but updates are increasing for that also

So will write that also after completion of my exam

I will be busy in preparation and all

Sorry for this hope you will wait for me like always

Thanks to all who are waiting for me

I said I am not sure of anything same saying again

It's up to ur wish but will write after my exam fir sure

DEEPA DI SAID THREAD WILL BE CLOSED IF I WOULD TAKE LONG BREAK


PLZ MAKE THIS THREAD ALIVE

Ps: I may write in between it depends only time can say anything

Add me in FB you will get my poems there

Pooja sparkle my FB

With love pooja

Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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hey poo take ur own time pehle exams baad may updates

concentrate on ur exams😃
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HAII ALL



CHECK OUT THIS

POOJA
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Originally posted by: priya111111

hey poo take ur own time pehle exams baad may updates

concentrate on ur exams😃


thanks di see here i am 😉
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VIOLIN RYTHYM OF ROMANCE









thanks to shruthe di for the banner







thanks to jadu aka maya rhea for the benner







1. String of beat

Paris @ 9pm (Indian time)

With constant disturbance of knock on door that girl sleep got disturbed who is sleeping like she slept after ages. Making an irritating face ignoring that she again slept burying her face in pillow. This time the sound was loud as it was mixed with some one's scream looking like it will break her ear drums.
"Not now go simi I am sleepy" shouted that girl from inside.
"You lazy bug I am here to save you and you are saying to go away" said Simi from outside best friend of that girl.
"What yaar you and help joke of decade. You know only how to irritate me nothing more than that now don't play" said that Girl sitting on the bed still not opening the door with closed eyes. After few minutes she opened her eyes to witness most blissful sight, she is enjoying the view of Eifel tower which is clear enough to see from her room window.



"Idiot you became total gajini see Amar is occupying your place there. If you won't come now then forgot it totally" shouted simi

Amar this name clicked in her mind like thunder next sec she opened the door cursing simi for not waking her before.

"Just shut up Miss.Akakshya Singhania it was B/W you and Amar who are hell bent in win over each other. I am here to help you just get ready we have to leave now" spotted simi shutting Aks mouth.

Aks given her loop sided smile making simi irritate even more.
Akankshya singhania famous singer only daughter of Singhnia groups owner Anand singhania. Sweet and loving completed masters in Delhi only as she didn't wanted to go away by leaving her parents alone. Love her parent's soo much apple of their sweet family started her own music company as she wanted to prove herself.
Music is her passion her dad owned Music Company already but she didn't want to take over that always wanted to do something big. She is here because for one IMP work her dad sends her here as he is not well but who knows it will change her life totally.
"Here we go" said Aks putting final touch to her make up




"We are going to just night party don't try to be look like ghost you will already look like that only." Commented Simi seeing her doing extra make up un usual to her.
"God cant you sit quite for some time today I wish to look different lets go I am up" said Aks while dragging Simi from room.

"I wanted to ask for giveness from Jesus I made a mistake by choosing you as my friend" said Simi Aks chuckled listening to this.

Smoke mixed with cocktail smell hitted her nostrils indicating they reached party venue. Aks smiled seeing Simi making faces looking at couple smooching
"Get a room guys see we are kids" shouted Aks passing by them. Simi given a look to Aks and said
"Kid and you so funny" mocked Simi

Aks and Simi are best friend from school knows in and out of each other. Aks is free going nature girl but know family values very well being sighania's she have already seen the corporate society but she wants normal life where she can flies with wings. Knows very well how to balance everything will enjoy life all ways in her own ways.
"Welcome baby so ready for the bet?" asked Amar as they enter into venue.





"Of course let's see now who will win" said Aks taking her violin ignoring Amar hand that is hanging in air as he let out his hand for hand shake.
Amar Rathode College mate of Aks in love with her from two years. Aks was not interested in him she likes him as friend but not as her lucky love. Amar is good dancer from college the whole college is his fans except Aks, it is their habit throwing bets on one over other as both are is crazy win over bets. But in this process Amar had fallen for her totally, so they were here for that purpose to win over the bet. Simi always supported Amar in this as she likes his cool going nature she knows for this Pataka Aks amar is right guy.
"You know right she is Aks forget it try to win over her today. Then she will come with you for date as per bet try your luck." Said Simi pushing Amar on dance floor.


(listen to this from here )

http://files.myfrogbag.com/glnd1u/Electric%20Daisy%20Violin-%20Lindsey%20Stirling%20Original%20Song.swf

(THANKS TO PRIYA 1111 FOR DOING THIS FOR ME)



Taking deep breathe setting strings on proper way Aks played slight beat humming along. Fastening the beat she started dancing on her feet freely along with beat. She became centre of attraction now with her violin beat the music was giving pleasant feeling to all hearts.
Amar started dancing with beat in free style making every mesmerize with his moves. In hauling the cool breeze both got lost in their own world. It was open air hall at one side Eifel tower was looking like golden stone with lightings other side their performance. Everyone knows there talent as both got soo much fame in their own field.
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On the other hand in same mean time a couple was enjoying their won time same music playing in music system. It was composed by that boy only he made this instrumental as dedication to her. As their love symbol to celebrate their togetherness. That Boy wrapped his hands on her waist from back making her heart beat shudder with his sensual touches.




Girl stand there lifeless toy not affected by his touch it is making her felt repulsive she snapped his hand angrily. The music was so loud making her heart beat skipped a bit it is her favorite at times. But now it is making her breathe stuck she hates this sound now. Running away from him Girl stood at window facing her back to him boy smiled sadly seeing her.
He knows she is running away from her favorite possession her love her soul her music. He increases the volume glancing at her who is enjoying the cool breeze. Girl closes her ears tightly so many memories were flashing in her mind. It was paining her heart so much it was her battle between her love and her pain.



She startled sensing his hot breathe falling on her neck he is right beside her she knows that. Boy hugged her tight making her let out a gasp with his sudden advancement. Girl instantly places her hand on his tight grip as his hand advanced up to her arms. Taking away his hand from her hold he places her long silky hair aside strongly inhaled her sent.


He placed soft kiss on her back of ear he know very well her sensitive parts girl stirred a bit with his sensual kiss. Boy smiled seeing her reaction he places trial of kisses in every possible place making her feel jittery.
"Tell me geet you still remember all those moments right then why this denial it's been long time I am asking you same question." Asked that man taking chance as she is fully lost in his passion.
"Who will mend this geet tell me you shattered my gift my love gift you have to pay for this" said that boy pointing at shattered pieces of Violin. Lying lifelessly on floor with broken pieces just like his heart but only difference is he cont show his shattered heart to anyone.




"See that violin do you have any idea how I am feeling seeing that daily. It was shattered long back but cont throw that away like you did it was my compassion"said that man placing open mouth kisses on her neck.
But he is wrong geet can see that pain in his voice the longingness in his eyes it is making her feel restless. It pained her wounded heart soo much but she won't accept this she knows it will only lead destruction for both of them.
"Maan there is no future for both of us just forget me forget all these I don't have faith in love. Love is another name for destruction did you get that." Said geet trying to free her from his strong muslin arms.
"You lost the chance to say anything geet you have only one option that is stay with me forever" said maan turning her to his side.



"You cont force me maan how much you will try my answer is same BTW you became soo fat maan see I am unable to free myself."Joked geet looking other side.
She cont say lie by watching in his eyes she flinched in pain as maan hold her tightly with hurt listening to her words. Maan instantly loosened his grip seeing her face in pain with his tight grip as giving her pain to her is the last thing he wanted to do in his life time.
"See straight in to my eyes then say it geet" commanded maan looking straight in to her angelic face.
Geet trembled listening to his furious voice but composed herself tried to run away from him. But maan caught her wrist at right time brought her close to him sliding his hand on her waist plastered her to his body. Both listen to their heart beats which were loud enough as it was doing marathon. One in anticipation other in fear of his next advancement. Maan dangerously came close to her about to close the distance between their lips.




"Maaneet maaneet" a loud shirks broke maan trance. He cursed that voice owner for wrong time entry .
"Just shut up why you are shouting like that I did big mistake my teaching you say our name. You are good for noting" chided maan the owner of that destructive voice.
It disturbed there moment right so he got anger on that little "PARROT". Geet smiled slightly seeing this but makes an angry face remembering the name maaneet
"Uffo maan it is just parrot it will say what you have teaches it's your mistake only. Don't shout at my baby" said geet giving deathly glare with her big doe shaped eyes taking parrot in her hands.

"Yes yes my mistake it's you who brought that to home not me and maa is also with you only" said maan with irritating face.

"Maa maa" parrot shirked flying in air from door to the place where maaneet were standing making them realize what it was hinting.
"oh my baby thank you so much for saving me ok I will brought your favorite nuts tomorrow ok" said maan trying his best to smile.
Listening to him parrot rested on his shoulder started rubbing his cheek with her nose
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"Thank you maaneet" said parrot still rubbing his cheek.
Taking this as advantage geet tries to go away from that room.
"Geet don't think it was ended you have to give answer for me. Try to run away up to what extent you want but at end my love win and that day by yourself you play those strings and I will listen to those string of beats with you in my arms" said maan loudly his voice echoed in the room scaring geet with his determined voice.
(Do tell me frankly how it is plz
Give me critics also)
So here is the part1
Do tell me can I continue it or not
From next my whole concentration is on maaneet only
Sparkle



Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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song thread pe kise add karna hai yaara
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update chesava...
i will comment once i read it...
going to read

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