Y@DE!N (Raj Aamna) 3rd part 4th Pg

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Posted: 18 years ago
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HI GUYZ

here is my FF hpe u like 1st part of mine FF

Sujal's HOUSE

sab arti kar rahe hai

sujal office k liye ja raha hai

Veena- sujal nashita to kar lo

S- nhi mumma mujhe l8 hoo raha hai

V-sujal 5 mint to lage ge

tabhi CG aata hai

C-chaloo sujal l8 hoo raha hai

V- ab aap bhi

Cg- in sawalo k liye waqt nhi hai... chaloo beta sujal chalte hai

sujal chala jata hai

V- ye keya hai aap bhi sujal se itna kaam kar wate hai k bas ..

Cg- veena main sujal ko kaam buzy is liye kar raha hoo k jo kuch bhi us k saath hooia hai who bulaa sake

V- ye aap bhi jante hai & main bhi ye sab us k liye aasan nhi hooga

Cg-per sujal ko bulna hi hooga us ko apni zindagi ,aare sujal mera bahir w8 kar raha hoogaa

CG leave 4 office

V-kash mera sujal phele ki tarha zindage betaie or hasi us ki wapas aajaie

DADI maa (sujal's DADI)-veena ye lo parsad aur sujal or CG kaha gaie

V- office

D-itna jaldi veena aaj maine sujal ki zindagi mangiii bas mera sujal sab kuch bulaa de or zindagi ko usi masti k saath jeeye

Sujal drive car

Suddenly a car stop to front of sujal's car

Sujal gusse hoojata hai

& came out frm car

S-hey deekh k car drive karni nhi aate kya

& a man came out frm car but

sujal did not see the face of man

Sujal kafi der se us ko bula raha tha per who react hi nhi kar raha tha

Than

Main trun sujal's side &

S- aare yar tu

Sameer – aaj tak tum nhi badle

S- tum bhi to wise hi hoo

Sameer – main badloo aise ho hi nhi sakta

S- tu chal mere saath & kab loota USA se

Sameer – mujhe 1 week hoogaya hai yaha aaie hooie & abhi nhi mujhe kaam hai main sham ko ya kal tere ghar aaioga.

S- ek tu mujhe mila nhi aake & kal tak aaioga main tera dinner per ghar per w8 karooga

Tujhe aana hi hooga

Sameer – per yar

S – nhi main abhi ja raha hoo raat ko milte hai

VIRANI house

Tulsi & karan dono nashita kar rahe hai

Tabhi mihir aajata

Karan – papa aap tayar bhi hoogaie nashita karlete hai us k baad chalte hai

Mihir – nhi mujhe jana office main kaam hai

Mihir chala jata hai

Tulsi – kashish k jane k baad ye aise hi hai

Karan – mama kashish k jane k baad is ghar ki hasi hi chali gaie hai mera bhi ghar main maan nhi lagta hai

Tulsi – kash is ghar ki jaan the jab whoo …………………..

& both looking kashish's pic

W8ing 4 ur comments do comments ..........😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice starting 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
continue soon 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Ravinder duggal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey quite interesting..plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing part 😊
sounds really intresting
cant wait 4 the next part continue soon
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome start..too good... liked it very much.. amazing... coolll.... keep up the good work going... 👏 please continue soon...will be waiting for the next part eagerly.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey thats a nice starting for a story.......... 😛 .......waiting 4 the next part 😉

luv,
vandana 😉
Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnz a lot guyz 4 liking my FF i wil cont soo as posible
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HI guyz me bak with my FF'S 2nd part


Evening

Veena & DADi sujal k bare main baat kar rahe hai
V- maa je sujal ko us k past se bahir lane k liye kya karee hum
D- veena mujhe to lagta hai sujal ki shadi
V- sujal to is k liye razi kabhi nhi hoga
tabhi sameer enter hoota hai
sameer sujal k kahine se us k ghar aata hai
& who sab se milta hai
Veena- sameer kab aaie hoo
S-aunty kabhi wapas aaya hoo ....... abhi to aap k saath hoo to us ko chooriye abhi yahi hooo
DADI- beta tum yaha aaie humie bohat acha laga k hum tum ko abhi yaad hai
S- dadiiii kese baati kar rahe hoo aap ,wise jis ne mujhe bulaya hai who kaha hai
dadajee- beta who sujal office se abhi tak aaya hi nhi hai
sameer- ye loo mujhe bula k khud hi nhi aaya hai abhi tak.
V-oo tum sujal se phele hi mil chuqi hoo
S- ha aaj subha
S- wise aunty jee sujal mujhe phele jisa nhi laga kya koie baat hai kya jis ne us ko aise kar deeya hai
V- sameer who
Dadi- kuch nhi beta who bas office k kaam ki wajha se
sameer- ye to nhi hoo sakta
dadi - tum theek kahi rahe hoo
sameer - ab main aagya hoo na sab theek kar dooga
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VIRANI
karan office se wapas aata hai
tulsi - karan beta tumhare behen wapas aa rahe hai is ghar ki jaan wapas aa rahe hai
karan- such maa ye to bohat hi achi news hai
tulsi - mihir bhi sun kar kush hooga.
karan - kab aarahe hai whoo

peeche see aawaz aate hai
aarahe hai nhi aagaieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
mumma main aagie
karan shout kashishhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dnt 4get post ur comments if u didnt comments mine FF i will stp psoting my ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
cant wait 2 read what sujals past is
hope sujal and kashish meet soon
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