Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 62

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Posted: 11 years ago
astha love is really selfless
shlok is possessive abt astha which he was nt for swati dat means astha is more important dan swati
and the teaser if swati and shlok have patched up so wat abt astha and shlok
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

astha love is really selfless

shlok is possessive abt astha which he was nt for swati dat means astha is more important dan swati
and the teaser if swati and shlok have patched up so wat abt astha and shlok
do update soon


Thanks a lot dear ya astha loves him endlessly and shlok too loves her only yet unknown. ... for teaser wait till Monday. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
are yaar... stop being such a tease...
really a cliffhanger... ufff!!!! am hating it...

anyways... love this ff... actually became a member because of ur ff's and ASHLOK...😃


continue to please our eyes and ears dear...šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


Awee..so sorry but required for story to move further. ...on Monday dear. ..




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anusha16

are yaar... stop being such a tease...

really a cliffhanger... ufff!!!! am hating it...

anyways... love this ff... actually became a member because of ur ff's and ASHLOK...😃


continue to please our eyes and ears dear...šŸ˜‰


Awe so sorry for being jerk. ...but you will really be surprised...tables are going to turn tomorrow. ..anyways thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good Morning Guys...and thanks for the beautiful response...So the suspense is over and here is the next chapter... As i have already told it will not be simple love story, it will be different...it will have friendship, love and Passion...
So here is the next Part answering all your queries...

Part-14

Finally Astha and Shlok came outside smiling... When Gauri smiled to Swati... These are always like this, in one minute, shouting and another minute, so happy...can't stay away from each other...sometimes we think, these were hubby wife in last birth...

Swati smiled on listening, when Astha joined them too hugging Swati... hey Swati...sorry yaar, I invited you and myself left for office, moreover you had to see all this...

It's all right... all she said with a fake smile...

Ok Let's go for dinner... Astha spoke taking her to the dining table...

Astha, you go with Swati, she must be feeling alone, I will bring food...Gauri said while leaving for kitchen...

Shlok looked angrily towards Astha and stood up from dining table, as he saw dinner...

What? Astha spoke...

Shlok took bowl of rice and was about to throw... how many times I have told you to cook for me Astha?

Sorry, I forgot Shlok, moreover, Gauri told. Swati had prepared, I thought she must be knowing your taste..

Tastes change with time Astha... Shlok shouted...

Just wait for five minutes, I will prepare but please don't create another scene yaar..Saying she left for kitchen giving angry look to Gauri who was smirking...

Swati looked towards Gauri...

Sorry yaar, I forgot, Shlok doesn't like food prepared by anyone else except Astha ... she gave a meaningful smile to Swati.

After dinner, Swati went inside Astha's room...

Astha, may I ask you something? Swati spoke hesitatingly...

Ya... Astha looked towards her.

Are you two really just friends? I mean his possessiveness towards you.. His care for you... . He was never so for me even we were together since childhood and were in love for four years... Ya he took care of me, but was never possessive for me like he is for you...Swati spoke...

I may understand dear... But trust me, he has never loved anyone after you, infact he had sealed his heart badly... no one is allowed to look into it... but I promise, he will be yours again... if he wants so...Astha spoke politely... Ok, I think you are getting late now...i will ask Shlok to drop you...and try to speak to him...

Hum... Swati replied with a smile...

Shlok... go and drop Swati, she is getting late...

But why me yaar? Shlok denied to go...

Astha held his shoulders making him get up from sofa and pushing him outside... because I want so...now just leave...

Finally Shlok had to go with Swati.

Shlok, I am sorry... Swati spoke in the car...

It doesn't matter anymore Swati, I have move ahead now... I am happy with my friends and don't need anyone special in my life... He spoke without looking at her.

Ya I can see, but can't we be friends? Swati requested... Whatever I did, was not forgivable but still, I beg of you...forgive me... Tears were flowing out of her eyes...

Shlok didn't reply on the whole way...Swati had no more words, as she reached hostel and got out of car...

Shlok called her back... Swati...

She turned back to see...

Friends? Shlok forwarded his hands... happily Swati held his hand with tears in her eyes...

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After reaching back, Shlok called Atsha...

Humm...Astha asked...

I forgave Swati... but just for you... I know, you want this and you are going to include her everywhere now... And I don't want any type of tension in our group.

Thanks a lot Shlok.. Astha spoke...

What happened, asked Gauri sleeping next to her...

Shlok forgave Swati...Astha replied with teary eyes..

Gauri got up in anger... ho gyi tassali apna ghar tod ke? In one day, all his anger vanished, in few days, his old love will be back... fir dekh dekh ke khush hona un dono ko...

Gauri, agar meri kismat yahi hai to yahi sahi... Astha said while lying on the bed, but she was crying at her heart, is it her first step away from her love?

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In few days, Shlok had become normal with Swati, they used to share their old memories, but Shlok never talked about their love life or acted so...yes he had good chemistry with Swati which was increasing day by day, while Swati was noticing his care and attraction towards Astha...

It was dance party at college and the theme was retro.. Gauri was wearing a blue printed sari while Astha chose to wear lehnga like village girls, while Swati was wearing long gown...while boys were in coat...

They all had reached the venue.. And party was in full swing... let's dance... an announcement was made on stage...Varun and Gauri were as usual to go first... Astha moved towards Shlok to take her for dance, before she could reach, Swati had reached there...

Hey Astha, me and Shlok are going for dance...Swati spoke joyfully...

Humm...all Astha said hiding her tears...

But Astha, you? Shlok asked...

Its ok Shlok, I am waiting here, once you people come back, then we will go... Saying she turned her face...

No, I am not leaving you alone, Shlok resisted...

How am I alone with so many people? You go. She is waiting for you... Atsha pushed him to the stage...he had to go there...but he was continuously looking for Astha form stage...when music started...


nayi nahi yeh baaten ,yeh baaten hai purani ,kaisi paheli hai yeh ,kaisi paheli zindagaani
ha ha ha roka hai kisne ,ha yeh toh behta paani ,kaisi paheli hai yeh ,kaisi paheli zindagaani
la la la la ,la la la la,zu zu zu zu ,zu zu zu zu zu
pee le isse ismein nashaa ,jisne piya woh gam mein bhi hasa
pal mein hasaye aur pal mein rulaye yeh kahani
kaisi paheli hai yeh kaisi paheli zindagaani


Shlok was dancing with Swati but still his eyes fixed on Astha, Astha was trying to hide her tears knowing Shlok was looking at him...whenever their eyes met, she gave a smile to Shlok assuring, she is fine... but still he was not looking convinced...

aankhon mein gar sapana naya ,aansu tera ik moti hai bana
suuri dagar pe jaise suri ,yeh chao ho suhaani
kaisi paheli hai yeh kaisi paheli zindagaani
ha ha roka hai kisne ,yeh toh behta paani
kaisi paheli hai yeh ,kaisi paheli zindagaani


Finally Astha could not control her pain, she stood up from chair and went near a window... Wiping her tears...this was first time since they had met when she was watching Shlok with some other girl on the dance floor...

nayi nahi yeh baaten ,yeh baaten hai purani
kaisi paheli hai yeh ,kaisi paheli zindagaani
ha ha ha roka hai kisne ,ha yeh toh behta paani
kaisi paheli hai yeh ,kaisi paheli zindagaani


Astha was standing there keeping both hands on the windows frame, when suddenly someone came and placed his hands on her hands covering her from back...she turned her head, a smile appeared on her face seeing him standing behind...Shlok ...Shlok was looking at her longingly, he simple bent and placed his lips on her neck...she shivered on his touch...

His hands were moving above on her arms. She closed her eyes with pleasure...while his lips were moving on her back playing with her doris...tears flew from her eyes with happiness...when his hand moved from her arms towards her stomach reaching her bellybutton holding her tight...

She could not take it anymore and immediately turned back to hug him...

But was shocked to see, no one was there Shlok was still on the stage with Swati...too close to each other Shlok's eyes were closed moving closer to Swati's face bending for kissing her...

She was broken completely...today she was understanding, she is lost...giving last look to Shlok, she ran outside the venue... after reaching out, she was sitting on the floor crying badly...cursing herself for bringing Swati back to shlok's life...

It's true, he still loves her...I was nowhere in his life more than best friend... I can't be between them... She spoke to herself wiping her tears and standing from the ground... When Shlok came running there shouting for her...

Astha, Astha...

She turned back bringing a fainted smile on her face...

Where the hell are you going alone? Could not you call me? He shouted...

Shlok, I was not feeling fine, I am going back to home... she replied...

Listen Astha, I need to talk to you. Its urgent... Shlok tried to stop her, but she didn't turn...

Shlok, please leave me alone for some time... I want to go home. She said without looking at him...

Astha please... Shlok tried to pull her from back but instead of Astha, he had pulled her blouse doris making it getting loose...

Oh hell...he shouted...as well as Astha...

He held her hand and pulled her to the corridor nearby where a tubelight was glowing... he turned Astha back and started tying the dories speaking...Astha, we need to talk...its urgent...

Shlok, I am really not in the mood. We may talk later...

But it will be too late by then...

It's never late Shlok... Astha showed him hand to keep quite...

Suddenly Shlok's hands had stopped tying the top dori...Astha was waiting for him to finish, one minute had passed, but he still was standing still there...finally Astha shouted. Now what? Finish it soon, please...

Suddenly she felt shlok's hand touching her bare back. She was taken aback...

Shlok, she whispered...

When Shlok had again opened the top dori, he had tied moving her blouse a bit down from one side...

Shlok, what is going on? Astha shouted turning back holding her loose blouse tightly...

But he was not stopping, he touched her bare shoulder moving blouse a bit more down and stopped midway ...

Yes, I too want to know Astha, what the hell is going on? He shouted holding her tight and pulling her closer...he had pain as well as anger in his eyes.

Shlok... Astha was dumb stuck when she saw so much anger on his face...

What had happened that night? Shlok spoke angrily..

Which night? What are you talking about? Astha said looking away from him...

You know, what I am saying...you were with me on that night? I was not wrong na? He held her face with one hand making her look into his eyes...

I already told you, I had left immediately, I dropped you, and you were just imagining things...

Oh, I was imagining things... he left her and moved a step back...ya I imagined everything... He repeated...and I imagined this big mole on your back shoulder too? He pulled her again and making her blouse fall from her shoulder...

Astha started crying badly on her situation holding her blouse trying to cover herself, when Shlok pushed her back and tied the doris of her blouse ...

Now will you tell me what had happened? Shlok shouted again.

She kept crying continuously without speaking a single word...

I am asking you demn Astha... He pulled her closer...did I... did I kiss you? He spoke hesitatingly...

Astha looked towards him nodding in yes closing her eyes...

Shlok punched the wall behind her in anger...

Shlok...Atsha tried to stop him. But Shlok raised his hand making her stay away..

He held her back controlling his anger... did we move ahead?

Astha lowered her head nodding in no... we stopped midway...finally she spoke...that controlled his anger a bit... he took a deep breath ...Astha could feel a bit relaxation in his touch but he was still closer to her that she could feel his breath falling on herself...

Astha... He slowly picked her face with his one hand...Astha's eyes were still close...

Astha, look at me and reply to me...he caressed her face...

Astha opened her eyes...

I was drunk, but you were not, then why didn't you stop me? He looked into her eyes...

Astha was shocked on his question.

Because... I ...(She wanted to tell, she loves him...but stopped immediately remembering what he had said on that day...I love you Swati and their intimacy today) because I was taken away by the moment... Finally she spoke closing her eyes...

So you mean, that was a passing moment between us? He shouted...

Yes, that was and you want to know why we stopped midway because you told me you love Swati...Astha too shouted gathering the courage to speak...I was on your bed and you were talking about Swati...but I am thankful to god, I stopped midway as I know you love Swati... You are made for her only...Astha shouted...while Shlok was shocked...

Astha, I want to talk about the same to you today... Shlok spoke a bit politely... that's why I was looking for you...because I wanted to tell you that I love...

I know Shlok, you love Swati... Astha spoke before Shlok could complete... Its ok...I am happy for you...Listen Shlok. I told it was a passing moment... I was ok on the next day only and you know, otherwise, I would have told you at the same moment, you know, I don't hide anything form you...that doesn't matter anymore in my life...and I just wish that should not matter in your life too... we are friends and will be... Please forget it and move ahead with Swati...

Shlok was really angry now...ya you are right. That was really a passing moment and I am fool who was taken away by that till now... Still thinking, why, how. All that happened... you are right...I really love Swati... I should go back to her only... Shlok spoke leaving her and moving two steps back from her...

Astha looked at him leaving her behind and moving back into the dance hall...

Broken Astha slowly walked towards the outer gate waiting for a taxi...

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Next day was Sunday and very unusual to Shlok, he came at Astha's place with Swati early in the morning... Hey guys, I have a good news for you all...

Ya...both Gauri and Atsha spoke lazily getting up from the bed...while Varun was also shouting at Shlok for calling him so early on Sunday that too after last night's party...

I have patched up with Swati. He placed his hand on Swati's waist... And today she is moving in with me...

Astha had tears in her eyes and All were shocked.. While Shlok and Swati were smiling at each other when Shlok slowly bent towards Swati placing a peck on her cheek...


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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
swathi and shlok became friends
the party part wad good
shlok came to know about that night
I felt like he came to propose astha
but astha 's interruption and her thoughts and sayings made him do all these
its all like shlok 's plan for me
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Great ...thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh...no
what you had done jeenia?
you left us on a cliff!
swati and shlok patch up?😲
god please let this not happen!
let it be swati -shlok play please😭



but awsome update yaaršŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Lechu...yaar first of all, your giffies make me unable to quote your comments...
Secondly read carefully?

What shlok and swati were doing on dance floor?

What shlok was saying to atsha before seeing the mole?

what he wanted to say astha after their discussion... I Love... what?

First read all incomplete sentence, then make your crying face...i told you will get surprises yet... just wait...

remaining you will know tomorrow...


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