.: The Wicked Wedding Planner .: Page 15 - Chapter 5 (7.7.15)

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Prologue.

I stepped outside, feeling the gush of wind hit against my small frame slowly as I stretched my arms above my head. Damn jet lag was such a horrible side effect when it came to travelling, I could already tell what was going to happen once I'd arrived at my destination soon. I forced a yawn, trying to 'un-pop' my ears. Another bad side effect of travelling, you just can't hear no jack shit without the sounds coming out as mere muffles.

I took in my surroundings, glancing around quickly. It's been so long since I left this place, nothing seems to have changed. Or at least I thought so..

"AD move outta the way will ya! People are waiting to get down you know."

Thanks a lot for ruining the moment, bro.

"Ugh fine." I muttered, as I began stomping down rather grumpily.

Although my body was aching and dying to slump down onto a soft bed, I was excited to the point of mentally doing a break dance. My best friend was getting married! Heck, to say I was excited would be an understatement. I was over the moon, literally. Memories came rushing down the moment my mind wandered off to the bitter memories. I shrugged them off faster than they'd arrived. I wasn't going to ruin my mood for anything. Period.

But..I had to admit though, it was going to be really hard.
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INDEX

Chapter 1. The Introduction. Below
Chapter 2. Intruder. Page 3
Chapter 3. I knew you were trouble. Page 6
Chapter 4. Uncomfortable. Page 10
Chapter 5. The secret diary. Page 15

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Ohhh emm Gee!
sawwwy sadiee if i ruined the post meant for chapter 1 !!! You can ask mods to remove...as i can't do it myself

If not lemme celebrate...

Me first🥳🥳

Dink chika dink chika...hey hey hey🥳


Aww you are back...moi so happy
abb be regular n update soon😆

waitingsss😳
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Chapter 1
The Introduction


I made my way through the busy airport, my shoulder bag on one side and a small trolley case trotting behind me. Eh, the rest of my shit is on its away. Damn airport restrictions though.

"AD wait up man! Jeez, so much for telling you to move your ass away from the plane's frikkin door." I heard my brother mumble from behind me.

Prateik, my brother, was a year older to me but I was the boss here, as always. Him and I never got along though, we'd fight like toddlers, but well..we just loved each other despite everything. I guess..

I didn't halt and neither did I intend to, but he managed to catch up with me somehow. Damn.

"An apology would be great, thanks." I muttered sarcastically, ignoring his presence as I walked.

We were outside the Airport now, the warm breeze collided against me once again as I took a deep breath.

"HA! What do you want me to say? 'Oh i'm sorry sista for telling you to move your non-existent ass away from the door so normal people like me could get down' like really?!" I heard him blabber behind me.

"Could the two of you just stop! We're not even out of the airport yet and you two have already gathered an audience!" my epic remark died down as I stared at my brother, and then we both turned back to stare up at our seething big brother. Adi.

Adi, short for Aditya, was our big brother. He was 8 years older to me, I considered him as my godfather..heck most of the time he WAS pretty much like a father figure to me. When our parents got 'divorced', my dad moved to Canada with his new wife after abandoning my mum and us in India. Our mum was left alone to raise 3 kids on her own, Adi being the eldest and me being the youngest. I was only 4 at that time so I never knew what my dad was like, neither did Prateik, but Adi was old enough to know what was happening around him. He gave away his life, his dreams in order to keep his family alive. He was my hero. Period.

"Bro it's her fault!" Prateik whispered, as if that was going to stop the onlookers.

"AB you know it wasn't me" I pouted, jutting my bottom lip out slightly.

He looked at me sternly, I could already see his stern look slip away at the sight of my pouty face before darting his eyes towards Prateik. Payback time bro. Hehe

"Prateik." Adi spoke, keeping his eyes on him.

"This is so unfair AB! You listen to anything she says just because she gives you them pouty face." Prateik pouted. He probably hoped Adi was going to be easy on him too. Ha!

"I certainly do not." Adi announced.

"Aww someone has issues with admitting the truth." I whipped my head around to face the owner of that smooth voice. Samana! Awesome timing Sammy yay!

"Bhabs!" Prateik squealed, running towards Samana.

Sammy was my sister-in-law, we were more like sisters though. I was so glad my brother had her, she was perfect for him in every way.

"Samana-" Adi began but was cut off as our mum stepped outside and stood right next to Samana.

"Aarti, Prateik. Kab sudhroge tum dono?" Mum scolded us, as we both glanced at each other and pouted.

"Maa don't worry, i'll handle these two munchkins." Adi spoke, making Sammy giggle a little as me and Prateik glared at Adi.

And then suddenly, everyone burst into a fit of giggles and laughs. Our mum, Shobha, was quite amazing at acting. I was so lucky to have been born from such a loving mother. I loved my mum so much.

"Maaumm i'm tired!" Prateik whined.

"Still the whiney child eh?" A male voice emerged from behind us.

I turned around just in time to stabalize myself as I was hit with an immense force. An immense force I knew way too well. Aarpita!

"OH MY GOD AARTI!!" she screamed, hugging me tightly as I responded back.

"Aarpita" I whispered, hugging her ever so tightly.

We stayed like that for god knows how long, I had tears streaming down my face as we mumbled incoherent words.
"Alright Alright knock it off you lesbos." I closed my eyes. If I wasn't in a public place Prateik; i'd have your face punched real good.

We broke the bone crushing hug and stared/glared at Prateik.
"Wow Pratty, you're still the same!" Aarpita beamed, causing Prateik to scowl at her.

Oh I loved this nickname, it was Aarpita who came up with it years ago, and I would call him that every time he pissed me off.

"Don't call me that" he hissed, glaring at us.

I giggled at his face and he just continued giving us glares.

We all went around and hugged the people that had come to recieve us. Aarpita's dad, Suraj Pratap, was the one who'd called at Prateik earliar. I hugged him as he hugged me back. Then I met my adorable Vidhi bhabhi and Pankaj bhaiya, I was hoping to see Vedant and Vedika but I was told they were at home waiting for us.

Our luggage was put into the waiting cars as we all finished up with our little reunion. I sat in one of the cars with Aarpita next to me and Prateik in the passenger seat. Sammy, Vidhi and Pankaj sat in another car whilst Adi, mum and Suraj uncle sat in another car. I could already tell Sammy and Vidhi were going to get along.

I put my head back against the seat and closed my eyes. God I was so tired!

-


Precap
I snuggeled against something soft, but it wasn't soft enough to be a cushion or heck even a bed mattress. I moved a little closer, it was warm as well! I frowned, my eyes were still closed. I then felt it shake against me, what the hell was I cuddling into?!
I forced my eyes open as I looked ahead, everything was hazy and kind of dark.

"Well hello there, little miss sunshine."

Oh crap. Oh frikkin crap!

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A/N: So! How was the first part? Good? Bad? Pretty bad? Do let me know! :$ I'm gunna be editing this page for a while, since my computer's busted ugh!

Do hit the 'Like' button and comment below if you're looking forward to this new story! ^_^

Sadiie x
Edited by ..CountingStars - 11 years ago
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So happy to have you back sadiee..😃
Lol! what was that ?! i couldn't believe Aarthi was the narrator! was expecting it to be Yash ji😲

So many charecters and i was like ..baapre i wish i could read without confusion who is who here😆

My Yash ji is still hiding ... Is he married to Arpita by any chance?😕

Precap: I'm more over this part😳

Edited by COLOGY - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey saddie thanks a lot that u thought to start this again ...just loved this ...i had a feeling that aarthi is cuddling to yash😉

happy introduction of all characters😆😆...

loved this part would like read the next one soon
i hope u will update regularly...
one thing i so love the previous wedding planner more than this...some magic is there in that story...i m hoping the same magic here too as u r the writer saddie😃
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Very good start Love Aarti she has attitude the relationship between the siblings good looking forward to this FF
Ps I had loved the previous Wedding Planner but eagerly looking ahead to what is in store with this FF.
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Originally posted by: COLOGY

Ohhh emm Gee!

sawwwy sadiee if i ruined the post meant for chapter 1 !!! You can ask mods to remove...as i can't do it myself

If not lemme celebrate...

Me first🥳🥳

Dink chika dink chika...hey hey hey🥳


Aww you are back...moi so happy
abb be regular n update soon😆

waitingsss😳


It's fine hun, my comments are more precious than the order in which I shall be posting my updates. 😆

I'm gunna try and be a regular here, hopefully I will be lol. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res 😎

will read sometime this week ^__^

congrat's meri munni 🤗 Writing welcomes you back hehehe :P
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Originally posted by: COLOGY

So happy to have you back sadiee..😃

Lol! what was that ?! i couldn't believe Aarthi was the narrator! was expecting it to be Yash ji😲

So many charecters and i was like ..baapre i wish i could read without confusion who is who here😆

My Yash ji is still hiding ... Is he married to Arpita by any chance?😕

Precap: I'm more over this part😳


Awwh i'm glad to be back ^_^
Haha I thought I could do with extra characters! =P
Well, Aarpita is getting married now..since that's why Aarti is back in India. Who she's getting married to? Umm..you'll have to read on for that I guess.😆

About the precap..my lips are sealed loool! ;P

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