~Sharon's Lost Lover~SwaRon OS

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

amazing!

really cool!!

the re union was ultimate!!

thanks for the pm.

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

amazing writeup 👏

it was quite serious... yet realistic 😊

people tends to choose careers over relationships 😳

& moreover .. he ended it harshly

but she remained in senses n calm 😳

she never forgot him... she was true for him always...🤗

but.. he took hell lot of time.. to realize.. boyss 😛

anyways... all's well.. if end's well..😎

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Simply great one shot..Amazing potrayel of all emotions of love..I loved the concept of separation and reunion of swaron love life..Beautifully penned all the emotions and feelings of sharon when swayam left her for his dreams..Just loved the way she was supporting him but he rejected her love front of his dreams..The pain and the emotional ride of love life was perfectly described in u'r OS..I just loved that..Separation and reunion was beautifully written in the way of flashback..Swayam came there as a masked stranger and sharon easily recognize him..And finally sharon found her lost lover..Loved the last part,Swayam accepted his guilty and sharon forgive him to give them a chance..Finally swayam back..

Great work anindita,I love u'r style of writing,u are a different writer..Keep it up
Sorry,i am not able to comment on u'r FF just becoz of my tight schedule,But This sunday surly i will do comment..
Thanx for PM

Prateek

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

It was a roller coaster ride.
Their pain,her anger,confusion and finally forgiveness was beautifully written.
Her struggle to hold up her shield in the face of Swayam's relentless attack on her senses was the highlight of this os.
It is difficult to even imagine Swayam as cold and ruthlessly ambitious so to do that so effectively in one paragraph takes skill and u did it with style.
amazing job

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Amazing OS...brilliant work 👏 loved it <3

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

FANTASTIC AND WONDERFUL OS... LOVED IT

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

this was so cool ani---i cant tell you how sweet this was---

the pain and then the healing.

wonderfully penned.

love--medha

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awww...its super!! 😳
Anandita wat a treat! 😃
The starting brought some sad moments with swayam leaving sharon and she going all sad and lost from the world. But then the party and swayam's entry made the story turn!
And the most amazing and beautiful part came, swayam and sharon sorting all their differences out.
It was amazing and totally wonderful!
Lovely work! Again 😉

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

amazing os

it was so so awesome

love ur style of writing

the story was aweosme n the way u described it was undoubtedly wonderful...

loved the happy ending from lost lover to two souls becoming one

loved it a lot

thanx for the pm

keep writing more

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Lost lover.. Yeh title padhke I was like maybe Sharon would go on hunting for Lover Boy.. but this was indeed surprising..

I loved the way Sharon's emotions were portrayed.. and the party.. wow.. hot and sensous..

I loved the entire incident happening.. the way the danced.. the way he expressed his thoughts.. repenting.. and regaining her trust.. was all so lovely ..

Thabks for writing..

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