Some Love Stories Are Just | AsYa SS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey you guys.. I'm Ankita, and I used to make siggies and write uselessly romantic AsYa/VirMan fictions here until I got locked out of my own account. Here's my new one, and I'm kicking it off with a brand new SS!

Hope you guys like it..


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I'll never forget the first time I saw her. It would be pretty hard to forget. Her hair caught fire.

I was sitting in this restaurant, eating this marvelous goose liver pate, and a couple of tables over there's this girl leaning forward towards the candle with her ear very close to it, as if she was listening to it.

Suddenly, whoosh! Her hair caught fire.

Instinctively I threw an entire pitcher of water at her, and the fire was out. She gasped and spurted a little. "Are you okay?"

"Whew! That really wakes you up! Was there ice in that?"

I was staring at her hair, which was now fried and looked uneven.

"I think you're going to need to get it cut."

"Oh, well, easy come, easy go."

So I walked her down to this very fashionable unisex hair cutlery, and we waited. And while we waited, we talked. Well, she talked mostly. She told me about listening to candles, and why she did things like that.

She told me how impressed she was with me, because the last time something like this happened to her...the man hadn't been nearly so polite. I didn't ask about that. And then she babbled on about animal shelters and how she made her own furniture. And I remember as I looked at her, soggy and babbling, that I knew, suddenly and completely, for the first time in my life, without any doubt or hesitancy, that this was the girl I wanted to marry.

You see, I believe that life is a search for perfect moments. I think that life should be well-lived, and that all problems are to be traversed subtelty and with great sophistication. This is very important to me. And yet, somehow, I would up in a love story with the most imperfect person I ever met.

Her name was Zoya. She was inelegant, awkward, sometimes obscene, and...I adored her. I adored her so much...that I decided to ask her to marry me.

I picked her up at 7:30, and I took her to the best French restaurant in town. Everything had already been prearranged to a "T." From the moment the maitre d' met us at the car, everything went perfectly, and I had never been happier.

The moment finally came. The wine sparkled. Her eyes sparkled. Her cheeks matched the rose in the vase next to her.

"Zoya..."

"Yes..."

"Zoya, I have something to ask you..."

And then I saw it. There was this little piece of parsley caught between her front teeth. She obviously didn't know it was there. I mean, it was just sort of...there, this dark green leaf covering her right front tooth.

"Yes, Asad?"

"I...I..."


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it😃 in first meeting itself Asad decided that Zoya will be his soulmate😃 i wonder what Zoya listens from candles😉 why do i feel that Asad is not gonna confess his feelings instead embarass her by pointing out the leaf stuck in her teeth😆
anyways great job👏 continue soon and if possible pls pm me




Edited by rosamale - 11 years ago
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i lykd ur style..lov to read more..pm me
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such a refreshing story

pm me soon :)
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a very different and unique start! I like it! Perfect English (the first thing i look in any fiction) 😆

and i believe he ain't gonna propose I mean if he actually does that in the first chapter itself then wheres the fun in that eh? 😉😆
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Very nice continue soon and please PM me for the next chapter 😃
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Chapter II - Family.

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"It was a vast and venerable pile."

"Oh, may'st thou ever be as now thou art,

Nor unbeseem the promise of thy spring."

THE mansion in which dwelt the Khans was one of wide and extensive range. Its centre slightly receded, leaving a wing on either side. Fluted ledges, extending the whole length of the building, protruded above each story. These were supported by quaint heads of satyr, martyr, or laughing triton. The upper ledge, which concealed the roof from casual observers, was of considerably greater projection. Placed above it, at intervals, were balls of marble, which, once of pure white, had now caught the time-worn hue of the edifice itself. At each corner of the front and wings, the balls were surmounted by the family device - the eagle with extended wing.

One claw dosed over the stone, and the bird rode it proudly an' it had been the globe. The portico, of a pointed Gothic, would have seemed heavy, had it not been lightened by glass doors, the vivid colors of which were not of modern date. These admitted to a capacious hall, where, reposing on the wide-spreading antlers of some pristine tenant of the park gleamed many a piece of armor that in days of yore had not been worn ingloriously.

The Khan family was an old Norman one, on whose antiquity a peerage could have conferred no new luster. At the period when the aristocracy of Great Britain lent themselves to their own diminution of importance, by the prevalent system of rejecting the poorer class of pedantry, in many instances the most attached, - the consequence was foreseen by the then proprietor of Khan Park, who, spurning the advice of some interested few around him, continued to foster those whose ancestors had served his.

The Khans were thus enabled to retain - and they deserved it - that fair homage which rank and property should ever command. As a family they were popular, and as individuals universally beloved.

At the period we speak of, the Khan family consisted but of three members: the baronet, Sir A.Khan Khan; his brother Ayaan Khan, some ten years his junior, a lieutenant in a light infantry regiment at Malta; and one sister, Nazma. Nazma Khan was the youngest child; her mother dying shortly after her birth. The father, Sir Rashid Khan, a man of strong feelings and social habits, never recovered this blow. A.Khan Khan was barely fifteen when he was called to the baronetcy and to the possession of the Khan estates. It was found that Sir Rashid had been more generous than the world had given him credit for, and that his estates were much encumbered. The trustees were disposed to rest contented with paying off the strictly legal claims during Sir A.Khan's minority.

This - the young heir would not accede to. He waited on his most influential guardian - told him he was aware his father, from hospitality and good nature, had incurred obligations which the law did not compel his son to pay; but which he could not but think that equity and good feeling did. He begged that these might be added to the other claims, and that the trustees would endeavor to procure him a commission in the army. He was gazetted to a cornetcy; and entered life at an age when, if the manlier traits are ready to be developed, the worthless ones are equally sure to unfold themselves. Few of us that have not found the first draught of life intoxicate!

Few of us that have not then run wild, as colts that have slipped their bridle! Experience - that mystic word - is wanting; the retrospect of past years wakes no sigh; expectant youth looks forward to future ones without a shade of distrust. The mind is elastic - the body vigorous and free from pain; and it is then youth inwardly feels, although not daring to avow it, the almost total impossibility that the mind should wax less vigorous, or the body grow helpless, and decay.

But Sir A.Khan was not cast in a fine mould, nor did his conduct at this dangerous period detract from this his trait of boyhood. He joined his regiment when before the enemy, and, until he came of age, never drew on his guardians for a shilling. Khan's firmness of purpose, and his after prudence, met with their due reward. The family estates became wholly unencumbered, and Sir A.Khan was enabled to add to the too scanty provision of his sister, as well as to make up to Ayaan Khan, on his entering the army, a sum more than adequate to all his wants. These circumstances were enough to endear him to his family; and, in truth, amidst all its members, there prevailed a confidence and a unanimity which were never for an instant impaired. There was one consequence, however, of Sir A.Khan Khan's conduct that he, at the least, foresaw not, but which was gradually and unconsciously developed.

In pursuing the line of duty he had marked out - in acting up to what he knew was right - his mind became too deeply impressed with the circumstances which had given rise to his determination. It overstepped its object. The train of thought, to which necessity gave birth, continued to pervade when that necessity no longer existed. His wish to re-establish his house grew into an ardent desire to aggrandize it. His ambition appeared a legitimate one. It grew with his years, and increased with his strength.

Many a time, on the lone bivouac, when home presents itself in its fairest colors to the soldier's mind, would Khan's prayer be embodied, that his house might again be elevated, and that his descendants might know him as the one to whom they were indebted for its rise. Khan's ambitious thoughts were created amidst dangers and toil, in a foreign land, and far from those who shared his name. But his heart swelled high with them as he again trod his native soil in peace - as he gazed on the home of his fathers, and communed with those nearest and dearest to him on earth.

Sir A.Khan considered it incumbent on him to exert every means that lay in his power to promote his grand object. A connection that promised rank and honors seemed to him an absolute essential that was worth any sacrifice. Sir A.Khan never allowed himself to look for, or give way to, those sacred sympathies, which the God of nature hath implanted in the breasts of all of us. Khan had arrived at middle age ere a feeling incompatible with his views arose. But his had been a dangerous experiment.

Our hearts or minds, or whatever it may be that takes the impression, resemble some crystalline lake that mirrors the smallest object, and heightens its beauty; but if it once gets muddied or ruffled, the most lovely object ceases to be reflected in its waters. By the time that lake is dear again, the fairy forms that ere while lingered on its bosom is fled forever.

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brilliant update. perfect perfect perfect angrezi.
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Just awesome 😃
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thank you guys for your encouragement 😊
I'll post the next update soon!

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