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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys

I just came up with this poem sort of thing.. which i think fits the Akshay - Mamta situation... Its from akshay to mamta.. Please give me your feedback All criticisims (good or bad) are most welcomed!!!!! 😃

You weren't near my heart

Yet, you felt my beats

You didn't hear me cry

Yet, you wiped my tears

You didn't see me being hurt

Yet, you healed my wounds

Though, now you've unleashed the curse

In the shadows of darkness - I see you

I see you shine the lie of love,

You shine love to the flowers of pain,

When did revenge dwell in the joy of smile?

When did anger become the reason I lived?

But whenever you look back you'll see,

The fire that I lit up for you, I'll be walking in it too..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: anju0930

But whenever you look back you'll see,

The fire that I lit up for you, I'll be walking in it too..

I loved this part a lot............dedicate this to, those who can't see akku's pain...those who can't see his love.....those who can't see his heart..those who can never understand him😭😭...Mamta yeh tumhare liye,by Anju.............👏😊

Dear O' Dear.😛.....perfect song for Shaan for his new show😃.😆...well done Anju-the shaair😊.....Mamta forum mein twist...ek poet ki entry..👏😛😆

.so u'll lighten up our evenings in IF with sweet & calm waves of songs filled with emotions & ur sincere love for Shaan😉

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I was a little worried,bcse a few(1 or 2,that's it...) they hv started to curse Akku I mean Shaan😉..they r asking why can't he leave SM alone...I did expect that...for them ,the whole world is right,only Akku is wrong...they can't see his pain😭....they never can understand him....no matter what I'am with u dear Shaan😉...I can understand u...I will stand by u forever...and I expect Anju,u also join me ,I'am sure u will also among those who will stand by Akku/Shaan forever.........................................😊

Akku ko samjho...........................😭

he is hurt,he is out to ruin...........

he lost,he'll make u lose.........

he cried,he'll make u cry..........

he is alone,he'll make u stranded.............................😭😭😭

Edited by niti_26 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awwww thanks niti.... Im glad u like the last line...
That was the only way I could summarize andy's feelings... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wah,great poem.u have totally revealed Akku's feelings where these writers can never do even they take 100 births.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow!! Anju, yes as you said, i loved the Last line.. Its nothing but the truth..
👏 👏 But the big million dollar question is : Can Mamta understand all this? 😕

Niti dear, u again forgot me.. How come you did not count me in, to support and side Shaan the Great? 😉 😉 Main bhi Hoon Naaaaa 😳 😳
Edited by sree - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was a moving poem anju.👏👏 it pretty much sums up akshay's take on the SM marriage.😊 like niti di said so, i like the last line the best too. but mamta will never understand that. she's too busy moving on.😡😡😡

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sree

Wow!! Anju, yes as you said, i loved the Last line.. Its nothing but the truth..
👏 👏 But the big million dollar question is : Can Mamta understand all this? 😕

Niti dear, u again forgot me.. How come you did not count me in, to support and side Shaan the Great? 😉 😉 Main bhi Hoon Naaaaa 😳 😳

heyy meri pyari sreekutty(it's malayalam😉),do I need to mention ur name...u r there always with Akku...u always been...and u will...no need to say that.. right?????😊Anju,joined us of late,that's why?😉😆.....but she is proving to be the best....................😊👏👏

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