virman ff: journey of life season2 pt 14(ii) pg 142 (04/08) *New*

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Update was really fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it

Waiting 4 next

Thanx 4 PM😊

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 11 years ago

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.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Awesome update, Shivali... I loved how Arjun could make Manvi feel comfortable with him and how he could make her laugh. Dedaaa and Methi's part was really very adorable. And still dunno why Manvi screamed... Waiting for u to unfold this story. Update soon! 😉

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.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Was gonna comment for ur previous chapter, but guess what?! I am the first one to comment on ur latest chapter 😉

And, yes, i loved the previous chapter of ur's! Very well written! 😊👏

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Devan.monalisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Great update! Loved the father daughter bonding very much! So virat falling for manvi! Waiting for next part!

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Jannat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

ressu 😉
unress

Princess I loved the whole update
and it was very well portrayed
so Virat hate his father
I'm quite interesting to know virat past... who is his wife and all
and yes what happen with Manvi
Virat and meethi bond is well describe
and last Virat helps Manvi was too good
in short I loved the whole
waiting for next part
update soon 😃 take care
Ur Barbie 🤣

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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

nice update he hate is father because he thing
his father is responsible his grandfather and h trying
to spend time and giving love his daughter and other
arjun and manvi became friend but was his past
update soon

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Superb
like it
too good
thnx for pm...

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lujeyn9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

What an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Superb

Like it

Waiting 4 next

Thanx 4 PM😊

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GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

SUPRB update dear...luved it.. 👏 😊 😊
Very beautifully u show virat and meethi' s part... 😃 😃 😃
Luv meethi...the cuty pieee...
She is sooo sweeet...lv their conversation. ...
Last part was ...MINDBLOWING. ...luv the way u show virat' s care for manvi, ,,,
Manvi' s feeling of protectiveness in virat' s arms... 😳 😳
U explains evry bit of emotions...like as meethi' s confusion. ...kadmbri ma' s head on arjun' solders. ...
6Evry bit of update...just mindblowing. ... 👏 👏 👏
Anddd also luv arjun and manvi part...the way arjun cheering manvi...and the virat also feel happy to see manvi happy... 😛 😛
SUPRB WRK DEAR...LUVED ITTT... 👏 👏 👏
UPDATE SOON NEXT PART DEAR...EGRLY WAITING FOR ITTT
THANKS ALOT FOR PM DEA... 😃 😃 😛