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Posted: 10 years ago

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👏👏😊😊chalooo finaalyyy sachai ka pata chal gaya hatts off to u dear...aur last update thoda jaldi dena aur romantic walaa...thanks for pm...⭐️⭐️

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Part 28 Part - B (last part)
 
 
 
Priya (confusedly):- aap!!!!! Sab jante hai

Rajat gets up and smiles. Ram standing there in shock.

Rajat:- Haan Priya...mein sab janta hoon. yahi ki tum meri nahi Ram ki zindagi ho...Ram se pyar karti ho...Yahi ki tumhari shaadi Ram ke saat ho chuki hai aur tumhare do bachhe bhi hai Dhruv aur Pihu.

Everybody listen to him very carefully.

 

Rajat continued:-

Tumhe kya laga ki agar muje yeh sach pata chal jaayega toh mein gussa karunga aur tumhe Ram ke paas jaane nahi dunga ya phir mein wapas coma mein chala jaaunga. Nahi Priya mein itna kamzor nahi hoon...In fact muje bahut kushi hui yeh jankar ki tumne apni ek nayi zindagi ki shuruwat ki. Mein janta hoon ki agar uss hadse mein tum mill jaati toh yeh saat saal tum mere intezaar karti...issliye nahi ki tum mujse pyar karti thi...lekin sirf issliye ki tum apna wada pura karthi...nandini ka khayal rakne ke liye..                                                                                                                                            Aur muje hamesha yeh guilt rehta ki meine apne saat saat tumhari zindagi bhi kharab kar di. Muje bahut bura laga jab meine tumhe Hospital mein dekha.muje laga ki tum aage badi hi nahi...

 

Priya is looking down...she is shocked about the revelation.

Rajat then looked at Nandini and call her. Nandini came and hugs her father.

Rajat continued:-

Pata hai Priya jab meine tumhe dekha toh muje eisa laga ki tum muje apne paas dekhkar kush nahi ho...tum mujse nazre nahi mila paa rahi thi. Tumhare chehre par meine hichkhichahat deki. Muje tabhi doubt ho gaya tha ki mujse yahan kuch chupaya jaa raha hai...mera kamra bilkul waise ke waisa sabhi cheez apni jagah...dekhkar lag raha tha ki mere uss kamre ko kise ne use hi nahi kiya. meine tumse pucha bhi... muje laga tum muje sab bata dogi.

 

R's mother (slowly):- Rajat tumhe sachaayi ka pata kaise chala

Rajat smiles and hold Nandini's hand very tightly and said "Nandini"

R's mother:- Nandini!!!!!!

 

Rajat:- haan Maa...jab aap aur Priya baat baat kar rahe the tab mein Nandini ke saat tha...mein usse beete hue saat saal ke baare mein pooch raha tha...yahi ki usne muje miss kiya ya nahi...Priya ne tumhara khayal rakka ya nahi...aur tabhi muje Nandini ne bataya ki Priya kabhi unke saat thi hi nahi...aur woh saari sachaayi bhi. Kahi na kahi muje bura laga meri beti ke liye...lekin muje hairani bhi hui jab Nandini ne khud kujse kaha ki uski Priya maasi mere liye apne pati aur bachho ko chodkar aayi hai. Lekin sach kahu toh muje yeh jankar bahut khushi hui ki Priya apne zindagi mein aage badd chuki hai.

 

R's mothers felt bad.

Rajat then looked at his Mother and asked "kya maa...aap Priya se yeh sab kaise bol sakti hai ki sab bhool jao aura aage badd jao...jab Nandini ne mujse yeh baat kahi toh muje sabse jyada bura laga...jiss tarah aapko meri chintaa hai...ussi tarah Priya bhi kisi ki beti, kisi ki biwi aur kisi ki maa hai...uska apna bhi ek parivaar hai...aap uske saamne eisi sharth kaisi rak sakti hai.

R's mother:- muje maaf kar do beta...meine sirf tumhare baare mein socha.

 

Rajat (consoling)her "Maa aapka beta bahut kush hai...arre aapko toh kushi hona chahiye ki Priya ne apni zindagi ko aage badaya...Priya ne waise bhi hamare liye bahut kuch kiya hai...Nandini ke liye Priya mujse shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar ho gayi thi...mein bilkul teek hoon Maa...abb sab chodo..mein aa gaya hoon na.

 

Rajat then turns towards Priya. He holds her by her shoulder and pushes her towards Ram. She falls on Ram's chest and Ram hold her from falling.

Rajat:- isse sambhal...Priya tumse bahut pyar karti hai...isse kabhi rulana nahi. Meri wajah se jo bhi takleef hui uske liye muje maaf kar do.

Ram holds her very tightly.

 

Pandit ji came and said "Muhurth ka samy nikla jaa raha hai...abhi thodi der mein mandir bhi bandh ho jaayega...puja karani hai ya nahi.

R's mother:- Pandit ji hum chahte hai ki iss agni ke saamne Ram aur Priya phir se saat phere le...aur phir se hamesha ke liye ek ho jaaye.

 

Shipra:- aapne meri moo ki baat cheen li...mein bhi yahi chahti hoon ki Ram aur Priya phir se shaadi kar le.

R's mother:- mein janti hoon meine jo kuch kiya sirf apne bte ke pyar mein kiya...muje maaf kar dijiye.

 

Priya smiles. Ram and Priya sits in front of agni and with all rituals Ram once again married Priya. Raya takes blessing from all. Ram hugs Rajat.

Rajat:- Priya...tumhare bachhe kahan hai...agli baar aavogi toh bachho ko bhi saat lekar aana...apne badi behen se bhi toh milana hai.

Priya nodded her head.

 

Shipra:- aaj sab kuch itna achha ho gaya hai ki mein chahti hoon ki aaj Ram aur Priya yahan ruk jaaye

Ram:- Nahi Maa...hame aaj hi nikalna hoga...bachhe wahan hamara intezaar kar rahe hai...meine bachho se wada kiya hai ki mein unki maa ko saat lekar aavunga.

 

Priya:- haan maa...mein abb aur apne bachho se alag nahi reh sakti. Muje unse milne ka mann kar raha hai...milkar apne gale lagane ka mann kar raha hai. meine unhe bahut takleef de hai

Shipra:- haan beta mein tumhe nahi rokungi.

Ram:- mein chahta hoon aap sab log Mumbai aaye...Priya ko bhi achha lagega aur bachhe bhi kush ho jaayenge.

 

Sudhir:- zaroor beta...hum aayenge. Abhi aap dono niklo, Mumbai pahuchte hi phone kar dena.

Priya hugs everybody. Priya once again said thank you to Rajat. Rajat gave side hug. Priya bends down and kisses nandini and said thank you to her also.

 

Raya in the car,

Ram calls Natasha and puts the phone in the car speaker.

Ram:- Natasha...bachhe kaise hai..

Natasha:- bilkul teek hai bhai...Dhruv thoda zidd karta hai...but meine usse samja diya hai..

Priya:- Natasha...muje Dhruv se baat kara do please...

 

Natasha hands over the mobile to Dhurv.

Natasha(slowly):- Dhruv mummy hai baat karo

Priya:- Dhruv...mumma baat kar rahi hai...

Dhruv:- mummy...aap kab aayegi...

Priya:- haan beta...mumma bahut jald aapke paas hogi beta...Dhruv Natasha bua ko jyada tang matt karna...mumma jaldi wapas aa jayegi beta.

 

Pihu:- mumma...please jaldi aao...Pihu miss you mumma

Priya:- I miss you too beta...mumma aap dono se bahut pyar karti hai...mumma bahut jald aapke paas aayegi beta...hum yahan se nikal chuke hai. ...saying this Priya had tears and this time she can't control herself and started crying.

 

Ram:- Priya...kya hua...He stops the car...what happen Priya...roo kyun rahi ho...hum jaa rahe hai na...common Priya...

Pihu:- Mumma...mumma...

Ram:- Pihu beta...hum abhi wahan aa rahe hai...dhruv ka khayal rakna...aur bua ko tang nahi karna beta...ok.

Both hang up.

 

Ram took her in his embrace. After some time Ram leave her.

Ram:- Priya hum jaa rahe hai na...kuch nahi hua hai...bachhe bilkul achhe hai.

Priya tries to control herself.

 

In order to changes her mind.

Ram(sheepishly):- so Priya...abb jab hamari shaadi dobara ho gayi hai toh mein soch raha hoon ki kyun na hum dobara honeymoon ke liye chale.

Priya is surprised.

Priya:- (wiping her tears) what????

 

Ram:- itna shock kyun ho rahi ho...I am serious yaar..abb sab kuch dobara ho raha hai toh hame honeymoon bhi toh dobara jana chahiye na...and winks at her.

Priya:- tabb toh aap yeh bhi kahenge ki dobara kyun na hum bachhe ke liye soche...

Ram:- waise idea bura nahi hai ...waise plan hai kya...and comes near to her.

 

Priya:- nahi...honeymoon nahi hum family vacation ke liye jaayenge...bachhe aur Natasha ke saat.aur abb muje ek aur baar pregnant nahi hona...

 

Ram smiles and said "hamare liye Honeymoon hi hua na"

Priya confused and asked woh kaise

Ram bends towards her and whisper "bachho ko Natasha dekh legi aur tum aur mein...

 

Priya push him and said "sach mein aap na pure besharam ho gaye hai...

Ram:- madam...let me tell you...inn saare chakkaro mein mere bahut saari nights waste hui hai...compensation toh karna padega na...

Priya:- no dear...iss baar aapne khud muje apne se alag kiya tha toh no compensation jaanu.

 

Ram :- oh...really...mein bhi dekhna chahta hoon ki meri biwi kab tak mere paas nahi aati hai...aur apne aap ko control karti hai

Priya:- mein naa bhi aau toh aap zaroor aa jaayenge.

Ram:- Madam...bahut control kar liya...abb aur nahi. In faltu ke chakkaro mein aakar mein chup nahi rehne wala

 

Priya felt shy and slowly hits him.

Priya:- Thank you Ram...mere zindagi mein aane ke liye

 

Ram holds her hand and kisses her and said "Thank you toh muje bolna chahiye Priya...mere zindagi mein aane ke liye...tumhare aane se pehle mein bilkul akela tha...tumhare aane par muje pata chala pyar kya hota hai...zindagi kya hoti hai.

Both get emotional. Ram hugs Priya very tightly.

 

Both reached Haveli. Priya took her kids in embrace.

Nutz:- Bhabhi aap par toh yeh sari bahut achhi lag rahi hai..meine kaha than a bhai ki bhabhi par achhi lagegi.

Priya:- toh kya yeh sari tumne bijwayi thi...

Nutz: haan bhabhi par bhaiyya mana kar rahe the. Keh rahe the ki aap par achhi nahi lagegi.

Priya:- tabhi mein sochu tumhare bhai ko iss beech muje sari dene ki yaad kaise aa gayi.

 

Raya in bedroom.

Priya:- toh Ram aapne kya kaha ki yeh sari meine tumhare liye li hai...

Ram:- haan toh meine hi tumhe di na

Priya:- How mean...Ram aapne mujse jhoot bola...kaha ki yeh sari aapne mere liye li hai...aur mujse wahan sari change karwa di...jao muje aapse baat nahi karna...

 

Ram:- common Priya...tu kisi aur ki di hui cheez pehno muje pasand nahi...jab mein hoon tumhare liye toh tumhe kisi aur ki di hui cheez kyun pehnna.

Priya stare at him angrily and move from there when Ram holds her from her wrist and pulls towards him. She falls on his chest. Ram looked at her intentively.

Priya:- Ram..chodiye muje...but Ram holds her more tighty.

Ram:- Nahi chodunga...Ram looks intentivey in her eyes and Priya is fallen weak with his gaze.

 

Priya:- Ram...mein aapse naraz hoon.

Ram(husky tone):- pata hai...lekin tum bhi janti ho ki muje isse koi farak nahi padta.

Priya:- Ram chodiye muje..muje change karna hai...

Ram:- kisne mana kiya hai

 

Priya:- aap chodenge nahi toh mein change kaise karu

Ram:- tumhe jo bhi karna hai...mere saamne karogi...change karna hai...nahana hai..jo bhi karna hai...mere saamne karogi.

Priya:- Ram please...Ram bends towards her "agar tum chaho toh mein madat kar sakta hoon and slowly unpin her pallu and nuzzling her neck. Priya is feeling hard and closed her eyes.

 

Ram puts his hand back to open the hook when they hear the knock on the door.

Priya get starled but Ram continues caresses her back.

Priya:- Ram darwaze par koi hai...she slowly push him and corrected her pallu.

Ram opens the door. Pihu and Dhruv runs and jump on the bed.

Pihu:- Mumma papa kya hum aaj hum dono aapke saat so sakte hai.

 

Ram and Priya looked at each other. Priya smiles and said "offcourse beta...aap dono hamare saat zaroor so sakte hai.

Priya looked at Ram (mischievously) and asked "kyu papa...pihu aur dhruv hamare saat so sakte hai na".

Ram is helpless and said "haan peehu...mein mumma se bol hi raha tha ki hame aaj sabko milkar sona chahiye.

 

Priya is smiling seeing his helplessness.

All sleeps holding each other.

 

Having somewhere to go is home...having someone to love is family...having both is blessing...Raya is blessed with both

 

End

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome climax yaar itni jaldi kyun close kiya ff ko bahut maja aarahatha padne mein aapke ff anyways very wonderful story thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg dis was so beautiful im so upset dat its over
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: joemahika

awesome climax yaar itni jaldi kyun close kiya ff ko bahut maja aarahatha padne mein aapke ff anyways very wonderful story thanks

thanks for comments🤗...If possible I will show parvarish part in my SS😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice ending...loved it...alls well that ends well.. ...will miss this wonderful ff...but will wait eagerly fr ur other ff...thnx fr giving us such a wndrful stry of r fvrite raya...thnxxx
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow superb update
thanks for pm
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dhat teri ki RaYa ka romance toh mila par kaccha pakka... kya yaar itna dhasu update k baad i was expecting awesome romence off RaYa but what we got a night with kids & stoborn wife poor my Golu... kya kya sapne sajaye hoge par dil k armaan dil me hi reh gaye wish bachon k sone k baad pur ho jate dusre kamre me hi sahi... never mind it was awesome update & one of the wonderful story I read on this foum i loved it a lot... waiting for ur other to get continuing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
what an update perfect ending. perfect love track u dint made it complicate loved it to core.. 
thanku so much for such a lovely romantic story 


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Posted: 10 years ago
rajat is very good that he understand the raya and they are back together
ram is so naughty not miss any chnace to romance with priya end was good as raya was happy and thanx for the pm awesome update