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Posted: 12 years ago
I just love Viren a lot
Manvi and Viren deserves each other... virat gaya accha hua πŸ˜› pitna mat ab mujhe
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d

I just love Viren a lot

Manvi and Viren deserves each other... virat gaya accha hua πŸ˜› pitna mat ab mujhe

why would i when i was dying to read this very comment from urs...??? 😳
i knew you would say that u luv viren n u are happy... πŸ˜‰
now i am happy tooo πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

why would i when i was dying to read this very comment from urs...??? 😳
i knew you would say that u luv viren n u are happy... πŸ˜‰
now i am happy tooo πŸ˜ƒ

n mujhe pata hein tu end me virat ko hi manvi ke saath bhira degi πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally I read it...and wt to I say u fully turned story...manvi wife of viren vadhera...struggling with her life now...how can anyone expect she forget virat so soon...that's different things if he was same virat, but now he fully changed the way how manvi want to see...and he met with accident, and he is brother of viren...how she forgot her first love...and she trying very hard to give full love to vire...just thinking of virat she not worse...as a human being also she caring for him...hope she fully convert to viren and live happily with him, and hope virat not interfear again in her life
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: raju_sky


finally I read it...and wt to I say u fully turned story...manvi wife of viren vadhera...struggling with her life now...how can anyone expect she forget virat so soon...that's different things if he was same virat, but now he fully changed the way how manvi want to see...and he met with accident, and he is brother of viren...how she forgot her first love...and she trying very hard to give full love to vire...just thinking of virat she not worse...as a human being also she caring for him...hope she fully convert to viren and live happily with him, and hope virat not interfear again in her life



thank u soo much for the comment di... U hav been the best critic for me n i know how much u luv pmkk... Whatever i m doing in the ff is bcs of u n ur valuable ideas n opinions... I remember the way we used to chat on fb discussing future plot of pmkk... Thank u for being there...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was just about to post the next chapter when some technical problem occured...
Something is wrong with my pc...
Will update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
link to the previous chapter
CHAPTER 38
~~ bhula denge tumko...
days passed by and soon the ackwardness between manvi and virat reduced and they started accepting the reality.

angad and kripa also decided to leave and angad tried various time to convince virat to accompany them but he refused everytime.
angad : this is the heights... you are coming with us...
virat : i have already told you for like hundred times that i cant come...
angad : but why...?? what is left here for you...?? exactly what...??
virat : try to understand... i cant go...
angad : but why...???
virat : because i promised manvi... i promised that i would stay here only...
angad : what...???
virat : yeah she married bhai on the condition that i would stay here and every moment see her with bhai and regret my decision...
angad : tum dono paagal ho kya...??? ek apne pyaar ko sacrifice karta hai aur dosra usi sacrifice ki keemat maangta hai...
virat : main uske liye marr bhi sakta hoon... aur ye toh... ye toh kuch bhi nahi hai...
angad : kyun virat...??? kyun...?? kyun tu itna selfless ho gya hai...?? tera pyaar tere paas aana chahta tha aur tune usko khud se itna door kar diya...
virat : har kisi ko pyaar nahi milta... tu lucky hai ke... ke kripa tere saath hai...
angad : tu bhi lucky ho sakta tha...
virat : bhai se jyada important aur kuch nahi hai... chal jaa you go n complete your packing...
angad : this is such a torture dude... come with us yaar...
virat : angad yahan rehta hoon toh manvi ko dekh toh sakta hoon na... wahan london mein usse door... nahi yaar...
kripa entered the room and heard this.
kripa : i wish you took the right step at the right time... virat i can see you are finished...
virat : i regret that too... but destiny you see...
kripa : i dont have ill feeling towards you but you could have really saved your world...
virat : but see your friend is happy now... all thanks to me...
kripa : yeah we all can see that... especially you... the sadness in her empty eyes... tumhe toh dekhti hogi na...
virat : its just a phase... she will be ok...
kripa : i know virat you must be thinking that i am friends with manvi thats why supporting her... u know right now i am not supporting anyone but love... i cant decide who is wrong and who is right... all that matters for me is the love you have for manvi, or the love viren bhaiya have for manvi... i know manvi is confused because in one hand she has something which she never dreamnt of having and in the other hand she has what she wanted ie you...
virat : please guys... i beg you... i am already emotionally unstable... mujhe aur kamjor mat karo...
angad : we didnt mean to virat...
virat : i did this for bhai... my elder brother who did nearly everything possible for me... everything guys... i cant cheat him now... i cant snatch his happiness... bhai se jyada manvi ko koi pyaar nahi kar sakta... shayad main bhi nahi... kaun ek aisi ladki se pyaar karega jo pehle se hi kisi aur se pyaar karti hai... main toh shayad kabhi aisi ladki ki taraf dekhta bhi nahi... kisi aur ke bacche ko pal rahi thi wo apne andar... main manvi ko deserve nahi karta guys... i dont...
kripa looked at virat wondering what if this change came in him years ago... then nothing would have got messed up...
kripa : agar time ko wapas la sakti na... toh main jaan deke bhi le aati... you both were meant to be...
virat : its okk... i guess may be next time...
angad : yeah... lets go kripa... help me in packing...
kripa : hmm...
angad : take care dude...
angad and kripa went to angad's room leaving virat behind.
virat looked at angad and kripa walking hand in hand and something pinched him. he also had manvi's hand in his but he didnt value her...
virat : i love you manvi... pta nahi ke main kabhi tumhe bhool bhi paunga ya nahi...
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viren : manna...
manvi came running into the room and stopped on seeing the condition of the room. cushions on the floor... files on th bed... clothes on the couch...
manvi : ye sab kya hai...???
viren : mera wo favourite pen kahan hai...??
manvi : kaunsa pen...??? and what have you done to my room viren...??
viren : ye toh is liye ke mere jaane ke baad tum bore na ho... saaf safai mein time pass ho jaega...
manvi : very smart haaan...
viren : anyways mrs. vadera dont waste time in talking... help me find my pen...
manvi : viren which pen...??? take another one...
viren : no... cmon na manvi... kabhi toh apna patni dharm nibhaya karo...
manvi : hawww...
viren : jaan... romance baad mein kar lege... please mera pen dhund do... meri meeting hai...
manvi : arghhh... kya hai uss pen mein aisa...???
viren : woh dad ka pen tha... badi maa ne dad ko diya tha... (viren became emotional talking about the pen)
manvi : ohh... just gimme 5 minutes... abhi mil jaega...
manvi wrapped the pallu of her saree around her waist and tucked it into the underskirt and started looking for the pen. viren looked at manvi and how fast were her movements... her hands were moving so quickly and side by side she was clearing the mess he created.
manvi : mil gaya...
manvi showed the pen to viren and he beamed with happiness...
viren excitedly got upo and hugged manvi. manvi smiled and hugged him back...
viren : thank you... thank you soo much... you have no idea what this pen means to me... this is the blessing of dad for me... his last belonging i have...
manvi : viren... everything thats important to you... is important to me as well... main tumhe aise nahi dekh sakti... tum meri himmat ho... mera sab kuch ho...
viren : i love you manvi...
manvi : i love you too... love you soo much...

manvi smiled being in his embrace. his limitless and selfless love for her has already started healing all her wounds... she doesnt feel uncomfortable anymore... she doesnt think of going back to virat... she has accepted that viren is her husband... her everything and now living without him, is impossible for her.
manvi broke the hug and put the pen in viren's pocket and smiled looking at it.
viren : you know you look so beautiful when you smile...
manvi : i know... you always bring this smile on my face.
viren : manna... woh actually... woh main... i mean...
manvi : hehe... jab propose kia tha tumne tab bhi itne nervous nahi the... aaj kaunsa bomb phodne jaa rahe ho...
viren : badi maa keh rahi thi main nahi...
manvi : kya keh rahi thi...???
manvi became worried and a lump formed in her throat. she knows swamini isnt that happy with her...
viren : ke hum kahin ghoom aate hai... outing ho jaegi...
manvi : hum matlab u n badi maa...??
viren : no you idiot... hum matlab u n me... mr. n mrs. viren vadera... (pulling her close)
manvi : ohh and i thought... how stupid of me...
viren : toh chalogi...??? are you ready...??
manvi : hmm... parn ek shart pe...
viren : shart...??? honeymoon pe bhi conditions apply...
manvi : yes mr. viren vadera... so the condition is that we will go to delhi... our bunglow in NFC...
viren : delhi...???
manvi : jee haan delhi... wahan jaa humne ek doosre ko paaya tha... jahan humare pyaar ka ehsaas hua tha...
viren : manna but - (thinking what if manvi gets all the memories of her past unchained going there, back again)
manvi : wahan ki har purani yaad ko main mitana chahti hoon... uss har ek yaad pe humare pyaar se ek nayi kahani likhenge... har kone mein hoga toh sirf humara pyaar aur kuch nahi...
viren : ye itna asaan nahi hoga...
manvi : pyaar bhi kahan asaan hota hai... par hum kabhi pyaar ka saath bhi toh nahi chodte na... tumhara saath hai toh kuch mushkil nahi hai...
viren : main tumhare saath hoon apni aakhri saans tak... i promise...
manvi again hugged viren but this time, it wasnt love... she hugged him out of fear... she cant let anything happening to viren... viren is the air she breathes and her heart is beating only for him... anything happening to him will eventually end up in taking her life...
viren smiled and wrapped his arms more tightly and protectively around manvi like a caccoon... he kissed the nape of the neck and his lips lingered there for a few more seconds...
virat saw them hugging each other and one moment he felt happy for viren and other moment he burned in jealousy... he hated to see manvi in viren's arm... he wanted to go and separate them... he wanted his manvi back but everytime he feet freezed... he couldnt take a step ahead thinking, his one step would ruin everything... but how will he live like this his whole life...??? how could he sail on two different boats at the same time...?? how could he live when there is a never ending battle going on between his mind and his heart...???
virat : i regret it...
saying this he went back to his room.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update Naina

loved it so much

I'm sorry for comment so small But I'll big comments after my exams

loved ur every work Sweety πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
its a vry nice update dear..
poor virat..i feel pity for him..anyways update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Awesome
like it
fab
thnx for update



thank u khushi...

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