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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Awosm OS
Love it
sry for late hm too late
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
u made a OneShot Gallery... :O
so now i am officially so pissed...

issliye i reduce two comments...

to one.. *partly it is coz of... *

local was nice... i really wanna know the inspiration...

i loved the make out...

u know what i thought first ... yeh toh ekdum __________ *complete karle... * :P

and then how they steal those moments... awww...

and the hot gift..
husband gets hormonal seeing his wife... :P

it was reaaly nice... the small quickie you showed...

amazing... :)

and then what followed.. :P

overall very nice...

again.. i am NOT sorry for the short comment..

i mean agar sorry bolun toh how ud i khaao bhaaoo??? tell me... tall me..

chalo i think this completes the quota...

drop me a reminder if i miss something..

and sorry... if i missed sonething... :/
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Bith the os was really nice
supab
beautifully writteN
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
train main romance..
wat an idea...
hmm bt it was sweet one... <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
All r awsm re .specialy local 1 is hawt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES
Bada wala comment dungi zarur.. but lemme read and put this topic in
MY POSTS first. :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Short and quick replies:


@Ameena: Pehli baat this wasn't hot. Dusri, yes I did dedicate it to you but maine kaunsa badaa teer maar liya jo itna thank you bol rahi hai. Birthday that oh wish karna toh banta hai na..
@rashi: tera dimaag toh dusre direction mein hi chalta hai. Anyways thank you maate jo aapne unreserved karne ki kripa ki, woh bhi mere dhamkaane par.
@moumita: wahin se uthaya tha.. Raqesh-Nidhhi NB promo. I loved it. Thanks.
@Mannu: I know it wasn't that hot jitna hot the people expected after seeing that banner and title. My fault. But I am trying to write something of that kind.
@madhu: thanks but no thanks yeh OS gallery maine hi banayi hai mujhe koi gift mein nahi mili. And Haye rama ke after effects bahut zyada _______ hote hain..
@Sargam: thanks a ton dear. Double the thank for double comments.
@yogini: Aakhen bandh rakhta toh kaise pahuchta apni destiny tak.. aur phir mera OS kisi kaam ka na reh jaata.. security cameras ka kya kaam, mujhe thodi na koi scandal karwana tha
@kriyansh_alisha: As far as I remember, Pooja reviewed from this ID, correct me if I am wrong.
And concepts aa hi jaate hain bas aas paas dekhne ki zarurat hai.
@isha: Thanks dear, I am glad you liked it.
@Roop: Thanks I am glad people like the Oneshot- It's local, that's one of my favourites.
Thanks for liking and reviewing the two.
@Shukti: Your wait comes to an end with this next one. But I am unsure about it.
And glad to know you like this Ahem- gallery
@Shalini: pehle toh unreserved that reserved post of yours.
And secondly, kitne baar bolu, kaise aur kis tarah se describe karu, that I just got the idea. Ab usmein bhi you guys have itna bada question mark.
@Sweetdivyafrien: if you are in my buddylist, I won't miss to send you PMs, when I do. Anyways thanks.
@cookie: there's nothing in it that makes it unbelievable. Huh! Maine unke ghar ka floor decide nahi kiya. And why do we care,, itna toh fictions mein chalta hai..
@Fida: thanks.. yes, it suits haye rama situation but I would want a different track for their Haye rama in future.. thoda aur spicy kinda
@vaish: I know you are isiliye giving out punishment instalments. I have already given out 2, 2 more to go.
Local wale ka inspiration I did tell, anyways I would say it once again,
I was with my friends in the local, back from college. When there was a couple romancing in front of our eyes. And then my friends started passing comments and we all ended up laughing. But then it was a crowded local that day too. So we all were like sticking to each other and the closeness was something I couldn't handle but couldn't act upon either.. that's when the idea struck.

u know what i thought first ... yeh toh ekdum __________ *complete karle... * :P

Tell me what's there in the blank.. I cannot figure it out.
Anyways thanks.. And I know you have to khao bhao,, but you are unable to :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chalo Finally...
Might not be a lucky night for KR... or was it...

Let them decide...

But it was certainly lucky for us... ;)

Becoz you gave out an OS so nice...

Honestly Shenz I point out some placement mistakes... I didn't find much..

Or i was engrossed in write up so much that conveniently ignored it... So chose whatever suits you...

Starting mein I was like this is the same concept I thought... :O

But then it changed... And I was glad...

Coz I wanted to write on that concept...

So the tease of dance you showed... Amazing,...

Just loved it how you showed their inner desires surfacing up...

And I certainly like you didn't show the L-word surfacing... And moreover it was another L-word..

*Differentiate within it*

And then how she wanted to up the game... Ah... Loved it...

I wanna know how was the guy able to dropofy the drink over saamne ki dress when she was conveniently busy snogging...

And then make out in the washroom... That was amazing.. So very well written.. The passion, lust.. the drive.. the force and everything..

And her commanding.. that has to be the thing I saw here first.. cool...

The thing I liked the most about the OS was that it was lust driven... I know it sounds weird.. But this scene kinda makes sense to me... I mean how you show they harbored something.. and they were aroused... so the desire makes sense... and moreover the common washroom thingy also does... coz lets face it... every time out of nowhere you cannot get a bed... now can you? :P

I really love the OS for the way you wrote it... And then how you kept it realistic in the way... Weird nah tharak wasn't my priority... this shows am not that big tharki... 🤣

Well you know that a good write up always ups my mood.. :D

Awesome... ^_^
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