MG FF Scalded in Love thread 2 very important note page 41 27\4\2015 - Page 2

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

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Oh god...

How much did you curse kk for the out burst...

I thought all will support kk and will love kk for her out burst...

Hahaha I never thought Maan have this much of supporters in comparison of kk??

Part 16

While Jeh murmured

Girlfriend???

Jeh I ...

Jeh please go to your room.

Geet shouted top of her lungs.

Geet WO I m sorry... I didn't know that how Kajal ...

Maan tried to clarify

Just then they heard Jeh's shout.

Mom...!!!!

Both rushed to their room only to see Kajals breathing were rapid and her face was covered with sweat and her eyes were red...

Maan was terrified seeing HIS daughter like this...

Oh my god. What happened to her...?

He took his daughter in his arms and starting rubbing her back...

Oh god!

Kajal please breathe dear...

I m calling the doctor

Maan announced taking out his cell

Maan forgot all the insult and harsh words said by her in fractions of seconds.

Here geet was panicked and was searching something.

Geet...!!!

Maan shouted because geet was not responding...

I m taking her to hospital...

There was true panic for his daughter.

Look geet her lips are blue!!

Geet are you listening to me??

Geet found something and went near Kajal...

She took kk in her arms...

And sprayed something in her mouth...

What the hell are you doing???

Your daughter is suffering from asthma...

Asthma...???

Yes it was an asthma attack.

May be she shouted or cried very much that's y an attack.

After few sprays in her mouth,

Kajal condition becomes normal again...

I didn't know...

Geet cut Maan and said

You never knew any thing about us Maan.

Maan looked at her face.

Eyes full of tears and red and her lips were shivering her kohl were merged on her cheeks she look tried and hurt.

Maan took his crutches and get out of the room and then house.

Here geet closed her eyes...

What she thought and what happened???

She didn't want this...

Oh god why are you doing this to me???

She hugged kk and Jeh and slept thinking what mess her life has become...

Here Maan was walking aimlessly...

His legs were aching but now he didn't want to stop anymore.

Geet and kk words rang into his ears...

Go away!

You never know anything about us.

I hate you

He didn't know when his legs gave up and he sat there still for god knows how many hours.

He may be the biggest business man but his life is a mess.

This mess is only because of him. He was a fool.

Suddenly a man came near Maan.

You looked hurt.

Maan look at that Man.

That man was wearing white clothes. His face was exceptionally glowing.

Long white hairs and white beard...

That man sat near Maan.

You look tense?

Huh! Hmm

Maan was not that Man who talks to some one easily.

Being Maan Singh Khurana was still craved in his mind.

He knows his position and his reputation to well...

Sometimes it's better to put your fake ego behind son.

Maan look at that man shocked and that man smiled in response.

How can he read my mind?

Maan thought...

I hope I can also read minds of some people.

Of your wife and children?

Its not that hard all you need to do is to know them better and listen to your heart!

But they hate me...

No they don't.

You don't know anything.

I know every thing.

I give up on them...

Don't loose hope...

You can't give up on your loved ones...

They hate me...

No... they don't...

He smiled.

Maan was shocked once again.

I think I made a mistake.

It's a sin son.

You know what I did?

Maan asked like a child shocking at that man once again.

It's a sin indeed son but breaking heart is a greater sin than that

That man ignored Maan question.

I m not breaking some one heart.

His ego once again back in the way and he started to stand up.

Yea you already have broken some.

Of your wife

Of your daughter

And of your son.

How can you say that???

Maan say defensively.

I was not wrong I always did...

You did nothing.

That was the patience of your wife as well your wait to come back to goodness.

Are you trying to say I m not a good human being??

Goodness lies in the heart of humanity only the feelings are missing.

You mean I don't have feelings.

Maan was shocked at the guts.

You know who I m?

He let out a chuckled letting Maan be confuse more.

Well son. I think you should work on winning your family's heart back.

And the reason you want them back in very much in your heart...

Listen to your heart.

And your wife has already suffered much.

Huh!

With this that man starts to walk ...

Leaving Maan in mystery...

When Maan realized what he said...

He started to search him but didn't find him any where.

He returned home late at night. Finding 3 angels sleeping cuddling into each other...

He went near Kajal and planted a kiss on her forehead.

Destiny

Before he didn't wanted a daughter but now he knows he loves his daughter more than his son in spite of the fact she hates him.

His daughter hates him.

A tear slipped from his eyes.

But just then he reminded that man's words

They don't hate me...

He said to himself.

He kissed Jeh's forehead to...

He loves his daughter more than his son now...

Coming to geet

He leaned forward to kiss her forehead too...

But stopped in the mid way realizing what was he doing?

He just went to him room thinking about his action.

And here a tear slipped from Geet's eyes.

Yes she was not sleeping.

Maan doesn't loves me...

She took out Maan's picture and starting weeping.

Maan y you did this to me?

Y cant you love me?

I love you with all my heart and you?

What you did?

Deceived me and love some one else.

Here Maan heard her sobs and listen her talking with his picture...

He went into his room again and started thinking...

Geet!

He murmured painfully.

Precap- some realization... Most awaited

Yay!!!!

New thread...

I m so happy thank you so much...

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Nice update
Itd sad to see being the father he does not know his daughter's problem
And geet she is the lost one with nothing as hers

Lovely update kk has astima attak and maan cant know about this someone show the way to maan lovely update thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: Zeba702

Tu har part mai itna dhamak kyun deti hai 😡
who was tht mystery man 😕
chalo kuch toh akele di ussne maan ko 😆

ohh poor kajal suffering from asthma 😲

yaar ek forehead kiss kar deta toh kya hota 😡

aab pata nahi geet aur kya kya sochegi 😡

tu yaar mujhe se mar kyun khana chahti hai

bht chota update tha aabhi shuru huwa aur aabhi khatam

awesome ud but still chota sa tha

waiting for next dhamak pata nahi next ud mai kya dhamak degi so i shld b prepare for all ur dhamak's

hawww mera dialogue tu mjhpar mar rahe hain...
that mystery man was a man who was mysterious 😆
mil gaya ans 😛
ye tou tu maan se poch kiss krne m kia hojata 😉
hehehehehehe
geet ka to kam hai sochna 😳
itna chota to nh t it was 1081 words 😃
hahahahaha be ready for next dhamaka wala update... 😆