RishBala OS - A Memorable Diwali

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Posted: 11 years ago
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First...this is NOT a prediction. You can say it's wishful thinking...but I made this OS a happy OS on everyone finding out about Madhu's pregnancy. I know, it'll probably be happy in the show at first as well because no one will even think about the fact that Madhu's an upcoming heroine. So I left out the part where the news of pregnancy most likely brings about frustration. So enjoy! (Oh and yes, I'm Pritt. I changed my username. As Jassu would say, Tom Hiddleston is my new spirit guide.)


A Memorable Diwali


Diwali. The festival of lights. An occasion in which happiness fills the air in one form or the other. Happiness did come their way, in an unexpected fashion.

This was their first Diwali together after marriage, and the most memorable one yet.

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"Madhu?" RK looked around for his wife who had suddenly vanished. His head turned in Bittuji's direction, "Bittuji! Where's Madhu?"

"Chief, I saw her run upstairs," Bittuji answered and then turned back towards the festivities in the house.

RK looked up towards his room with a confused expression. Without a second thought, he limped up the stairs himself. As he finally reached their room, he called Madhu's name. There was no response. He limped further into the room, only to see that it was empty, "MADHU!" The creaking of the bathroom door caught his attention. He turned to see Madhu wiping at her mouth with a towel. She glanced up at him and froze in spot. She placed the towel down and walked up to him.

"RK? What are you doing up here?" she took a hold of his arms.

"I could ask you the same thing Biwi," he raised an eyebrow in question.

"I..." she looked around and then back up into his eyes, "It's nothing, let's go."

"Madhu, what's wrong?" he became worried staring down at her.

"I think I ate something bad, I just threw up a little, I'm okay now though," she smiled a weak yet worried smile. RK could tell she wasn't okay as he stared down into her eyes. He raised his hand to caress the side of her face when suddenly she swayed. She closed her eyes, placing one hand on her temple. As she balanced herself, she slowly reopened her eyes.

"Madhu? Rishu?" Radha called from outside as she neared their room. RK glanced towards the door and then back towards Madhu.

"Madhu?!" he called her name concerned.

"I..." and with that she lost her balance, closing her eyes and falling forwards into RK. He used his only working hand to hold her in place.

"MADHU!" unable to use his other hand, he gently lied her down on the floor, her head in his lap.

"Rishu?!" RK heard a shocked Radha's voice.

He didn't look up as he used his only working hand to lightly tap on Madhu's face.

"Madhu! Wake up!"

"MANGESH, PATEL!" Radha called out to the servants of RK mansion.

"SOMEONE CALL THE DOCTOR!" RK completed Radha's incomplete sentence.

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"Are you sure she's okay?!" RK questioned the doctor for the hundredth time. Madhu smiled with a weak expression, seeing her husband so worried for her.

"Yes Mr. Kundra! There's nothing to worry about. In fact I have some wonderful news for you." Everyone's expressions in the room twisted to show confusion.

"Wonderful news? What do you mean?! My Biwi fainted and you're talking about wonderful news?" RK began getting worked up.

"RK..." Madhu gently called his name to calm him. He sat on the bed beside her, holding her hand as she lay peacefully. The doctor stood on the other side of Madhu. She lightly squeezed her fingers around RK's hands. He looked down at her as she turned to face the doctor, "Doctor...what do you mean...?" Madhu asked in a tired voice.

"Mrs. Kundra, I mean to say that you and Mr. Kundra should be happy. I'd like to congratulate you both."

"Quit talking in puzzles and tell us what you mean! Spit it out!" RK let out angrily as Madhu already figured out what the doctor was hinting towards.

"Mr. Kundra, you're going to be a father," the doctor spoke calmly in response. Silence filled the air, as though no one could believe what they had just heard.

"What did you just say?" RK asked in a stunned voice.

"Mrs. Kundra is pregnant," the doctor stated in a positive voice. A smile burst onto Radha's face as a tear of joy fell from her eyes. Bittuji couldn't stop the tears of happiness from falling from his eyes as a huge smile took place on his face. Dipali and Paabo exchanged shocked, angered, and frustrated expressions. RK and Madhu stared into each other's wide eyes. Tears began to fill Madhu's eyes as a smile slowly began to take place of the shocked expression on her face. As RK stared down at her smile, he couldn't help but smile in response. He placed his hand on the side of her face, caressing it and placing her hair behind her ear.

"I'll drop you off to the door," Bittuji spoke to the doctor in an enthusiastic voice. Radha followed Bittuji and the doctor out of RK and Madhu's room, knowing they'd want to take in the happiness themselves for a moment. Dipali and Paabo left annoyed as well.

"I love you Madhu," RK broke the silence between them. She smiled and slowly sat up, leaning against the wall behind the bed.

"I love you too RK," she replied, wrapping her arms around him as she cried happily onto his shoulder.

"Ganpatti Bappa really does know how to fulfill our wishes. I said it'd be a memorable Diwali and look, a memorable Diwali it was."

"I asked for happiness to be sent our way..." she spoke into his shoulder, "Happy Diwali RK."

"Happy Diwali Madhu...and Happy Diwali to you too future little Right Kameena," he let out a chuckle

"Arey!" Madhu pulled away, staring at RK playfully as he smirked with slightly wet eyes. She hit his arm gently and then let out a beautiful laugh. He admired her, smiling himself as she giggled. Then very gently, he placed his hand on her stomach, staring down at her stomach. She looked down at his hand and became emotional. Smiling behind her tears, "RK..." she spoke softly.

He glanced up at her and spoke lovingly, "Thank you, for giving me all the happiness in the world Madhu." She smiled, wrapping her arms around him again.

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Blue_Scrubs thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok i'm first one to comment...LOVED it 😃...i doubt if the actual scene will be as poignant as the one u described but i can always read it again and smile
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a beautiful OS. I just loved it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bahnni.mj

ok i'm first one to comment...LOVED it 😃...i doubt if the actual scene will be as poignant as the one u described but i can always read it again and smile


Aw thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. And yes, I agree, it won't be anything like this...just wishful thinking from my side. 😆

Originally posted by: ship13

What a beautiful OS. I just loved it. 😊


Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IC.. nice username.

Amazing OS.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Hiddlestoned: Awesome OS!!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was a nice os😊a memorable one😊
i always wished rk must lift her in his arms when she tells"she is pregnanat"😊...but now our rk is paralysed😒...CVs plz fulfill my dreams
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Posted: 11 years ago
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simply beautiful.
I love the part where RK puts his hand on Madhu's tummy. I am glad I read this cause God only knows what the CV's will end up showing us!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwie :D
Yayyy! I sooo wanna see that happening :D ❤️
Lovely OS Pritt :)


xxx

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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was wonderful😳 you have vividly and beautifully captured rk and madhu's emotions😳 nice os

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