MADHUBALA - OS; IN THE END

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Rani Ansari

@ron.ansari

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

Me first 🥳 !! Yayy looks like am on a roll today quite happy though 🥳!!

I loved it...Ah !! I loved it for all the technicalities and the jargons of science n commence 😆 !! Yup from a doctors perspective stitching anything would be easier compared to the wound !!

Hmm Madhu and her stubbornness infact made her look like the girl next door hehe !! Her gradual process of falling in love and emerged out as one devoted wife along with Rishabh's return was pictured brilliantly.

Loved it for its brilliance they invoked right kind of emotions while reading 😃 !!

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.Shree.

@.Shree.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful OS 😳

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

res😉
nice os dear!i always luved the stories where rishbala fell into luv after marriage!!
thanks a lot 4 this nice update😊

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meenji22

@meenji22

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

very nice os keep writting

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revti21

@revti21

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow lovely os...pls write more

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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

wow lovely and beautiful os ron keep writig dear

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

omg i just love this OS!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

wish the end part was a little longer 😒

pls pls pls put all ur other work frm other forum with rishbala names instead 😳

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

res😊

loved the os. the stubborn madhu and the doctor rk .the flow of the story felt good.

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Rani Ansari

@ron.ansari

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: aDarkAngel
Me first 🥳 !! Yayy looks like am on a roll today quite happy though 🥳!!
I loved it...Ah !! I loved it for all the technicalities and the jargons of science n commence 😆 !! Yup from a doctors perspective stitching anything would be easier compared to the wound !!
Hmm Madhu and her stubbornness infact made her look like the girl next door hehe !! Her gradual process of falling in love and emerged out as one devoted wife along with Rishabh's return was pictured brilliantly.
Loved it for its brilliance they invoked right kind of emotions while reading 😃 !!

This was about separation and union of two hearts and was my entry to an OS comp. I am happy that you liked it. but not more than Madhu.😊