FF:TMOAAML thread 2 link pg-112 12/12/13 - Page 60

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Posted: 12 years ago
What was that..ups shree kidnaped n killer going to killl hop aisha kuch kare update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh no..evn shree kidnapped..!!!! cant wait to read wat happens next..plzz update soon !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Teaser is super...
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz plz continue soon..
want to bit that man..
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nice update
scary teaser
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting teaser dear continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you so much for liking chapters and teaser..
special thanx to

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here is the next part
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART-11

IN NIGHT

DISCO BUBBLES


All come shree is wearing college type dress, Chotu is wearing waiter dress, rathore, arjun, riya and liza goes as a friend whp comes there for enjoyment. But there main motive is that vo serial killer shree ko pakde.


And at the same time the killer also came there and goes to take for a drink and his eyes is roaming searching for his shikar when his eyes fell on shree and he says in his Mind milgaya mujhe apna new shikar..


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Riya: sir shree kahan hain?


Rathore: yahi hoga...


They all are searching for shree but could not find in the disco...


Chotu: sir kahin vo khooni ne shree ko kidnapped to nahi kar liya?


Arjun: ho sakta hain..


FEW MINUTES BEFORE----


Ariya, Sam and liza were standing in th bar counter and they were talking and shree was Standing in other direcyion and he was sipping his drink and also his gaze on every direction searching for the killer and killer eyes is fixed on shree.


Arjun: Rathore hame dance floor pe jana chahiye.

Rathore: dance floor pe magar kyun?


Arjun: agar khooni dance floor pe hua to? Or dance floor se acchi tarah nazar bhi rakhi jaa sakti hain...


Rathore: tum theek keh rahe ho rawte. Ek kaam karte hain tum or Riya partner banke jayun or main or liza partner banke jaate hain.


Hearing this riya become uncomfortable and on the other hand arjun just nodded but inside he was happy.


Riya: sir kya main aapke saath pairup ho sakti hoon?


Rathore: ok


Riya become happy but arjun sad but he does not show this.


So both couple goes and dancing and gazing there surrounding on the other hand shree also enjoying and gazing to people and drinking his drink but suddenly he was collided with a man.


Man: sorry maine aap ko dekha nahi.


Shree: koi baat nahi


Man: vaise mere vajah se aapki drink gir gaye I am really very very sorry.


Shree: maine kahan na koi baat nahi.


Man: aise kaise rukiye main aapke liye abhi ek drink laata hoon.


Shree: iski koi zaroorat nahi hain.


Man: please mujhe laane di jiye.


Shree: theek hain


Man goes from there and goes to bar counter and order one drink and he take this but before he go to shree he took out one packet from his pocket and mixed that in shree drink and goes to shree and give that drink to him and shree drink that and give glass to that man and after sometime he become unconscious and that man smile evily and take shree with him.


PRESENT----


They all are searching everywhere but could not find him and they are questioning with staff of thst disco and public but they didnt get information about shree.


Rathore: damit!!! Abh shree ki zindagi bhi khatre main hain.


Chotu: abh kya karein sir.


Riya: sir hum yahin to chahate the na ki shree uss killer ke haat lage or hum usse pakde or saath saath ayesha ko bhi bachaye


Rathore: haan riya magar


Liza: sir dont worry ayesha or specky dono theek honge.


Rathore: hmm...


Arjun: riya shree ki tracking device start karo?


Riya: jee sir...


Soon riya started the tracking device and all are searching shree and ayesha.


SCENE SHIFT----


Ayesha hears someone footsteps and she sees the killer but what she saw she was shocked...


Killer: kya hua shaq kyun ho gaye? Tumne dekha na yeh 16yrs ka ladka hain abhi unconscious hain par jab isse hosh aayega tab isse nahi pata iske saath kya hoga. hahahaaa...


And that killer goes from there and ayesha come out of her shock and goes to shree...



TO BE CONTINUED...


Ok guyes as you know my hand is paining very badly so main bas itna hi likh paye. I am really sorry for dhort update.


And jisko iss ff ko lekar koi questions puchne hain so vo mujhse scrap ya pm karke puch sakte hain. I will give you your all question answers


And ya those who want pm please add me in your buddy list or mention in your comment I will add you.


Thank you...

Excused any errors







Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
*unres*
first one to comment and like without a pm.
Yay...
Yahoo...
Superb and amazing update.
Loved it to the core.
Oh No...
Shree ko le gaya woh criminal behosh karke.
Everybody worried for Shree and Ayesha's safety.
Rathod paired Riya with Arjun.
Arjun felt happy,but,Riya paired herself with Rathod.
Everybody worried for Shree and Ayesha.
I hope Shree and Ayesha are safe and sound.
Take care,Meghu.
Dnt worry.
We all will wait 4 the next update.
Continue sooonish... :)
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update !!!
My poor shree ...16 yrs ki bachcha 😆

meghu pehle hand ka khayal rakho
Update baad me v tum de sakti ho 😊
Ok tc
Edited by hunny1993 - 11 years ago

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