Part 1 shloks ego craze.
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Shlok : now my love is fulfilled and acomplised,
Astha :what shlok accomplished ..love never fulfills it continues.
Shlok for me having up is fulfillment
Aastha : what having me shlok u r franking me here.
Shlok: oho astha I wnated you and had you for life time.
Aastha: u r scaring me what wanted to,have life time that Means..
Comming up..shlok ego Commintment of revenge.
Enjoy the second part...drama and lil romance ...Srry tired more ..
Hope,u like it...do, voice out typos as I do voice text.
Son10yrsold.
Father a police officer naturally will be rude and lil disciplined.
Son: being a son feels that he should worship dad as it learnt from the system and feels father as hero.
But doesn't know dad as abuser.
Son: blindly fallows dad as hero from young , being a constrictive, mean to others, selfish, and disciplined.
Like dad son fallows rituals and customs as it is going in family but doent do Pooja daily as he is modern.
Father does the Pooja arrogantly showing peace outer but inner red.
Son thinks the preach of dad is by worshipping god.
Father: a ruler of outisde world as he is police,
Son :think wow dad is a hero he controls everyone ...no on talks in front of him..every one listen to him.
Son: smartness kicks in class started thinking to rule class as it is his territory, so with smartness a pm( sunset) intelligence he found conquering as an asset from dad, made him left out of smiles. by dad ego shadow,found ego not giving others choice.
dad is an adult and has procured characteristics to deform community by a put on mask of peace.
Son :doesn't need to show off for outer world but being young, he took the negative shade .so developed rudeness with ego to conquer to win and then there the heart is lost for 16!yrs.
At 26 met a girl who accdiently challenged by facing truth.
Son. He saw himself only facing truth..no one. Dared him.
Next meet
Son accidental met the girl lost money.
Girl offered money though not having much
Son felt ego rise ,when I should give money the power I have instead she is giving money.she can't be me.
So on diffrent encounters
Of image hurt by a innocent girl, award lost
Of wealth lost by the girl sympathy. Land dealing
Why is this girl winning when I have everything.
Son thought..oh I don't have these unusual qualities, bcoz of these qualities she is winning .what if I have these for myself..I will be a winner sun..sun u can't win me neither none can win me.
Son started by gaining sympathy giving away land.
Later offered job showered generosity.
Wining back the qualities.
Son Saved accidentally women's dignity knew what it feels for girl and importance.
Son when's was ignored by a girl ,couldn't take it thought of scaring her by putting her in dark without light .sabak.
But destiny is showing good for son.
Girl dupatta tear and son giving the saree to be offered to Devi Mata was given to the girl..yes he girl is in the form of Devi mata to save the son from shadow and inner soft out.
Son got infactuated by saree girl,count take it loosing ,ran to challenge sun. To say u can't win sun.
Son forgot the sabak lil manhandled the girl as she ruled the brain for few mins..son thinks brain but it's heart started beating,
Gated puzzle of system ..bole tho community.
Contd ..to post later .
My analysis posts.
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95839634
Family well being and upbringing reflects kids Characteristic from young.