|| Arshi FF: Mission - Bringing Love Chapter 4 PG 25 ||

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hola! I'm back!!! I tried to update the story, but off course, it was closed. So I was like, why not a re-write? So here it is. The prologue.
Mission: Bringing Love
...Prologue...

She sat there, her eyes mindlessly staring into the transparent waters of the pool side, her mind wandering off in her thoughts. The moon envied her wrapped in a gorgeous red sari on the night of karva chauth.
*Flashback*
"Khushiji, I think you should break your fast now. It's 10pm. Who knows when Chotte will arrive. How can he be so careless today?". Anjali suggested to Khushi forcing a small smile. "Khushi betiya, Anjali is right. You should break your fast". Nani agreed.

"I will wait for Arnavji. I kept this fast for him, and he'll break it". Khushi replied, determination seeping in.

"I'll send up fruits and Chotte's photo incase you change your mnd". Anjali smiled and walked off.
*Flashback Over*

'It will make things better. Especially for Arnavji. He won't have to answer everyone's questions after the contract is over', Khushi thought.

Her eyes darted to the knife that lay next to the bowl of fruits. She slid open the French doors that separated the poolside from their room.

She rummaged for a pen and began to write. The words spilling into the paper naturally without much thought.

After writing the last line, she placed the paper down onto the bed. Shut the door, and turned off the lights. Fear rushed through her veins at the sight of darkness. But she ignored it and kissed the photo of her Laad Governor.

She grasped the knife in her fingers and pressed it as hard as she could on her wrist before she fell unconscious on the recliner.

To be continued if you wish

So, there it is. Should I continue or not? Was it good or just awful? Comment and tell me what you think. Don't forget to press that like button! 😉 You know you want to. 😆




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siva2901 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its too good dear 😊
but Kushi 😲
pls continue sooon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow... Thanks for re-writing it ...

Interesting prologue

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the pm. Oh god khushi tried suicide. Arnav come fast and save her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--

Loved d start

Continue soon


I'm really really glad you liked it! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing prologue.. do continue soon.. HAPPY WRITING.. 😊
do send me pm when you update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting start but poor khushi :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Of course continue
Waiting
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: siva2901

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">its too good dear😊</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">but Kushi😲</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">pls continue sooon😳</font>



Glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana.s

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990033">Wow... Thanks for re-writing it ...</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990033">Interesting prologue</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990033">Continue soon</font>



I wasnt sure if people would like the idea of me re writing it, but glac you did 😃

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