ArHi SS: Music And Lyrics*Removed*

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

That was a wonderful chapter cheeni!!

Firstly your khushi is as crazy as anybody can be!! How do u come up with her dialogues! They are just so funny!! Tabhi i say u have a wonderful sense of humour!

N they kissed! Oh god!! That was such a sweet kiss. N m glad khushi fully enjoyed it without feeling guilty later on!

N i love how he threatens her that he would kiss her. God khushi is no naive! This is a pleasurable punishment, anyone would die to suffer it!! Ask us!!

Loved how in the process of singing they realised their feelings for each other!!

N alisha hugging ASR?? Bhai Arnav toh gaya!!!

Waiting for the next part!!

Simply loved the chapter!!

Sorry for the late reply!!

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: --JEWELS--
Ur gift for writing such a wonderful story!

OMG Thank you so much Amu☺️

PP(Piyakkad Pati😉) Rocks..!!

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

English babu Deshi m'am ki kahani ka agla part kabhi milega ?

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: Divyahet
English babu Deshi m'am ki kahani ka agla part kabhi milega ?

In few mins😉

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Sorry sorry lakhon sorry for being late but I am here now with the last chapter of Music and Lyrics:) Thank you so much for your awesome response on last chapter, I loved reading each and every comment. I have read all the comments but couldn't reply, sorry

So this update is dedicated to all the lovely people who have always encouraged me to write more. I am glad that you all enjoyed the story. If I was able to bring sweet smile on your face then my work is done

Thank you to everyone who encouraged me throughout the journey:)

I have to update this chapter to another person, who has not read much of this story, MyluvASR aka Soumya😳 She is busy with her exams. She is a great human being and an amazing friend. Samosi you have no idea, how much I love you. I am really eager to meet you and slap you and tell you, mera pati sirf mera hai..!! Samjhi?😛 If I would ever write any thing like 100 things to do before you die, the 100th thing would be, talk to my Samosi😳 She is adorable, grounded and such a lovely person

Love you Samosi😳

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

I enjoyed a lot when Arnav was teasing her, but Khushi's response was jhakaas...
Bhai hoga tere, samjhi tu..!! 🤣
Alisha actually ran away...Khushi ke aage koi nahi tik sakta... 😆

"Jhadoo, pochha, bartan aur mere Khane ka khayal rakhogi..!!" Seriously...
CC esa tumhara Arnav hi keh sakta hai... 🤣 🤣

I knew it, you always wanted a well qualified kaamwali baai..!! 🤣
Khushi kuch bhi bolti hai yaar... 😆

They got so close in one month... ❤️

Loved the way he proposed her...It was sooo cute... 😃

Thodi der se jali par jal gayi Khushi ki baati... 😆

"Khushi, I don't know if I should be happy or sad after knowing that you love me too." best line I have ever read in any confession in any work on IF...

Ambiance turned to Ambulance... 😆
Good one...

Arnav's English is very-2 poor... 😆

Oh, majdoor ho..!! Buaji to Khushi se bhi aage nikal gayi... 🤣

Bechara Arnav pehele dudh wala, sabzi wala n ab Gullu...
Kis Kis se compare karoge mere Arnav ko... 😔

Loved Arnav's reply... ❤️

one is English disaster and the other one is Hindi disaster. 🤣

CC I loved what came after What The...!!! 😉

A roller costar ride came to an end...Itni fun filled and comedy RS tha n u ended it... 😭 😭
Was not expecting this to end so soon...
Loved everything about this update... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️
Waiting for the epilogue...

Edited by avni_barun - 12 years ago

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

I luvd d wa d name of d chappy, i strtd ROFLing 4m dere only... 😆

I so luvd Khushi's wild avatar... n Bhai hoga tera cracked me up... 🤣

N nt 4getting 2 mention d way Arnav stepped back n Khushi moving forward... EPIC... 👏

I ws expecting sum gutter stuff 4m Arnav's end as his reward bt ye to shareef nikla yaa... 😆

Free ki Kaamwali Baai 4 a month... n d extra perks too... 😉

D way Arnav n Khushi confessed dere love cudnt hv been better... Both r crazy... 😆

Buaji to manana ws a hefty task bt he did a gr8 job... 👍🏼

CC, ASR se bol Mujhe bhi bataye na k What the k baad kya aata hai (wid demo) 😉 😆 ☺️ 🤬

Frankly, Initially I wntd 2 laugh out aloud bt knwng tht its d last chappy of MnL made me nostalgic n emotional...

I wnt a SE*Y wala Epilogue n Cum back soon wid a new Story... Luv u loads... Muahhh... 🤗

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

I hate alisha i didnt liked a second how she ws clinging on arnav 🤬

Awww khushi was jealous 😆 wid alisha 🤪

Holly jesus i meann wat d hell bhai hoga tera ommmggg cheeni love u babes trust me u r awesome janemann

Tere jaisa funny Stories koi nai likh sakta ..

Hayeee i so loved it yar i mean arnav was waitng for a chcne dat khushi wil burst nd yooo alisha gave dat to khushi

D way she said durr hat mera arnavji se

Wat d galat tym pr annoucement hua hai usko atleast cmplt toh krne deti 😔 😔]

Heelll helll girll u r a dead meat nw seriously i mean wat d hell he asked her to care of his jhaddo pocha bartan 🤣 🤣 here she was anticipating a kiss nd wat did she got 🤣

Ooo in dis one mnth sab kuch is chngd alot more kissed nd waiting shaiting haan 😆

Full time kaam wali bai qualified kaam wali bai 🤣 🤣 I cnt bear it damnit ..

Finally dose words came nd arnav cnfssd it much to khushi satisfaction

Buaji 😲 how could she do dat i mean itna toh khushi v nai boli arnav ko she directly made him majdoor wat d heck ...

Bt i lovd d words arnav said to buaji abt d proposal i didnt knew my arnav is so smart nd sweet 😳 😳

Adhira is d only smart prsn in d whole stoory ... 😆

Ooo la la she asked him wat comes aftr Wat the..!!

Nd finaly khushi came to knw wat come aftr Wat the ...🤪 🤪❤️

Edited by avni_barun - 12 years ago

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mubina_m19

@mubina_m19

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

Amazing and lovely update

Edited by mubina_m19 - 12 years ago

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#580

lo main bhi kataar mein...😆,
udi baba mai pehle hi page pe hoon pehle thodi 🥳 ho jaaye..haan ab thik hai.😆
Update as usual fun-tastic and confession ho hi gaya aakhir...😉
well update padhate hi lagaa ki Alisha ke din bhar aaye hai...
Khushi ke saamne unke hi Arnav ji ko bol diya I LOVE YOU...😡,
Khushi taandav kaafi majjedaar raha...

Bhai hoga tere, samjhi tu..!! Dur hatt mere ArnavJi se, agar paas aayi na toh taang tod dungi teri, chudail..!! Sundar ladka dekha nahi, aa gayi gale milne..!!!(Khushi bani Killer),🤣,
chudail ho gayi udanchhoo...😆,

ASR ko bhi nahi chhoda...tut tut ...😉,
Jeet ka ailaan and hug...😳,

Jhadoo, pochha, bartan aur mere Khane ka khayal rakhogi..!!😆...
It doesn't matter what you feel about me, attend your college in the morning and after college come to RM, okay? And yes this arrangement is for a month.(uff is hero ke tewar...)

Haww..You want a full time baai..!!( e dekho Sanka ki sanak..)

Khushi, I don't know if I should be happy or sad after knowing that you love me too.😆😆

Why do you say absurd things Khushi? You ruin our romantic moments..!! Now who is Aashi ka Nana..?? Don't talk about random NanaJis and ruin my mood..!!.( lo gaya bhaisa paani mai..galti kar di Khushi ne iss shabda ka prayog karke..)
waise I do agree with little genius Adhira...ek English aur duje Ka Hindi tablatod hai..😆 dono hi ek duje ke liye hi bane hai.

She is Khushi's BuaJi, she must be bigger and better version of Khushi, I mean worse than Khushi, 🤣🤣.

What comes after what the..??( yeh lo chhuta Brahmaastra..)
kaha se lati ho aise doubts? 😆😆,

and after that Arnav was busy in explaining what comes after what the..😳..

this is the last update...
ji nahi bhara..ekaad epilogue mil jaaye toh ! kya khayaal hai my KC.

thanks for the update and pm too.😊
lots of love KC,
take care dear...😊

Edited by Divyahet - 12 years ago