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Neelum.drashti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prasai


U stole the post family it is..

I am trying to make everyone like u r trying.

Me liking and living it too.
Will do nok Jhok OS and if have talent and I see one I you too
Wife just 250 words of tour college doings with shlok and Aastha name thats it.
Or af mil yor fridms convo .
Just a suggestion and talent hunt.
Me doing at 39 why not at others..
Hey did u like,OS of NA and Anjali.
I am crazy with their expression chemistry talks so for now on will concentrate on that too..if porciiend with time.


i actually like NA and anjali , they are awesome. there os which one?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey where so the post pm me tour posts regularly.
Show,started ..hope,I,will,catch u after show..
Edited by Prasai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Thanks for the pm Madhu. Sorry for not being able to get back to you earlier.
Great analysis. Very detailed. You said it all. One thing I would like to say is that initially I didn't understand why NA helped Avdhoot out with his transfer so willingly and tore the letter when he was the one to issue it. But later I realised that perhaps this is his way of emotionally blackmailing Avdhoot to surrender and give the plot to him. After such favours from NA, he is bound to feel burdened to do something for him in return as he is a very self-respecting man.
I loved the conversation between NA and Anjali. Quite interesting. You captured their expressions and translated it into their conversation accurately. Have you ever written an os/ff? If not, then why not give it a try based on these characters? It would be interesting combined with your analytical skills.
Edited by Sam_15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for the pm dear
i'm getting late for lectures
will read it all properly and comment when i get home
:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sam_15

Thanks for the pm Madhu. Sorry for not being able to get back to you earlier.

Great analysis. Very detailed. You said it all. One thing I would like to say is that initially I didn't understand why NA helped Avdhoot out with his transfer so willingly and tore the letter when he was the one to issue it. But later I realised that perhaps this is his way of emotionally blackmailing Avdhoot to surrender and give the plot to him. After such favours from NA, he is bound to feel burdened to do something for him in return as he is a very self-respecting man.
I loved the conversation between NA and Anjali. Quite interesting. You captured their expressions and translated it into their conversation accurately. Have you ever written an os/ff? If not, then why not give it a try based on these characters? It would be interesting combined with your analytical skills.


Ur welcome .
U have become my habit to wait to see your views.
I missed this post from morning as multitasking and not paying attention.
Thank you. U provoke me to do more, and when it is reality to
Girls,lady,woman for correct direction for future knowing the mirror image ..why and how can I lay myself relaxed as u.
NA acts like the saint ..and his music says..it..
He rules by expression and keeps innocene by intelligence..shlok has it to but own selfish not for wealth.
Maybe the motivators wife kanalid blinded by daughters love or the sweet love showered by NA for shlok happiness will make the job done and it showed just before the mairiwge that everything is going thur acceptance..
But somehow I feel NA plot is not for wealth. Determining self esteem by intelligence and circumstance created by sentiment,

Thank you..a newly developed imagination I have when use the expression chemistry of NA and Anjali.
Played in mind wrote it down taking young sis inspirations from the forum.
FFS and OS r great but build imagination overboard.
Reality and fiction and my article analysis with question reaches more fast.
And for a mom and wife..priorities,life and breath r kids ..and this medium is my passion to my detrmination given by my dad and mom. I feel happy as I am woking on something close to my heart.
Fiction addicted by satisfying my inner image or mirror.by balancing.
So only poli is unshaped but with extra sweetness and coconut,raiisns,and cashews.
Healthy diet for life
Oils.portien,fiber and good carb
Think you for sharing your view it matters very much to me..
As the final eye got the image.
Keep writing..

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