Silsiley (Pt 13b/ tk nt, Pg 87/89, 8/8)

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Chapter 1 - Pg 9 Chapter 2 - Pg 17 Chapter 3 - Pg 27 Chapter 4- Pg 34

Chapter 5 - Pg 41 Chapter 6 - Pg 51 Chapter 7 - Pg 56 Chapter 8 - pg 61

Chapter 9 - Pg 66 Chapter 10 - Pg 71 Chapter 11 - Pg 76 Chapter 12- pg 81

Chapter 13a -Pg 84 Chapter 13b - Pg 87

Hey guys,

So I was really bored today and an idea occured to me for a short FF. As it is my other FF is almost over so I decided to start a new one. I will try to finish this one in about 15 or so chapters.

Here is the character sketch. Will start the FF once Ehsaas is completed and depending on the kind of response I get for this one.

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Jai Walia – 30 year old. One of the best and shrewdest business man in India. Owner and MD of Walia Group of Industries. His single minded dedication has taken their family business which had once encompassed a mid size hotel in Mumbai to become one of the largest chain of hotels in the Country. However, after all these years of hard work, he had started to realize his loneliness. Boredom and monotony had set in his life and he was looking for a way out, a break sort of.

Bani Dixit – 18 years of age. She is the quiet, gawky, youngest daughter of Nishikant and Kiran Dixit. She is currently a second year Sociology student at a local college in Mount Abu. She is born and brought up in Mt. Abu and has never set a foot outside this small city settled on the highest peak of the Aravalli Range. Since a very young age, it was fed in her head that her ill looks and poor fortune would mean that she had no real prospects in life.

Pia Kapoor – 24 years of age. The daughter of the richest man in Mount Abu. She has aspiration to marry a very wealthy man in life. She is proud and vain, partly because she realized that she was very pretty and partly because of the vanity fed to her by her mother. A bit of a airhead really.

Nishikant Dixit – A middle class man, father to three daughters and one of the oldest and most trusted employee of Mr. Kapoor. He considers his three daughters one of the biggest burdens in his life and cannot wait for the day he gets them all married and settled.

Kiran Dixit – dumb woman with quite an empty head. Hopes to make a very good match for her elder two daughters but has no hope whatsoever for her youngest.

Rano Dixit – 22 year of age. Eldest of the Dixit sisters. Intelligent and moderately pretty but with no real interest in marriage.

Rashi Dixit – Younger to Rano by a couple of years.. Not extremely pretty, and all she wants to achieve in life is a good husband and lots of children. Her brain is just as developed as her mothers, which is not recommending much.

Mr. Kapoor – Vain and proud man. Thinks he owns the entire city of Mt. Abu.

Mrs. Kamini Kapoor – Pia's mom. A cold, and scheming lady.

Tarun Sablok – Jai's best friend and legal advisor (lawyer by profession).

Aditya Bali – Not related to Jai. Someone who lives in the neighborhood of Kapoors and Dixits.

Jigyasa Bali – Adis wife. Similar to the one in the serial, but a little more human

Nachiket Bali – 24. Navs twin brother and Bali's eldest child. He is an engineer.

Ranveer Bali – 22, Bali's younger son. Same age as Rano and her buddy form school days.

Preview:

It was the beginning of a hot summer. Jai and Tarun were enjoying their drink and dinner after a long day at work. They were discussing Jai's plan to acquire a new hotel in Mount Abu and his upcoming trip to check out the site and if possible finalize the deal.

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Rivs

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rivya

Hey guys, Hello 😛

So I was really bored today and an idea occured to me for a short FF. As it is my other FF is almost over so I decided to start a new one. I will try to finish this one in about 15 or so chapters. So does this mean i don't have to read the other one???😉

Here is the character sketch. Will start the FF once Ehsaas is completed and depending on the kind of response I get for this one. Well since I AM reading it, you HAVE to write it.😆

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Jai Walia – 30 year old. One of the best and shrewdest business man in India. Now this is what i like to hear.😳Owner and MD of Walia Group of Industries. His single minded dedication has taken their family business which had once encompassed a mid size hotel in Mumbai to become one of the largest chain of hotels in the Country. Well after all he is THE JAI WALIA!!! what else did you expect??? 😆However, after all these years of hard work, he had started to realize his loneliness. Lonely why??? I am with him how can he be lonely??? rivs you are chosing the wrong words. Boredom and monotony had set in his life and he was looking for a way out, a break sort of. Again i repeat myself, how can life be boring with me around??? you should know that by now.

Bani Dixit – 18 years of age. She is the quiet, gawky, youngest daughter of Nishikant and Kiran Dixit. She is currently a second year Sociology student at a local college in Mount Abu. She is born and brought up in Mt. Abu and has never set a foot outside this small city settled on the highest peak of the Aravalli Range. Since a very young age, it was fed in her head that her ill looks and poor fortune would mean that she had no real prospects in life. hahaha do you want me to add to that, i'll give her a nice list of why she had no real prospects in life.😆

Pia Kapoor – 24 years of age. The daughter of the richest man in Mount Abu. She has aspiration to marry a very wealthy man in life. She is proud and vain, partly because she realized that she was very pretty and partly because of the vanity fed to her by her mother. A bit of a airhead really. Oye be nice. Rich and bitchy perfect combination, don't be too rude to her.

Nishikant Dixit – A middle class man, father to three daughters and one of the oldest and most trusted employee of Mr. Kapoor. He considers his three daughters one of the biggest burdens in his life and cannot wait for the day he gets them all married and settled. Does he have to be in here??? i hate him.

Kiran Dixit – dumb woman with quite an empty head. Hopes to make a very good match for her elder two daughters but has no hope whatsoever for her youngest. hahahahhahahah 😆

Rano Dixit – 22 year of age. Eldest of the Dixit sisters. Intelligent and moderately pretty but with no real interest in marriage. no comments.

Rashi Dixit – Younger to Rano by a couple of years.. Not extremely pretty, and all she wants to achieve in life is a good husband and lots of children. Her brain is just as developed as her mothers, which is not recommending much. Finally rashi is in between her family through blood.

Rivs i gotta say perfect way to describe the dixits. Airheads😆

Mr. Kapoor – Vain and proud man. Thinks he owns the entire city of Mt. Abu. I am liking his attitude.

Mrs. Kamini Kapoor – Pia's mom. A cold, and scheming lady. Loving her already.

Tarun Sablok – Jai's best friend and legal advisor (lawyer by profession). Does he have to be in here?🤢

Preview:

It was the beginning of a hot summer. Jai and Tarun were enjoying their drink and dinner after a long day at work. They were discussing Jai's plan to acquire a new hotel in Mount Abu and his upcoming trip to check out the site and if possible finalize the deal. A hot summer day??? Sweaty jai in nice shorts and a tee??(here imaging him to have a hot well-built body😉). Liking the preview already.😆

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Rivs

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds very interesting looking forward to it.
So Bani is the youngest of the three sisters......man interesting family....ma air head...baap think of them as a burden.....can't believe.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great. You are starting another one.Sounds interesting.

BTW when are u going to update ur other Ff.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks Sarah...will try to start soon...Rivs

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Originally posted by: ridhijai

sounds very interesting looking forward to it.
So Bani is the youngest of the three sisters......man interesting family....ma air head...baap think of them as a burden.....can't believe.
plz cont. soon.

Thanks ridhi...I will try to start this as soon as Ehsaas is over...promise...

Yes Bani is the youngest....and trust me the family is even more pathetic when looked at closely...you will soon know what i mean...

Rivs

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: suwas

Great. You are starting another one.Sounds interesting.

BTW when are u going to update ur other Ff.

Thanks hon...I have already updated Ehsaas...forgot to change the title...have done that now...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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looking forward to it Rivs, excited for when they actually come to Mt. Abu and him and Bani meet. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sounds interesting........
Hope you will start it soon!!!(means we will have an update to Ehsaas again very soon...... )😉

Love,
Preeti.

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