TAAREY SS POSSESSIVE BROTHER AND FATHER(UPDATED) - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago

hello shona ..meri trip khatam ho gyi so me aa gyi idhar tera updte padhne...n socha ki sabse pehle dekh le ki angel ke kya hal chal hai so idhar aa gyi..😆ab me goin to read d updte...padhke comment karungi...


ommmg tani...i bet usne angel ka dreammm dekha hai..i wish uske saath kucch bura na ho...


Vih-shanaya!!!!!!!!!!!! Shanaya!!!!!!! Finally he reached to her n push her n jump towards other side...they both got some injuries but nothing much severe...angel was so shocked that she couldn't react to the incident


omg angel was unable to rect..n dono ko chot lag gyi..😔 bt thnk god dono ko kuch jyada nhi hua..


G1-SHIT!!! Yr wo ladka kaha se aa gaya

G2-ab kya kare boss ko phone kare

G1 calls boss...

Boss-kya hua??? Angel mar gae na???

G1-n...n...n...nai boss wo kisi ladke ne usse bacha liya tha

Boss-kya!!!! Nalayko ek kaam nai hota tum dono se bhago ab waha se


dekh sbse pehle i like ur short form...G! ,G2 ...Gunda 1 gunda 2 🤣 n hw mmean ppl...mmmere haath me aa jaye mmasal ke rakh dun...



Both decide to go back but they were so foolish that they took a u turn n came back to angel..



kya pagal gunde hai




Hearing sounds from taarey room adi runs to them...he was already awake as he was busy thinking about new development of his life that was "naina"



adi ke kano ma haina DDLJ wali musiccc baj rhi hogi n taani ki sccreamm sunke uski rommmantic movie horror wali ban gyi 🤣


Adi again starts thinking about naina n smiles n blushes while rey looked at him totally amazed

Rey think-yeh ho kya raha hai isse aise majnu k tarah kyu behave kar raha hai


laila ke baare me soch raha tha toh majnu ke jaisa hi behave karega na.🤣


Before adi could ans that his phone rings n he saw yash calling

Adi-dad aap bhi so jao mai apne room mai jar aha ho bye gn...he went

Rey-hmm kuch toh garbar hai...so he calls sw



dekh ek taraf se taani ki screamm ne almmost saare khandaan ko hi utha diya..dekh aadi , rey , swayam...i noe tu soch rhi ki kya ulti khopdi hai iski.hamesha ulta sochti hai

😛



Sim-par sir hame toh kal morning mai nikalna hai na toh abhi packing kyu

Vih(stupidly smiling)-kya intelligent question poocha hai deewani ne

Teacher-hum kal subah nai hum 1 hour mai nikal raha hai...saare schools k principal ka yeh order hai as yaha safety nai hai n hum 1 hour mai niklenge toh early morning pooch jaenge

All students were sad but angel started jumping

An-yipee hum ghar ja rahe hai yesss...all students looked at her with a weird face

Finally looking at other she calm down n said sadly(fake)-oh shit man hum ghar ja rahe hai...guys I m so sad see...(showing them a fake sad face)

Seeing all this simran asked vihaan-yeh isse kya hua

Vih(laughs)-nautanki...ghar ko miss kar rahe thi n ab jab ghar ja rahe hai toh isliyeh itna kush ho rahe hai..



i want to see angel ka reaction jab woh ghar jaayegi..miss nautanki kaise reacct karegi ..m waiting to see it..


n seriously yaara me tere nik names par fida ho chuki hun..



Sim(smiles)-haan ab hum roz toh mil nai paenge na

Vih-kyu???

Sim-because mai doosre school mai ho aur tum doosre school mai

Vih-haan..(sadly)



bechara vihaan... 😛


Sim thinks-lol aur tumhe pata bhi nai hai k wapas ja kar mai tumhare school mai shift ho rahe ho tumhare liyeh acha surprise hoga)

Till then angel also comes running to them

An(super excited)-guys tum yaha baate kya kar rahe ho chalo jaldi packing nai karne hai kya

Vih(teasing her)-tu toh sad thi na

An-haan haan toh mai abhi bhi sad ho...par jana toh parega na...(saying that she runs to pack her bag)

Both vihaan n simran looks at each other n laughs


awwiee angel ke antics make me luv hr more each tym i see dem...n simran shifting to vihaan's skool..oye hoye...vihan ki toh party hai



Yash(thinks about aarohi...their first meeting...her scolding n saying him a looser...he made a weird face which notice by sh)no mom kuch nai

Sh-yeh lo paani pee lo...he started drinking still making that face remembering aarohi saying him a looser

Sh looks at yash he was making the exact face which sw use to make when she use to say him looser...

Sh(looking at yash)-yash tumhe kisine looser kaha hai kya????

Yash chocked while drinking water n caughs badly thinking-mom ko kaise pata chala

Yash-nai nai nai mom aisa kuch nai hai..mai bilkul theek ho...

In hurry he moves towards door to go out not looking front n sw was coming back from work n both collide

Yash(irritated)-kon hai be...

Sw-tera baap!!!...tereko kitne baar batana parega k mai tera baap ho...ab yaad rakhna

Yash-kya dad aap bhi bohot ganda pj tha


🤣🤣 my god shona my stomch is aching nw laughing laughing..🤣 n history is repeating itself nin d form of yash n aarohi ...n dats seriously interesting to see jr.sharon n jr.swayam 😛



rey ki bhi kya glat timming thi..🤣 hamesha swayam ki hoti thi bt abhi rey ki ho gyi..😛


Adi(dreaminly)-hello

Yash-oye tu jaga hai itne raat ko

Adi(dreamingly)-ab kya raat or kya din

Yash-adi tu kya bol raha hai

Adi(dreamingly)-mujhe khud nai pata k mai kya bol raha ho

Yash(irritated)-adi sun meri baat

Adi(comes back into senses)-haan bol

Yash-door open kar mai bahar khada ho

Adi-abhi???? Is waqt bahar kya kar raha hai

Yash-pakode tal raha ho

Adi-tujhe aate hai

Yash-shutup adi tu door open kar



🤣🤣 tujhe itne funny dialogues dimag me kaise ate hai yaar..🤣




n d last part yaar..angel kitni kitni kitni sweet hai..



so i m done with d part..u wont believve mujhe yeh part padhne 1 ghanta laga..god noes itna tym kyu laga..😛 bt it was worth it yaar..i was rofling d entire tym ..

so abhi update soon haan..waiting for d nxt part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear i m a silent reader on dis forum.i just love this ff nd how its story is shaping. plzzz update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER-10

While both adi n yash were busy in day dreaming...here reyam decided to talk to them so they goes to them n angel follows them...

Reyam goes n sit infront of their sons respectively n angel sits in between her dadda n mamu with a motive to observe her brothers n find out the changes in them..

But unaware of the three staring...adi n yash were too busy with the confusions in their life named naina and aarohi...

Soon adi gets a call in his phone n without looking at it he picks up

Adi(still lost)-hello

Voice-hello adi???

Adi-ha bol raha ho aap kon

Voice-arre adi mai naina bol rahe ho

Hearing name of naina adi's phone disbalances but he somehow manage to catch it...due to voices yash also get disturbed n came back to normal n saw reyam n angel staring at him then he saw adi

Adi-ha naina mai sun raha ho bolo na

Naina-kya bolo na...kaha ho tum...bhool gae kya aaj tumhare basketball match k final practice hai

Adi-oh shit mai bhool gaya

Naina-ab jaldi aao warna coach bohot gussa karenge

Adi-nai mai bas 10-15 min mai aata ho...thanku so much 4 reminding me...naina agar tum nai hoti toh mera kya hota

Nai(blushes)-its ok n now hurry up n ha breakfast k chinta mat karna wo mai le kar aae ho tum bas jaldi se aa jao

Adi(romantically n forgeting his parents)-itne care mere liyeh kyu

Nai-wo..wo..wo...koi care nai hai bas apna kaam kar rahe ho...mujhe coach ne bola tha tujhe call karne k liyeh...now u come fast...bye

Adi(smiles because he knows that she is lying)-bye naina

He cuts phone n while smiling he moves forward only to get bumped to his father...n then he saw all starting at him

Adi(nervous)-umm hello

Rey-hello k bache khaha khoya hua tha itne der se

Adi(nervous laugh)-kuch nai dad...mai nikalta ho late ho raha ho

Just then taani came with breakfast...

Taani-chalo sab breakfast kar lo

Adi-mom mujhe late ho raha hai toh mai ja raha ho

Taani-arre beta par breakfast...

Adi-mom naina le kar aa rahe hai

All except taani-ohhh "naina"

Adi(while going)-seriously grow up guys

Adi left n all laugh

Rey-chalo hum toh breakfast karte hai

All sit on table n angel hurriedly goes n sit beside her bhaiyu..n smiles at him...yash also smiles n starts eating

An(slowly to yash)-bhaiyu mai apke only sweet sister ho na

Yash looked at her in doubt n angel blinked her eyes trying to be innocent

Yash(slowly to angel)-kya kaam hai tujhe

An-mujhe apke saath collage jana hai

Yash-what no way

An-plz na bhaiyu plz plz plz

Yash-angel waha tera jaana theek nai hai tu ab hi choti hai n waha tarah tarah k log hote hai...I can't take that risk

An-plz na bhaiyu aap hoge na mere saath toh kya risk phir plz na bhaiyu

Yash-ok f9 but promise kar k tu mere saath he rahege

An-ok done(both shake hands)

Taani saw both shaking hands

Taani-angel kya maang liya tune yash se...mai kheh dete hu ab koi bhi n I mean koi bhi angel ko kuch nai dilaega waise bhi bhot kuch hai uske pass...samjhe aap teeno(rey,sw n yash)

All three nod their head in yes but suddenly angel remember that she has to patao her dadda n mamu 4 new dress

An-shit ab kya karo

Yash-mai bag le kar aata ho phir chalte hai

Taani goes in kitchn n angel looks at her dadda n mamu lovingly

Sw who was eating his breakfast felt some graze on him so he looks up only to see a smiling n cute angel looking at him...he felt weird

Sw taps rey shoulder n rey looks at him like "what"...sw indicates him to look at angel

Rey look at his daughter who was cutely smiling he also got confused

Now angel smiles widely n makes a most innocent face n said slowly-I have no new cloths

Reyam rolled their eyes n puts their head down

An-plz na dadda mamu sachi mere pass koi bhi new dress nai hai plz na plz plz plz plz

Sw-acha theek hai par taani ko pata nai chalna chahiyeh

Rey-warna wo hame maar dalege

An(giggles)-ok dadda...bye mai ready hone ja rahe ho...thanku dadda thanku mamu(she leaves happily)

Rey starts eating but sw was just smiling n thinking something whn rey saw him

Rey-oye majnu tu kya sooch raha hai

Sw-yahe k angel k kafi baate taani se milte hai...tujhe pata hai bachpan mai taani aise he faces bana k mujhe saare wishes puri karwa lete thi infact sab se karwa lete thi koi bhi usko mana nai kar pata tha

Rey smiles-I know taani mere saath bhi aisa he karte thi

Just then sharon enter with lots of anger

Sh(with attitude)-rey!!!

Reyam looked at her

Rey-ab isse kya hua

Sw-pata nai par aaj koi marne wala hai

Sh-rey tum na apne dost kam saale ji ko bol do k wo mujhe se baat na kare

Rey looked at sw n said-beta tu marne wala hai

Sw-sh maine kya kiya

Sh-rey apne dost se bol do k who khud yaad kar le k ussne kya kiya hai

Sw-par sh mujhe khud yaad nai aa raha hai

Sh-rey apne dost ko bol do k usse toh waise bhi kuch bhi yaad nai rhehta hai

Sw-sh batao toh hua kya hai

Sh-rey apne dost se bolo...

Rey(cutting her)-arre bas karo tum dono warna mai paagal ho jaonga...sharon tum sidhe sidhe batao k hua kya hai

Sh-hum aaj movie jane wale the aur maine abhi sw k office dairy dekhe uske aaj uske koi imp meeting hai...sw tumhare pass mere liyeh time he nai hai

Till then taani come back n yash also enter with his bag

Taani-sahi kaha bhabhi aapne...rey mere liyeh aapke pass time he nai hai

Reyam-aisa nai hai

Shani-aisa he hai

Reyam-nai hai

Shaani-hai

Yash who was trying hard to stop this fight..lost his interest n goes to angel room n took her n while going out taps on taarey

Taarey looks at him

Yash-mai angel ko collage le kar ja raha ho...dhyaan rakonga uska chinta mat karna

Taarey-ha theek hai...n goes back to their fights

Reyam-aisa nai hai

Shaani-hai

Yash n angel left 4 collage

Taani-ha yahi baat hai aur aap logo ko kya lagta hai hum aap ke bina fun nai kar sakte

Sh-ha hum independent lady hai hum tum logo k bina he movie dekhne jaenge haa

Both stamp their foot n left

Reyam looked at each other confused

Rey-yeh kya tha

Sw-pata nai

Both-GIRLS!!!!

MEANWHILE IN VIHA'S HOUSE

Neha was tensed because after vihaan came back from trip he was disturb about something which was noticed by neha

Neha-vihaan y not eating food u r

Vih-kuch nai maa bas mood nai hai

Vicky-mere bete ko khane ka mood nai hai yeh kaise ho sakta hai

Vih-nai dad sach mai mood nai hai(with this he went to his room)

Vic-kagu yeh theek toh hai na

Neha-not knowing neha is par getting tensed 4 vihaan

Vicky saw his kagu in sad mood n tensed 4 their son in order to change her mood

Vicky-arre kagu wo hamara beta hai theek ho jaega...tum mujhpe dhyaan do na...kitna time ho gaya hamne saath mai waqt nai bitaya

Neha-ha babu par kya karo kaam bhi toh hai na

Vicky-nai karna kaam(hugging her)

Neha-arre chalo late getting we are...

Finally she took vicky 4 their job

Vihaan in his room

Vihaan-mujhe toh kuch garbar lag rahe hai aise kaise angel ka accident...wo accident kam attack zayda tha...par koi angel k peeche kyu hoga...mai kya karo...shayad mujhe rey aur sw uncle ko sab bata dena chahiyeh...

ST. LOUIS COLLAGE

Yash n angel enter collage n angel was looking all around with wide eyes

Yash-chal tujhe kuch dikhata ho

An-kya bhaiyu

Yash-tu chal toh...yash took her to "wall of fame" room n showed their parents photos

An-wow dadda..mom..mamu mamiji sab k pics hai yaha

yash-yeah kitna acha hai na

just then a worker enter

worker to yash-sir aapko vp sir aur trustee bula rahe hai

yash-ok mai aata ho...to angel-angel dekh seedhe ja kar right turn k baad canteen hai tu waha baith mai aata ho aur hilna mat samjhi

an-yes boss

both leave...yash enter vp office

MEANWHILE AT ADI'S SCHOOL

Adi was practicing hard 4 his match he wanna win at any cost..he was a captain n he can't manage to loose this match...finally after practice he went 4 shower n while returning back he heard some fimiliar voice...he smile n move towards knowing it was naina

But he saw naina with "RAJ"

Nai-hey raj kaise ho tum...aur trip kaisa raha

Raj-acha tha par darling tujhe bohot miss kiya(raj use to do healthy firlting with her which naina don't mind as she knew he is joking)

Nai-raj sudhar ja

Raj-aare jaaneman tu haan toh bol mai toh zindigi par sudhrene k liyeh ready ho

Naina n raj both laugh like hell

Nai-raj tu pura paagal hai

Raj-sirf aapke liyeh sweetheart...acha by the way tu angel se mili kya

Nai-nai abhi tak toh nai

Raj-yr I m missing her yr...anyways chal mai chalta ho kal match mai milte hai bye tc jaaneman

Nai-bye(both hug)

Adi heard everything n saw them hugging n felt very jealous

Naina saw adi n goes to him

Nai-hey kaise ho??? Kaise rahe practice???

Adi(angirly)-achi he thi

Nai-kya hua tumhe

Adi-wo raj kya kheh raha tha tumhe

Naina thought adi is upset as raj said he is missing angel

Naina-oh that come on adi its ok

Adi(shocked)-its ok matlab tumhe acha laga

Nai-arre usme bura maane wale konse baat hai

Adi-f9(started going)

Nai-arre khaha ja rahe ho breakfast toh karlo

Adi(rudely)-tum kha lo aur apne raj ko bhi khila do...with this he left n naina was hurt as she didn't expect him to talk to her rudely

ST.LOUIS TRUSTEE OFFICE

trustee(old vp sir)-come in yash shikhawat

yash-thanku sir n with all ur respect sir plz mera surname mat boliyeh

trustee-kyu u should be proud tum swayam shikhawat k bete ho

yash-I m proud sir but I want k wo mujh par proud kare..plz sir just call me yash

trustee-hmmm tum bilkul apne papa k tarah ho

vp-oh so yash...(just then aarohi enter)..n miss aaorhi

aaorhi-sir plz call me aarohi gujral(attitude haan...both aarohi n yash r totally opposite to each other)

vp-so mr. yash n miss aarohi gujral congratulations

yash n aarohi-kyu sir

yp-because mr. yash aap aaj se hamare collage k ACS hai n miss aarohi gujral aap CS hai

both-what!!! Wow sir thanku so much

both aarohi n yash outside trustee office

yash-hey congrats miss CS

aarohi-congrats to u too mr.ACS I hope k tum ek ache ACS banoge

yash-ofcourse..i promise I'll be "the best assistant ever"

aarohi-we will see that...both left

yash was about to go canteen to take angel but his friend came to congrats him n he got busy

here a happy aarohi enter canteen with her friend to celebrate her position

aarohi-aaj mai apna fav cupcake khaongi...god I m so happy...she went to counter where angel was already waiting 4 her cupcake

aarohi-excuse me 1 cupcake plz

waiter bring a cupcake n gave it to angel n said to aarohi-sorry mai cupcake khatam ho gae hai yeh last tha joh maine in mam(angel) ko de diya really sorry

aarohi-plz ek toh hoga plz check karo na

waiter-sorry mam nai hai

aarohi to her friend-shit yr mera itna maan tha aaj mere liyeh itna khushi ka din hai I m the CS of collage n aaj he mai apna fav cupcake nai kha sakti

angel heard this n felt bad so she goes to her

an-hey...yeh cupcake aap rakh lijiyeh

aarohi-no no its ok tum kha lo

an-arre its ok aaj apka itna khushi ka din hai toh aap kha lo mai bahar se kha longi

aarohi-aww so sweet of u...waise tum is collage k toh nai lagti

an-yeah mai toh abhi school mai ho...mai yaha apne cousin bhai k saath aae thi...

Aarohi-oh ok by the way hi I m aarohi gujral

An-hi I m shanaya reyansh shinghania

Aarohi-ok so hope to see u again..it was nice meeting u

An-same here...both left

Aarohi's friend eyes goes wide n she shouts babes

Aarohi-god u scared the hell out of me...kya hua tujhe

Friend-babes tune uss ladki ka naam dhyan se sunna

Aarohi-ha she is shanaya reyansh shinghania so???

Friend-so??? Babes she is shanaya reyansh shinghania...daughter of the "reyansh shinghania"

Aarohi-oh crap...hey wait wait wo apne cousin bhai k saath aae thi means shayad swayam shikhawat ka beta

Both looked at each other n shouts-ahhh

Aarohi-omg omg omg I can't believe swayam sir ka beta hamare collage mai

Friend-but we need to find him

Aaorhi-phele shanaya ko dhunte hai uske through uske cousin se n then uske through finally mai swayam sir mil paongi...come on let's run n find her

Here a puzzled n scared yash was running n finding angel as he didn't saw her in canteen

Yash-god yeh khaha chali gae

Here aarohi also running...both aarohi n yash bump to each other

Aarohi-awww dikhae nai deta kya tumhe hato mere raaste se..pata nai shanaya kitne aage nikal gae hogi

Yash saw her shocked

Yash-shanaya kon shanaya

Aarohi-tumse matlab

Yash-hey come on may be I can help u

Aarohi-f9 tumhe pata hai yaha the reyansh shinghania k bete shanaya apne cousin means the swayam shikhawat k son k saath aae hai uske through mai swayam sir se mil sakte ho

Yash eyes goes wide...tumhe yeh sab kaise pata n ang...I mean shanaya tumhe khaha mile

Aarohi-canteen mai

Yash think-god I have to stop her warna isse pata chal jaega k mai he swayam shikhawat ka beta ho

Yash-maine shayana ko right side jate hue dekha hai

Aarohi-really ok thanku she left

Yash-thankgod bach gaya...par yeh angel kaha gae...

Here angel outside collage look here n there to find a bakery shop...she walk a bit n finally saw one...

An excited angel entered shop n order

An-excuse me 1 cupcake plz

Waiter-mam u r really lucky yeh last cupcake hai yeh aapko mil gae

An thinks-aaj hi kya raha hai har jagah last he cupcake anyway mujhe kya

An took her cupcake n said-thanku

A happy angel was holding her cupcake like a showpiece n was coming out of shop when she bumped to a guy of her age

Both fell down...angel was looking at her hurt hand when her eyes goes on something n that was her"spoiled cupcake"...

Anger grows inside angel n our little sweet angel turn into valcano

An-hey you dekh kar nai chal sakte the

Boy-look I m sorry wo...

An(cutting him)-kya wo wo...tumhare wajah se mera last cupcake gir gaya tum dekh kar nai chal sakte the...andhe ho kya

Boy-hey ek cupcake he toh tha dosra le lo

An-god tum andhe hone k saath saath behre bhi ho kya...sunna nai wo "last" cupcake tha

Boy-ok look I m sorry to say but u r behaving like a stupid ok just calm down ok it was just a cupcake

An-shutup yeh attitude kisse aur ko dikhana n mind u it was not just a cupcake n tum

The boy looks at her n thinks god kya ladki hai par jab gusse mai hote hai toh uske choti se naak ek dum lal ho jate hai kitne cute lagte hai n he smiles

An saw him smiling

An-isme smile karne k kya baat hai

Boy-toh aur kya karo tumhare liyeh cupcake banao kya

An(irritated with his attitude)-tum na...ahhh bhaad mai jao...saying this she start leaving

Boy-hey miss cupcake apna naam toh batate jao

An-go to hell u "looser"

Boy-f9 then mai tumhe cupcake bolonga chalega na cupcake

An-tum looser he rahoge...

An leaves from there...here a super tensed yash finally saw angel coming in anger

Yash-oye kaha chale gae thi tu bola tha na k kahi bhi mat jana

Angel looks at him n starts crying making yash more shocked n tensed

Yash-hey hey hey kya hua angel ro kyu rahe hai...kisine kuch kaha kya...

Angel nods in no

Yash-angel idhar dekh mujhe dekh..(angel saw him) kya hua beta batana apne bhaiyu ko

An(while crying)-wo usne usne...

Yash-kisne??? Kya kiya hua kya

An-cupcake

Yash-kya???

An-us ladke k wajah se mera last cupcake gir gaya bhaiyu

Yash rolled his eyes n said-god angel tune dara diya mujhe...ek cupcake he toh tha chal mai tujhe dosre shop se khilata ho

Removing his sister's tears n smiling on her stupidity n innocenecy yash took her to a shop where she finally had her cupcake

MEANWHILE IN REYAM ACADMY

Reyam were doing some work n making an important presentation in rey's cabin when they heard a knock

Rey-come in

Someone open door

Reyam-arre vihaan tu yaha

Vih-hello uncle

Sw-hello beta aaj yaha kaise...vicky aur neha toh dosre branch mai gae hai(they work together in reyam acadmy)

Vihaan-uncle mai aap dono se kuch khehne aaya ho

Rey-kya baat hai beta itne serious kyu ho

Sw-infact tension mai lag rahe ho kya hua hai beta

Vih-uncle mujhe angel k baare mai kuch baat karne hai

Rey-ha beta bolo na

Vih-uncle wo actually mujhe lagta hai k angel ka accident nai uspe attack hua hai

Reyam-what!!!

Sw-vihaan beta tum yeh kya kheh rahe ho

Vih-uncle wo car angel ko purposely maarna chahti thi..uncle safe nai hai

Rey-matlab koi angel ko maarna chahata hai

Sw-par beta tum itne sure kaise ho

Vihaan told them everything how the car was waiting n suddenly took speed n all

Sw-par koi angel ko nuksaan kyu dega wo toh bas 15 saal k bachi hai..uski kisse kya dusmani

Vih-pata nai uncle ...par mujhe us car ka no yaad hai...mai wapas aa kar ek page mai likh liya tha yeh lijeh

Sw-beta yeh bohot acha kiya tumne

Vih-thanku uncle...uncle plz angel ko mat batana k maine aapko bata diya hai wo aap logo ko tension nai dena chahati thi par mujhe yeh matter itna chota nai laga isiliyeh aap dono ko bata diya

Rey-ha beta tum fikar mat karo angel ko kuch pata nai chalega...mai is no ko police ko de deta ho...pata toh chale k kiske himmat ho gae reyansh shinghania k beti ko haath lagane k

Sw-seriously kon hai wo aur chahata kya hai angel se

Voice-angel nai rey se...all turn n saw vicky

Rey-vicky tu yaha

Vic-ha mai tujhse milne aa raha tha jab maine vihaan ko dekha...maine sab sun liya hai...rey mujhe lagta hai k angel k through tujhe target karna chah rahe hai

Rey-par mere beti kyu

Sw-nai rey shayad vicky sahi hai...dekh tu bhi janta hai humara jaan angel mai basi hai...dekh wo taani ko nuksaan nai kar sakta as sab jante hai k tu hamesha uske saath hota hai par angel akele hote hai

Vicky-aur tu angel se itna pyaar karta hai yeh bhi pata hai toh ho sakta hai k angel ko hurt karke who tujhe hurt karna chahate hai

Rey(in anger)-yeh joh bhi hai bohot galat kiya hai..ek baar ko mai is insaan ko maaf kar bhi deta agar baat sirf mere hoti par ab baat mere family k hai...meri beti k hai...jisne bhi yeh kiya hai usse toh aisa sabak shikhaonga k zindgi bhar yaad rakhega...aur bhool nai paega k reyansh shinghania aakhir hai kon...

Sw-guys koi bhi yeh baat taani..neha..sh...yash aur adi ko nai bataega yeh baat sirf hamare beech mai rahege...rey kal adi ka match hai tu normal rahena hum sab uska match dekhene jaenge aur is matter ka pata bhi side by side lagate rahenge...angel ko kuch nai hoga hum hai saath mai

Precap-will reyam will be able to find who is after their beloved angel???...basketball match...n much more...n promise romance of swaron n taarey

NOTE-guys I m really sorry par mai kisike k bhi comment par reply nai kar paongi as mera net kafi slow chal raha hai mujhe yeh chapter update karne mai bhi bohot problem hue thi plz guys I m very sorry mujhe bohot bura lag raha hai

Plz don't stop commenting guys

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Posted: 11 years ago
Reserved.

Edited.

This was amazing Megha Dii 😃
had been waiting for this story since so long :3
and Vicky ka beta is so intelligent😆
update soon
Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum update di...Finally u updated...Was waiting for quiet longgg...Thnku so much for dis wonderful update...Love u di...
Edited by --Mrunmayee-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waited for tis updated so nice update loved it so much reyam nd shaani fight was so superb nd yash nd aarohi as CS nd ACS same like swayam nd sharon nd angel is so cute yr waiting for the mr.looser who is tat. update soon😊
Edited by poorni_vishali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWSOME UPDATE...😊
WAIYING FOR NXT PART UPDATE SOON...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
res 😛
will unres soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum part di
Reyam yash adi part was so funny
Naina n adi convo was so luvly..
Adi is jealous of raj...hehehe...
Feeling bad for naina..
Shanaya is soo sweet
Aarohi excitement...OMG
Angel n dat mystery boy part was so cute...
Vihaan is so intelligent yr..
Too gud updt di
Waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update.and plz update your stories...

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