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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai everyone,I m a new writter. i read so many ffs here.i wish to write one also.please forgive me for mistakes


PROLOGUE

This is a story of a girl who leave everything for her sisters happiness.
She is a ordinary girl who suffered extraordinary pain without any of her fault
destiny plays major role in her life,she meets her prince,
will he help her to overcome her pain

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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANK U


CHARACTOR SKETCH

Kushi Gupta: A ordinary girl who living only for her sisters.bubbly,matured,caring,do anything for her sisters happiness

Poorva Gupta: kushis blood sister,Kushis chutky

Payal Gupta: kushis friend,kushi and poorva shared her surname because some reasons

Arpitha Mehra : kushis best friend,Who knows her in and out.

Avni Mehra: Arpithas mother,and best Friend of Mythily(kushis mother by birth).A lady with mysterious life

Madumathy Guptha : Payals mother and avnis friend



they all live in Guptha house,they all shared a very good relationship.Avani is just like mother to kushi,poorva and Payal.kushi cal mathumaty as buaji

ASR:a well known business tyccon,arrogant,rich,a businessman in allerms,only weakness is family
Devayani Raizada: arnavs nani,loving nani and dadi to grand children,good mother,strict and caring mother in low
Anjali Jha: eldest in silblings,loving lady who worshipped husband as God
Shyam Jha: evil.married Anjali for money
Aryan: smallest in silblings,funny,flirty ,handsome,Medical student
Akash:mamas son,very caring person
abay:Akashs brother,Aryans age,very fuuny dont know hindi very much
mama mami:same as show

all live in Raizada mnsion.Arnav is CO of AR,Everyone feared his anger

Edited by rithu300 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1

Its raining outside,Delhi is getting cold day by day. Kushi watching rain throuh her window,r u ok kush,Arpitha called her friend, yes I m fine aaru,,,,,,Am i selfish aaru?kushi enquired her friend.
Arpitha just looked her eyes,No u r not ,Dont think about it ok,kuch chees boolne tho acha he.
kush jiji (payal) he, Arpitha asked. I dont know aaru aaj kal jiji thoda ajeeb se behave kar raha he patha nahi bath kya ha.aaru deedhi ,bachavo...poorva is runing like a mad women.
buaji is behind her,
buaji: badmash ye thumne kya kiya ,buaji asked to poorva

kushi: kya hua buaji aap is tharah kyom bagthy ho?

buaji: sankadevi she is reading my letter

aaru: aapki letter,who writes u letter buaji

avani:chutki bas ,bahuth hogaya eisa thumari phuphaji ka letter math pado beti,avani said in teasing vioce

poorva:nahi badi ma agar buaji ko letter chahiye tho meri sharth mana he

buaji:kaisa sharth?

poorva: kal mere sath hospital ajayegi,or u take all the chek up.promise me

avani: bas madhu ye tho achi bath he

buaji:teek he,abi letter vapas de tho

avani: bath katham chutki javo apne kamare mein javo,gudkn8 aaru gudkn8 kushi

kushi:gud kn8 badi maa


aaru: kushi come,let us sleep.

kushi:gud kn8 aaru




Next early morning kushi and aaru get ready for their office,both of them working in same company.they are graduates in finance,they are working in malhothra designs.payal working as a teacher in international school,poorva is a medical student.
when aaru and kushi reached their office there is a commotion inside their office,
what happend rishi kushi asked their desk partner

rishi: u know kushi Malhothra design is take overd by AR designs

kushi: what ,but achanak,kushi asked

rishi: i dont know ,Raj sir is inside the cabin ,he is meeting with ASR s PA

wat happend to our job kushi asked to rishi

dont worry beta,nothing happend to your job,Raj malhothra answered her doubts

kushi turned back,she so their boss RAJ MALHOTHRA STANDING BESIDE A YOUNG MAN

RAJ:this is Aman ,manger of ASR,he introduced all of them to Aman

Aman:dont worry,u r job is still safe,u have to sign a contract with AR,if u want to quit u can,aman concluded his speech

kushi and aaru desided to continue with their job with others


but both of them does not know today onwards their life is going to turn 360 degree...



Edited by rithu300 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2

Poorva is asisting her senior dr in op,she is final year medical student.Its going to be lunch break soon,what will she do,'poorva ' her friend keerthy call her from her thought.come on yar,lets have our lunch,I m hungry.no u go,Poorva denied her friend request . come on poorva,I know u r hungry,u denied becos Aryan is waiting there for u,poorva just noded her head.Ye ladka muje pagal karegi kithni bar I turn down his proposal,he is stil behind me.poorva muttered herself.come on yar,dont look him,
i m so much hungry,keerthi pouted her lips. ok poorva said

Its an hour Aryan,lets go his friend Jerry lost all his patience.no u can go,whatever happened today i will hear a yes from her.he repled back.Jerry just nodded his head.he know nothing can change his descision,he is admanant just like his brother. She is coming,jerry alerted.
Aryan saw her walking towards the canteen ,the lunch time is going to finish soon only 3 or 4 people inside the canteen,it is the right time.
poorva and keerthu sittind in table far from aryan,they take their lunch box and began to eat
Aryan comes there and sit beside poorva,wont u share u r food with me?he asked to poorva.
Aryan please,leave us,I m not in a mood to argue with u.poorva replied.ok dont argue,I need only a yes,poorva,he said ina flirty tone.
kithni bar keh chuki hum,dont disturb me,I m only for my studies,I hav no feelings for u,please,she said in polite tone.
kyom,I asking u poorva,muje kya kami he tum bar bar turn down my proposal.
kami tuje nahi muje he,we are middle cass people,u r from a richest family,u r famil have no problem,if u r study or not,but my family have,pls its my request leave me otherwise..poorva just stoped there,she feared Aryans anger,she know he gets anger soon,she gets upfrom her seat.Aryan gets whatever he wants in life,this is the firstime ,his anger reached its peak today ,not soon poorva ,he hold her hand .leave my hand aryan,u r misbehaving,she said .not yet aryan pinned her between him and table.poorvas eyes teard up,she feared this proxmity,past memories are coming to her mind,no,dont do his me,leave me ...diii,she screamed. Aryan does not understand what was happening,poorva crying and murmering something,he just looked her eyes,its holding utmost fear...no...she is screaming within minutes she paasout in his hands.
next momnt he heared his cell ringing,bai calling...

Arnav singh Raizada was sitting in his cabin going thrugh an important file.on that time his moble ringing di calling,ha di he take his mobile.did Aryan call u,she asked him,not not yet di,,why,what happened.he asked,nothing chote,he tells me he will come home for lunch,but not come yet.she said.Did u try his number.he asked,yes but he is not taking any call,u call him chote and tell him I m waiting for him and if he comes in an hour,i will tell all his secret to nani.What secret di came a question,oops! anjali tongue tied,nothing chote u just cal him.anjali cut the cal.
u and u r ladla,unbelievable arnav muttered and dialed aryan s number,second ring aryan takes the call.Where the hell u aryan ,di is waiting for u? baiii,,,,,a long silence he answered,arnav alerted something wrong,what happened aryan ,r u ok? bai I he was stammering,speak up dammit ,arnav shouted.Jerry take the phone from aryan hand, ASR I m jerry ,he is not well ,before jerry completed he heared i m coming and cut the call.Jerry looked aryan helplessly.

kushi was working in her cubicle,her hone ring,unknown no,she take the call,kushi dii its keerthana poorva passed out dii come to the hospital soon,she said in on breadth,kushi lost her hold on mobile,aman and rishi discussing something they saw kushi,miss gupta what happened,aman asked.
sir I need to go,my sister is not well,she said regaining her composure.Who is not well kush Arpitha asked from their back.aaru poorva paasout in the hospital she said. What, is she ok?she asked.I dont know aaru keerthi just call me kushi said.Come lets go,sir we are taking leave afternoon onwards arpitha said to aman and ran behind kushi without waiting for amans reply.Aman just looked their back,

keerti was waiting kushi infront of icu .What happened keerthi ,what happened to chutki,kushi asked in one breath.Dii she just passed out drs just cheking her keerthu replied.Just pass out,what happened keerthi ?arpitha raised her voice.keerthy knows kushi and arpitha from the time poorva joined the college,she knows its very difficult for them because they love poorva very much.

vo I will said the truth aryan said.kushi looked him .he told them what happened in the canteen.kushis eyes became wide,did u try to ,further words not coming from their mouth. I m sorry,aryan said just then dr come outside.poorvas parents he asked,I m her sister kushi said. She is ok now,she is just feared some past events in her life,if anythinng happened similar that ,her body cant control.its ok now take care,now she is fine .dr said

kushi just closed her eyes,drs words ringing in her ears.he opened her eyes and just looked aryan
why,why u cant understand, she told u 100 times ,leave her alone,now look what happened.
u r such a spoilt brat,playing with a girls life is nothing new to u,...Excuse me they all heared a powerful voice from back.Aryan gulped in fear baiii...excuse me what did u said now.he is spoilt brat he questioned kushi. Bai Aryan try to tell something,not a word anymore aryan.he warned his brother. or tum,kya kaha thumne my brother is responsible for u r sisters condition,thumari ithni himmath arnav singh raizada ki brother ko doshi kahne ka,kushi and arpitha froze in their spot,arpitha held kushis hand tightly,arnav singh raizada standing infront of them.kushi composed herself,mister whoever u r please tell ur brother to leave my sister alone.dont come to our life,make him understand hamari duniya choti he,there u r brother have no place.please its a request.Arnav looked the tiny figure back answering him,uski ithni himath,aryan come with me he said holding aryans hand with a smirk.

arnav was driving his car very fast.aryan looked the angry figure of brother.bai galathy meri di.shut up he cant complete his sentence.he dialed a number,Aman I need .details of what her name aryan he asked.
poorva guptha aryan answered,poorva guptha and his sister,arnav cut he call.Aryan closed his eyes,he know his brothers anger,he was sure now poorva is never giong to be his.



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PART 3
SHANTHIVAN-RAIZADA MANSION

Anjali,nani and mami sitting and enjoing their evening tea.nani ye chote or munna ,they are alike always.deko abi bi ghar nahi ayi,na koyi kabar na phone call,ane do.anjali said in her anger.relax anjali bitiya vo ayegi.mami said.just they heared calling bell.Hariprakash deko kon he darvase par,anjali shouted.
Hariprakash opened the door,anjali didi arnav baiya he.hariprakash answered.
Aane do anjali muttered

arnav and aryan come inside the house.aryan was lost in his thoughts. Hello hai bye bye kya huva munna tum ek dum chup rahe ho,mami asked aryan coming out of the thougths.dii mein fresh karke athi hum,he runned towards his room,mein bi arnav also escape from there.three ladies looked themselves.something wrong anjali said.

Aryan does not come outside the room till dinner.Anjali now in panic mode,,all of them in dining table
Arnav come there and sit in his chair.Aryan kaha he di he asked to his sister.he is not come outside the room from evening chote,she answerd.hariprkash jao jakar aryan ko bulavo,he said.chote bath kya he?anjali asked .not now di after the dinner he said.Aryan comes there and sit beside Arnav.
Everyone know something wrong with brothers.


guptha house poorva is discharged in the evening.she is resting her room.buaji and badima with her.kushi is sitting her room,aaru is beside her,they said all things to buaji and badima except ASR.aaru i m feared i cant lose chutki,kushi said.no kush nothing happend to her,hum usko kuch nahi hone doonga.why aaru,why that night is still behind her kushi asked.buljavo kushi dont think about it.We have another problem kushi ,what we will do him/aaru asked.whom aru payal asked from door.kushi closed her eyes,she know they have to tell.Aryan is arnav singh raizadas brother,kushi said.payal freezed in her spot.no one opened their mouth for some time.
Why that raizada brothers are behind our back,payal muttered furiously.kya huva jiji,kushi asked.kuch nahi ye bath badimaa aur ma ko math kahna.tut jayegi vo payal said.
bus its 12 now tum dono so javo,we can face everything together.payal said and leave to her room.

Shanthivan

after the dinner every one is sitting in the launch,now would u tell me whats going on here,anjali asked in fake anger.Aryan lifted his head and looked his bai.he is not listening anything furiously typing something in his phone.
di...taking some courage he called anjali,di galathy meri di.mein vo nahi karna chahtha tha lekin ek bar phir she turn down my proposal,aryan said.anjali now understand something,she saw her elder brother gazing her an angrylook ,ka galathy munna kiske bare mein bath karthi hum aap.nani asked
Aryan said everythng to nani, I m sorry nani, i dont know it will happened like that,muje nahi patha tha.he is in the verge of crying.exactly mein bi tume ye patha da ,it was unfortunate arnav said.
ap aise kaise bol sakthe,tume patha na patha ismein koi farak nahi padtha,agar use kuch ho jatha tho?anjali asked in anger.di relax now she is safe,akash said.ha di lekin nannav ne teek nahi kiya uski siter ke sath abi said.Its arnav abi ,and shut up now .arnav said.
chote tumara gussa abi par math nikalna,he is said the truth.
truth ya false aryan today onwards u r not going to think abut her,now discussion over.with that he went to his room
aryan sit beside nani,kya huva bituva nani askd ?
I love her nani,I cant forget her Aryan said
kya kaha tumne munna u love her anjali asked excitedly
Ha di u heared him right,but kya karum,akkdu hitler nahi manthy abi said in one flow.
Abi akash called his brother,bai ko vo nam se math pukarna,he scolded
chod akash bai now think what next,abi said looking his di
dont worry aryan agar tumare love sach he tho hum tumare saath he mama said
aryan eyes brighted,par bai he asked
chote ko chodtho,hum he na dur math nani promised
bus ab so javo,baki sab kal nani ,mama mami go to their room

aisa nahi munna,muje saari details batha do,anjali said
kaisi details di,aryan asked innocently
munna batavo tume kaisa pyar hogaya ,kaisa patha chla u r in love akash asked
kyom akash ap kyom jana chahthi ho pyar ke bare mein anjali asked teasingly
nothing di,i just akash escaped from there

in Arnavs room

arnav studiying the file in his hands,so her name is kushi guptha,let the game begin ms gupta he said himself.tomorrow i wiil show u who i m.
Why ASR ,why u want to take revenge,his heart asked.she is insultng my brother our parvarish mind answered,it is escaping its just for satisfiying u r ego heart said no mind said
arnav think about kushi,her tear stained face her braided bal aur ankein its held so much pain,what the tum us mamuly ladki ke bare mein sochthy hum he said himself,no never ASR even think abut that girl he closed his eyes to get some sleep.no he cant he frustrated himself.

Edited by rithu300 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4
One week after that incident.kushi gazed the stars sitting infront of her home,why ma, papa
why us,everything happened in past week come to her mind,where is she now? and that rakshas behind her to make her life more hell.she didnt noticed her badima was looking her past ten minitues.

Avani sit beside kushi, u r looking lost kushi,she asked.kushi come out of her thoughts, nahi badi maa
she replied. dont lie kushi,I know u r disturbed ,

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